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I'd put my money on Montreal too. --> Though Saku Koivu, my hero now plays in Anahaim Ducks

This reminded me of my friend Jenni. She lives her life just like that and I admire her ability to do so. My heart yerns the same, but I'm too limited to my premises. This poem spoke to me immediately, I was able to reflect my own life with it. Thank you, 'The Fool' made me think about my choices.

I could not believe my self when I started to read this story. It was like pure bliss from the start. Such a hurrah moment for me. I was hooked all the way. This was my very first Dom's story that I read. And I read on, and on, and on. Untill in two weeks there was nothing left.

I love the start. The arrogance and the vanity and the "swagger" of Clive... **sigh** Am I an idiot to think he is sexy even if he is sorta silly and a bad boy. I just see he has not learned a thing in his life yet. Teach him good, will you! Thank you Jian. You rock my world with your stories so keep doing what you are doing! This is the first story ever written to me (and yes I did ask for it) and might be the last one too (I hope it wont) but it will always have a special place in my heart.

Cute new look babe!

I work around the stories or poems all the time, so when the time is sceduled to write I usually already burts with enthusiasm. Lately I have been tiny bit blocked with my story's epilogue, then again I seem to be creating a poem after poem. And I find that process deeply satisfying though I know nothing of poetry.

The mystery deepens. Travis is careful for a reason, yet I can see Tyler opening up. So cute, nude camping Well not cute, red neck manly. Hehe. I liked this chapter. I want more and I want it now. Any deals possible?

Mr. Reeds owns a book store! A dream job! And how old is Charlie excactly? He must look really young Really liked the interaction between guys. And the hospital surroundings just fit perfectly to make an awkward introduction. I'm looking forward on Charlie pondering about his dilemma.

Thank you everyone! Due to some weird divine intervention (?) I have managed to get rid of SmartScreen, which is apparently some kind of tool brought in with windowslive. All the heating problems, Microsoft Office problems etc. are now gone. I think it was too effective in blocking files and stuff (very hightech interperation)... Do you have ny idea if the SmartScreen can cause these kinds of troubles? I did the diagnosis myself so I'm likely wrong. Now I'm following your instructions to prevent the overheating.

I love you. Yes I do

Please, I need help! My lappy is only 6 months ols and it has recently started to over heat, actually so much that it leaves burn marks on my thights if I dont use a pillow under it. Is my lappy doomed? Should I take it to get check up? Is the hardrive in danger (I'm making back up copies all the time to my gmail account)? What could cause the problem and is there anyway to solve by myself?

Your daughter is an adult who seems really cool and is on her way to a really great future. However, living under mum's roof cant turn anyone juvenile. I KNOW THAT FROM PERSONAL EXPERIENCE. There is rarely a middle ground there and if there is, thank the divine forces out there. MAybe it is time to make a new deal? Make your pint clear and give them time to discuss it over. Don't let them take control of your life. Make rules, don't let them bargain. When it is settled, there might be peace in the house - which I think might be a miracle. But it is possible and miracles do happen. Maybe it would be time to consider other options for all parties? And get some help for you! Housekeeping for everyone else doesn't seem fair by any measurement to me. Piegate sounded fun and you wrote it in a tone that made me smile, but the undertone was also a bit sad. I have my own issues with my own mum and that did sound familiar. There is a really good reason why I would never ever live with my mum again even if I love her to bits and I know she needs my help too. I'm there for her as the best I can, but I also have outside help for her. You need too look after yourself. And it is such a huge thing for you to offer them a roof over their heads that they must not forget it. It will work out, but be fair to everyone, especially yourself. And you are a great mum!

Burning hot! The biting and the animalistic sex, omy. Hot. And awwww.... Bashta's cute ears. That just made me smile. I love him. Now Bashta's first entering to the civilized world with human, cars, traffic, AIRPLANES (scary for anyone flying first time)... You really made it believable Cia. :)

When things get really really bad, I hide, shut the world out and pretend the bad stuff doesn't excist. Then I read. Sleep over it. Cry. In the moring things usually get better. These days I have friends to chat too so I feel they won't let me sulk that much.

Nephy, being different from most of the people around you is not what describes you best. In my eyes you are rare diamond, pure golden, just special. Never ever forget that! You really have every reason to hold your head up high and be broud of who you are and how you live your life. You are a good mum, amazing author, great friend to us, beautiful in my eyes. If you are worried for things outside, there are people who see the whole you. Your lover is gonna have to be just as special as you, you don't have to settle. As for how to find him/her, I really have no answers. As for the friends issue, I think the world has become smaller and friends that seem to be far away are closer than the ones we meet daily. I never ever thought I'd find you. I just adore you Neph.

Let us know how you proceed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You could answer with a song too **Curious**

J, tthis is my favourite chapter so far. I'm starting to really like this Tyler. poor guy, so confused. I don't wanna go into too much details here, but kissing him to... instead of ... was really a turn around point! I want more sooooooon! you are such a great writer.

Cute quickie shortie. Poor Kelly though Do you still write shorties? Would love a new one!

I'm 100% sure you will meet your lover. Just mark my words hun.

I wish So nice, I'm happy for you! It is always great to hear that someone cares, especially with such a special way.

Your poem danced with the dancer. Just beutiful.

Oh my God, Sam! This was just amazing, powerful and heartbreakingly beautiful. The oppostive feelings tangled together and the inevitable sorrow mixed with love and lust and hurting made this poem so bittersweet. **sigh**

Hello hun! I'm reading and I'm gonna be leaving a word or two everytime I'm back with your story I admire your love to write, it is a struggle if no one comments or leaves reviews etc. I wish I would have gotten to your story sooner. I won't be judging any typos or anything since I got loads of them myself. You can expect the feelings your writing ewokes in me, 'k? Here it goes. The starting was typical, nothing too stricking, BUT the chapter ending with a literal cliff was not! Though, it felt a little bit seperate from the story idea, but then again accidents do happen and lead things forward! Teen crush to the best friend, that always melts my heart. One of my favourite story themes. My favorite part in this story was just before the fall to the river, when Keith held Thomas from the back and almost kissed his neck - before getting a smack. Such a teaser! I'm looking forward to see how Thomas pulls out of his river and how the story starts to build up. You might want to give some thought to the words chosen, maybe avoid using the same word too many times in a chapter. But that is the kind of thing that can be pointed out with a beta reader-editor. Keep writing hun!

I hate labels too. They are so oppressive and never the whole truth. This felt familar to me. Too familar. Words have too much power to hurt us. Thank you for sharing this. Are you participating to the Spring pom anthology btw? I hope you are!

You are such a tease I some how new I would not have get it any better than I did. I went on a wild goose hunt then.