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Sign 10, No More Sex! is out now (sorry, no link) . Due to my lappy problems the formatting didn't come out quite right . Since this is affecting my writing and posting, I'm feeling some what down now. I hope to fix the issues soon. Let me know what you think about the chappy, it was a struggle in many ways...

I'm not saying one is better than the other. It really depends on the story. I try out all kinds of pov choices, but I tend to stick with one type with each story. I write intuitively, I don't make hard decisions on what is the best solution. the story starts to build in my mind in a certain way and then it just comes out. I need more dicipline and practice and planning - I'm working on that

OMG You promised me a lifelong satisfaction AND a poem per day to keep me happy... we have witnesses That is not bullying Nah, thank you, lovely I must pay you back with a poem, when you least expect it...

I agree 100% Under that happy-go-lucky storyteller, you are a deep thinker, a philosopher, my friend.

Gongrats Sam :hug: Well deserved!

I'm kinda hoping that you'll continue this mystery

Life is a bitch. I hate hearing that you are hurting and what ever you do either makes the pain worse or affects negatively on some other aspect of your life. My mum's health has gone from bad to worse in past five years and she has given up. You must not give up! Please! There must be something to make it better. Or at least make the pain tolerable but still have a life you can enjoy the fullest.

I liked the visuals I got from this story And that you gave the models pover over the system

My kind of story It was so curious to read about the writing and authorship and sharing the stories with someone special. Just You are amazing! Might want to change the story status into complete though, since I think there was a defintie "The End"... Am I right?

This is an interesting mix of harsh realism and a dreamy fantasy. I love that this story speaks to me in so many levels. I remember exactly how it felt to sleep next to the person I was going to walk out on. You couldn't have descriped it better than me. Wow.

Dom and Com my dream team, but there deffo are other great authors here. Many many good stories to read!

A lot said about friendships in general and in a personal way. I could relate to this poem. There was something in it this that forbid me to smile too widely and knowingly, a serious subtext.

I know hun, there is no other Dom... but, I could recommend you try stories by Viv, Quonus10, VLista, Anyta Sunday and Kingdom by the Sea and Jian Sierra and Carl DaVinci. To start with

I read it all with one sitting And My conclusion is... I want next chapter soon!!!!! I hate the visit is coming to an end for David, maybe they will work some kind of plan to be together. I'm a devoted reader, hun. Just keep adding chapters!

I'm a walking talking catastrophe too... things happen around me, mostly by my actions. This is something that happes every now and then and has stopped being embarrassing after the first few times, these days I just laugh it off. here's few examples what has happened during my work hours: I noticed in the middle of my yoga class (I'm the teacher) that I have my top upside down. Once I was instructing a pt client at gym and he said something funny and I couldn't stop giggling for half an hour (lucky he didn't mind). The more i tried, the harder I laught. I fell asleep in my yoga class at the end relaxation - and snored. the list is endless...

Poor Billy, his troubles seem the serious kind. I hope David will be able to help him. I like his mum too, she seems to even the balance somehow in the story. I hope the Daddy dearest isn't that bad as he seems to me right now. You have a cool writing style, plunt and a matter of fact type. I like it a lot. And I like to have two pov's. It makes the reader aware of both boy's situation and feel for them both.

Very good start, I like the country setting and I can already see all kinds of troubles in the horizon.

Reading is good! It calms me down from my hype. Gotta try that Indiana Summer soon. You are not the only one to recommend it! I can't believe you still get so much written! You better write as much as you can before the baby comes She might slow you down some... in a good way of course!

Double rev, sorry, I also wanted to say, as sitting in a plane and flying it brought me a nice analogy with mind flying as well. Did you think about that? The ending made me almost cry. I love this piece sooo much! Sorry I use the l-word

Frosty, you know I liked this the first time I read it It is different and I like it. It made perfect sense to me nd I want more!

Thanx Phana! I'm really happy if it made you smile some I giggled when I wrote it

This was touching and beautiful. I think it is very possible to dream wide awake - I do that. Lovely lovely poem!

Jian This was such a cute story, made me smile I think we need a seguel for Sean. You are such a strong romance writer, this was another prove of it!

It took a while to Alex to figure it finally out... he was slow with Sean too. Tsk tsk, I want to hear more about Sean too... maybe a short story for him...? WOuld make me happy. I really enjoyed this, kinda knowing the truth from the start and seeing Alex "suffer" was fun Also I wanted t know what really happened. You did well, my twin! Ps. This was also very educational about the hazards of over-drinking

I have to say this was easy read compared to Holy day, not a better one but easier. After Holy Day I felt I had run a marathon, after School day I came from a swim. I could keep track with what was happening, but also the mumbled voices echoing but not quite reaching me yet under surface made it a curious read. So thank you! I can’t wait for the next story. I love Kismet. He is so precious! The scene where he gave the word to word –message to Taloric and was unaware that he actually offered himself to the Alien still makes me giggle. Faith-luck-chance; that is something you can play with, totally. I love the whole idea, it made me really think. It can be expanded to the whole series me thinks… With the three brothers and all… As Tal said in the end, it is gonna be a real ride to get all the brothers back together again… Now, that is gonna happen, right?