Marzipan
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Thank you for sharing. I hope you won't have to go life without him.
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Hey Sid! This was an intense introduction to the starting point as well as the lead characters. First you brought in Gust and his dilemma, then Luke, the central character and finally Noah, the catalysist. I think Bad Romance has asuch an interesting start that I'm continuing gladly Language used has some exotic tone in it, that I can't quite put my finger on. But I love it, it flows beautifully.
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Huh, that was an intense start with this chapter! Poor guy, he's troubles go way beyond low selfesteem. What brought him to the hospital few months ago? Plot thickens... And the final part of this chappy, at the sea, where HAze was having a moment with himself, and then gaught by Blake, well.. "it is ok to love nature" - just as ok it is man to love another man. That was how it felt to me the the currancy of thoughts by Blake. Or am I just imagining?
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Thank you thank you thank you Cia! This story is now in my top 5! What an epilogue! I read it twice .
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Same as Nephy said Oh... Sadness, this is coming to an end
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**Shudder** That was pure torture to me to imagine Velaku being really bitten and all wrapped in pain and fear. How did Natham manage to save him? kk, I'll readon - the answer is right around the corner I bet.
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Finally some retribution, the venegance was depicted so beautifully, almost like a bloody dance! I'm falling for this bird in his pray mood even more!
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Grrr... Need I say more? Oh ok then, the ending of the chapter was sweet. The connection between the bonded felt so touching after all the horror. **I don't want the little birdie to be eaten either**
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Soooo noooot cooool. Just when you flash the good thing you snap it right out of reach. **pouts** Ok, I'll read along, but there is going to be some serious loving ahead after this drama. I really like these boys and it is just annoying to go to the action mood in the middle of a blossoming romance. Gnah.
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Oh gosh... Natham's claiming... that was hot. I love cat's purring. One of the best things in this world is to have a cat curl up in your lap and purr.
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Awww... Natham, my favourite Lynx. How on earth is this going to work out for the boys? Such respomsibilities and hard experiences at their young age. But they are heroes and they can liv up to the expectations. And they have eachother, right?
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Chapter 2 - After the rain
Marzipan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 2 - After the rain
So, enter Mr dark coat I like the flow of your words. Nothing seems rushed and the way you presented Charlies family history and some of his childhood background was woven in nicely. Really easy read and I'm waiting for more. -
I agree with you 100%
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Name your favourite gay movie. What did you like best about it?
Marzipan replied to Yuki Winchestor's topic in The Lounge
Sorta good way, but also kinda creepy. I still can remember it! -
Gotta say, I love the respect that you show your friends with this answer. They can be broud of you hon!
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Hello! Nice to meet ya! Welcome to the colorful GA bunch!
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Name your favourite gay movie. What did you like best about it?
Marzipan replied to Yuki Winchestor's topic in The Lounge
Shelter was good, but the music behind it just kept going in my head afterwards. -
Darn J... I got lots of other qualities you might love but... shopping is a big no-no for me. **cries her eyes out, wants to be J's official GA hag** Oh, I'm only 4 posts away to make that my "title"
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Issue of fag hags is something that has been laughed and discussed lately in the chatroom (link to wikipedia). What is your opinnion on female frieds if you are a gay man? Or do you see yourself a hag if you are a female friend of a gay man? Is that ridiculed or loving term if you use it? Is it a clishee that gay men get well along with women? I have one close gay friend, but I don't think myself as his hag... Just normal friend.
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I have a massive crush on Nephylim's Silver! There now it is out. Now I can breath again.
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Andrej Pejic, gosh I adore him. I know he gets a lot of shit cause his looks from the female models who see him as serious competition. He models female lines too. I don't even wanna go there, how much he gets bad comments in general. I hope the good in his life overun all the negative. I have a customer, a really sweet, beautiful 16 year old boy. When I first saw him I thought he was a girl, even his handwriting is feminine. I just want to hug and protect him too. I hope he will not be facing hatred beacause of his androgyny appearances.
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Chapter 1 - Charlies Night
Marzipan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Charlies Night
Hello! I liked the start. You made me wanna protect this whimp of a guy. I love nerds, that is no secret, so Charlie seemed interesting enough to wanna hug him allright. I'll be reading on as you post! Post soon! -
Distracted It is kinda personal to write about sex. For me it is at least. It's not like I'm having sex in the pages but still it feels intimate. Strangely I like to keep it that way. I don't wanna write meaningless scenes in my story. If it moves me then, fine.
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I'm reading a series that has a lot of adult material. And can't complain even with sex being a major thing in plotwise. At the same time, I'm reading a story from the same author that is serious tendences and is not so much sex driven (has sexual scenes too). Happy with that too. Conclution: I love reading well written adult content if it has somethig interesting to present. This author hasn't failed me down yet. Yet, I have read a few stories from other authors lately, that made me jump over sex scenes . I have become picky!
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I'd be scared too. Be a friend to him for a while. Take your time and don't rush it. Maybe he will show it more clearly if he wants more too. Or you'll come up with more courage. Or you'll see that you don't want more than being friends. Just remember, which ever way it goes, you'll be fine, hon. :hugs:
