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I would love to get straight forward criticism and see the weak points in my stories since I really am a forever learning writer, I started wrtiting only 6 minths ago so I'm grateful to get constructive fb. Even if I write with great passion and enthusiasm, I don't take it too seriously. Unless the crit is intended to be hurtful or belitteling I'm HAPPY to get it

Chapter 5, rapids in the Heart is out now It took a bit longer than before... Two-three more chapters to go and then it is finished!

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**sigh** That was beautiful beyond anything. Knowing you wrote it with your heart made me almost cry. Happy one month anniversary guys! I think you two will have a wonderful future together.

That was erotic. Wows. Kissing can be so much more than a full deal.

I'm so happy to hear you have settled in well! Anything you're gonna write and post I'm gonna be reading I hope you'll get back to the writing pace you feel suits you! This sneak peek sounds interesting, and different from your previous works. So... get on with it already

This will not last forever. You will get to live your life the way you want. Focus on that. I'm sorry for your family to failing to see what an amazing person you are.

Thank you Bee for another honest poem. It made me think again. What is wrong with people!

**Does a happy dance for reading your story last night** Jian, babes, this was very very honest piece. All I'm gonna say. Ok, I'm also gonna say that you pictured out so well the family drama, realistic reaction of John's dad; Harvey's action got explained etc. Bottom line is I'm happy John found love and courage to get out of his shell and be proud of himself and Michael. :)

Looks beautiful, the new skin I mean

Not likely? haha... I'm drugged and overly relaxed just as I speak, so that would make me an easy victim Lucky that there are no Bellas around

Nope, not offended Maybe the story just wasn't that good. Too bad you didn't get your money's worth. I have read some really good m/m stories here and other sites written by female authors, some of them identify themselves straight. So, I'd say it is not about the author's gender or sexuality that makes the story good or bad. If you find it a turn off to read m/m stories from straight (?) female authors, well... that is your pov on the matter. You might be surprised with the high quality of stories I could recommend for you in this site. You could even pick your favourite genre. But if you are not even interested... Have good and joyful reads, there are suberb gay male authors here as well (I almost forgot, since for me the gender of author isn't an issue)!

uh no... I saw this coming, this Bella lady is deffinitely insane. One of my biggest new fears is to be drugged and used after this story Neph!

Hi

LOL Vic.... sounds like you got a new running buddy at least Just don't send him any drunken messages

Happy Birthday :D

I just read what ever is interesting to me. I follow many stories in process, but at the moment I have put even some of my personal favorites on hold to help me focus better on the actual reading. I have found it hard to follow too many stories at once. I do this "step back" every couple months then the reading frenzy spirals back on

Balance is the key word. Find the kind of balance in your llife between duties and personal happiess that gives you challenge and satisfaction. If all you do is be a busy bee all the time then you might miss the little special things that you enjoy. Also, failing is learning too It just teaches you things from a different perspective. You got so much going on make clear what your priorities are and focus on the big picture. What else... hmmm. You are going to places in your life! I just know so

Sigh. What happens next? Is there maybe something more happening with Darius soon than there has been with Alec...? You can hold the plot exciting! Not revealing anything too soon. I love guessing while reading

There are some seriously juicy charaters in your story! I'm enjoying the read so much. This cracked me up: "the gaydar of a goat" lol I'm wondering what you are gonna deliver here... it is not gonna be a typical high school romance is it?

Oh shit what you just revealed about Jayden's background. And uh... Bella she is scaryer when she is sympathetic. I'm interested in the police detective to... How will he fit in with this story...?

That was an interesting start! The writing was flowing and I got imediately hooked with Nick's view on things. I wanna learn more, what is the deal with his mum, and how will things progress with Alec... **reads on**

Mikie, I this was a good short story! I liked that everything happened in one apartment, like a set on stage. The home enviroment still brought the world in to it. There was the big world (Oscars) and the everyday world (work, clients) in it still. I read Anthony to be more frustrated at his mate for not seeing how wnderful and gifted he was, how Mattie hide from his own dreams. We got to know he actually had done roles in school plays etc, but what it came down to he didn't feel he was enough for a leading role. No matter how tempting and fitting the role was. Maybe this was just an example of the self doubts that Anthony witnessed by his side? You made me hold my breath for the decision, was Mattie gonna take the role or not and what would happen to the relationship... Mikie, summer antho is close... What do you say

I teach fitness boxing but I'm not that familiar with the terminology in english

I wanted to be so many things. When I was about 5: My first dream was to be a mounted police when I was a kid. Well... we have about 10 of those in Finland. At age 15: I wanted to be an artist, I have always loved to paint and draw. I don't think that dream never went away, but it is hard to make living with it, so reality kicked in. In my early twenties: Then I got this silly idea that I wanted to be an archeologist. Hello! I'm scared to death by spiders! I studied just about anything in uni for a mega degree. This happened when I turned 25: Then I got sidetracked and started my own business in a fast food businenss (lol), that made me unhappy to my core. I turned 30: I sold my business and ended up being a yoga techer and a personal trainer and an assistant manager at a fitness/yoga studio where I used to practice for years. Now I'm dreaming of moving out of Finland and starting my own yoga studio somewhere in the next 5 years. I'm taking baby steps towards that dream, but I'm gonna find a place where I want to land my roots in near future. Who says one can't dream and work towads the set goals even when you grow up?