Marzipan
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I love Kismet. Even the name is perfect. Reminds me of the chocolate. I think schoold day brought much more light to the previous It Was A -stories, but also left me with new questions... Magitha and Val???? What is this huge conspiricy behind everything? Or is there one? The Faith-Chance-Luck-concept made me actually ponder... as an idea that is so interesting. You can play with that, totally... I'm a big fan of the series And you know it.
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So much killing :-O Not really my favourite genre, but I enjoyed this piece. The first part of the story was like a start of a longer one, but I was amazed how you wrapped it up into a short story with a great idea behind it. I was lost with the fire balls and the battle, it happens to me if I'm reading something that needs investment from me and a shorty rarely manage to make me study them with a scrutinizing eye. Not bad at all.
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haha. I had an author friend visiting me for two weeks from the other side of the world. Hmmm. We practicly did nothing but write. That was like being with a soul sista. What can I say, reading this chappy just brought it all into my mind. I miss her.
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I only know about other peoples' crushes (like a lot ). I don't ever crush on anyone.
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1. What are the first 2 items on your store list? The things that you absolutely MUST get the next time you go to the store? 2. What’s the last nice thing you did for someone else? 3. What is your quirkiest habit that makes other people crazy? 1. Meat and coffee 2. I pushed my friends twin baby carriage for 2 hours while we were on a therapy walk in heat today (she was tired) 3. I things where ever and forget where I put them
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zeppelin
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gypsy
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Chapter 9, 'The Parents' Visit Day' is not the only thing that is out...
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Same comment. An order the way you did it works since they are families in marriage, but the comparing the relations inside the families is harder when thay are in diff chapters here. I think lists so far didn't miss anyone.
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You should have put them in a family order, that would have been nice Well, I'm sure this will help peeps out too, much more than reading without the list. Now they have to do some individual thinking OMG XD
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Do you know that I know you know? :wacko:
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This is a good addition to help readers follow the story as it grows bigger and bigger Too bad I have already drawn a familytree and gallery of the characters Darn o_O
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The start was quite a shocker. I snickered how you made sex sound mundane, almost a duty and pleasant (when Chris made an effort) at the same time for Eli. So he is "thrilled" about his bf, but obviously that is some form of self deceit. I liked how you told about the flow of writing Eli got. Just saying Crush can make you write. Really good start. Ps. Poor Eli, he needs some serious cuddling
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I'm writing a transgender story too. Reading yours made me happy so happy. There really is much much more demand for these stories too.
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After the rocky start Ross finally found his place. I'm happy. This story made me happy.
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I could tell that this story came from your heart. It felt so raw. In a best possible way. One of the best stories I have read in a long time, stands out shining.
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Thank you so much for sharing this story. **reads**
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Yes! Yes! I think Rosalyn is marvelous! Poor thing. Despite the horrible and unfortunate things happening to her, she is a trooper. I can't stop reading, there is going to be something good happening in future, right... This story makes me happy, so far everything in the the way you tell her story is easy flowing and the characters seem so real. Looking through Rosalyn's innocent yet sometimes suffering eyes is a trip much more deep than I expected. **reads**
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OMG. This is a strong start. The end left me with shivers. I'm looking forward for the rest of the Rosalyn's story.
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Awww.... Stu Happy writings! I'm gonna be reading it too. Lately I've been on writing gear I'm afraid and that meand less time for reading.
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Oh wow. That was a touching story. Maybe the other broter's heart just broke when his companion in life died? I could never crasp the unique relationship between twins. I'm an only child so understanding basic sibling relationships are not my speciality either.
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NEXT
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napkin
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grr... Double review here: you did so well I just want Clive and Phil together. Ps. If you arque, you force me to leave my first trible review
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You built up the tension so well! I just hoped that you wouldn't have brought in that third wheel. Sucks I never do that haha... Looking forward for the next chapter
