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  1. Marzipan

    The Prophesy

    Prophecy/prophesy, was on purpose, right. After that I just got lost and fast. I read it three times, and still I was lost. My bad. I really really would have loved to get it.
  2. What about Wilma I always have liked that name. Congrats for your new puppy! Give her a hug from me
  3. Harsh way to figure out one is uninteresting. Alone in heaven.
  4. Marzipan

    Chapter 17

    I got myself a headache too, you are THAT good. Luv how brave Coop is, I just hope he would let Mich take care of him. And Mich's shiner!!!!!!!!!!?
  5. Hello! Welcome to the colorful bunch! I don't have English as my first language either yet I continue to throw my words out there! So... Looking forward on what you got!
  6. Slap? What kind of dates have you been on?
  7. There is nothing better than a kiss if there is a connection. *sigh* But... if not, don't do it! You'll just know.
  8. Happy Birthday Douw!!!!!!!
  9. Keep blogging - I'm reading Thank you for sharing your experiences, big or small.
  10. Marzipan

    Chapter 16

    Awww. Cute. Carnivals are so much fun, but also scary... I'm scared of rollercoasters, yet I ride them. Their first publick kiss, hmmm-mmm-mmm-mmm. What do you mean hurtful? No hurting unless it is the pleasure pain Nah, I love the pacing in this story again. I can't wait to hear what you have planned for us. This is going to be agony for me from now on. I'm begging down on my knees for more!
  11. Marzipan

    Chapter 15

    So I was right about Vern. She is adorable and a good friend to both of the boys. Mich really put himself out and it backfired with Vern showing up. I hope he got over the embarrassement 'cause it was super hot to make a bold move like that towards Coop. I like this Mich here, really. Your boys are perfect for each other. This was one of my favourite chapters so far. Jian... Only one chapter left, I'm the one sad now, I need more, fast, please... **goes to read**
  12. Marzipan

    Chapter 14

    Huh... I though for minute in the start of the chapters that the boys had done something else than their homework You tease! How much does Vern know about Coop's history with Luke? I want more of Vern in this story! She seems like a treasure But not when the boys are getting hot'n heavy! Coop is so coy, hehe. Love him. **holding on to a mental image of Mich in his red underwear**
  13. Marzipan

    Chapter 13

    I'm so glad this is not the end More questions need to be answered and this is just the beginning. I need more Coop and Mich! I had no idea that Coop had had an experience like that in his past. He was so shocked earlier when he started to take notice of Mih. He had complitely shut down his past I recon. He had walked away from his first love because of his sister. Are those unresolved issues towards the little sis and Luke going to be adressed later? That'll be dramatic for sure... Is that one of the reasons he is studying away from hometown? I love that Coop and Mich are sharing, also showing us Mich's sensitive side was good. You did that in a subtle way with the holding hands through Coop's story. I think it was a perfect first date. They are getting so close. **reads on**
  14. I drive a bicycle and crash it every time possible.
  15. Marzipan

    Story

    I have no words. Huh. Something to say more than wow. Ok, this was what you promised, a rollercoaster ride. I was in for the full ride and still got the air knocked off of my lungs. This was much more than I expected. Josh story, his parents' story all wrapped together was both encouraging and so sad. We never ever get to know when the ride ends. I just think that Josh did know all the things his dad never got to say. And he lived on making his mum broud and with loving and respectful memory of his dad. Thank you so much for this story. This was definitely one of the most stopping ones I have read in GA.
  16. What movie? I wannna know!
  17. Marzipan

    Anticipation

    Ohh... A true story behind this... What happened next? I like how much boldness you have to do such a thing. About the poem, the anticipation and the exitement was really there. It felt real. Thank you for sharing!
  18. Marzipan

    Chapter 12

    I feel there is a change in this story after the chapter where Coop and Mich got together in the pool. Was there are long period in between writing these chapters at some point? I'm not saying it is any worse, nothing like that, but something has changed and I'm trying to put my finger on it. Maybe slow down a notch and give more room to Cooper's inner world? That was the thing that made me crazy with adoration towards Coop in the first place, I love Coop's special inner world! Mich's actions towards Coop get more explanation now that his traumatic past with losing his parents is revealed. I'm really happy though that he has the best Grandpa ever who supports him.
  19. Accidents happen - literally! Charlie got now something and someone else to worry about. Ok, I feel I'm ready for our hero and Charlie to meet, really meet now. Since this chapter was almost a fill in one, yet served it's purpose and was paced with care and no rush, I'm interested to hear about the lenght of this stroy. We are not looking for a short one, right?
  20. Marzipan

    Chapter 11

    Way to go Grandpa! And Hugs for Mich... Omy, you have made my morning and my night and likely tomorrow morning as well... I need to go to sleep now. I just want to say... I love this story! It is perfect. I just don't want the posted chapters to end and then wait for new ones How often do you post them? Weekly? Girl can hope
  21. Marzipan

    Chapter 10

    That Grandpa better approve... I get the feeling there is still much and much to be resolved. I like that Mich is not affraid, even if he is confused. Would he have made a move if Coop hadn't been forward about his feelings? The circling around the questions and answers was cute and believable, though a little bit sudden for me still. Thank you!
  22. Marzipan

    Chapter 9

    I wanna hear Mich's answer too! Lucky for me I don't have to wait Swimming lessons - trusting lessons. Jian! I can't believe how much I'm smiling reading this, my cheeks actually hurt right now for smiling for hours in a row.
  23. Marzipan

    Chapter 8

    Date!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jaiks! Wow! Didn't see that one coming. I was anticipating a long and agonising confrontation, but this was short and surprising. Can't stay long now here to comment more, must read on!
  24. Marzipan

    Chapter 7

    Oh poor Coop. Wonder what went through Vern's mind when she heard that Mich was the one taking care of Coop. I just bet she had some suspicions or sorts all along that the boys were both gay. Since she is wise gal, I say Coop is a speed eater **moves on**
  25. Marzipan

    Chapter 6

    Oh dear... what is wrong with Coop? Nothing serious hope? Lucky to have Mich there. The laundry thing... I squirmed with Coop there, gods how awkward... hehehe... Coop's inner speech is such enjoyment to follow.
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