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Something about the start reminded me of Harry Potter! I can't believe I have jumped over this story. I absolutely loved the twist in it. I loved the lightness in it too! And poor Sissy, you made her so technically skilled, that I was blinking at first... way to go girl! Then it turns out ha, she was a boy. I thought when he ordered the new 'real boy android' exteriors Cinder had gotten faulty ones since you didn't describe them more. I liked the androids too. My favorite thing in this story was the gender confusion. You made the original fairy tale modern and dressed both the Prince Charming and Cinderella in totally different dresses. I giggled at the outfit Teddy had to wear in the Ball. Anything that studies the borders of gender is so interesting, and you didn't do this with too much seriousness, it fit well this particular story. Really enjoyable work. I wish you would write MORE of these light toned stories too since you obviously have skills to do them.

No other comments but *sigh*. That was beautiful.

**drools** I have waited for this for months now. **kicks Twin's butt to write faster**

Hello Nop! Welcome to the bunch! If you need any assistance just holla me Whatcha been reading?

Awww. Such an emotional chapter. Thank you for the music too. I listened them at the side while reading.

Are you the father of my unborn child?

Good for you hun. **rubs Neph's back**

I'm giddy happy for you guys. both.

Sweet Angie... Will she be enough in the end that you painted in the prologue? What exactly does she know about Andy's and Matt's relationship? Is she that intuitive? How accepting can she be...? Looots of questions.

Small significant things happening in this chapter. Andy starting to come more and more aware of his hidden sexuality. Sigh. I'm curious what happens in Matt's end. And I'm starting to be scared to continue reading since the prologue set out not a happy lane to Matt. Many big questions lead this story forward, a 'must read on' story.

Horny bugger. Is he developing hots for this Cole-guy too? **rolls eyes** I'm enjoying the balance you keep with the intensity of teenage hormones and deeper connection between Matt and Andy.

Wow! That was intense! Raw and masculine. Things left unspoken but still message moving between the boys... I like.

Awww... Sorry to hear that. At least you'll wake up if something is out of the ordinary is happening during your sleep. My ex was like that. I chose to sleep downstairs willingly just to avoid fights about keeping him awake. Even if I was in the next room, he could get pissed about me turning pages of a book. Grr... Sorry... I bet he couldn't help it. I'm a sound sleeper. A bomb could explode next to me and I wouldn't wake up. Only things that startle me awake are alarm clock and cell phone and someone shaking me. Or a cat vomiting. For some reason I always wake up for that sound. I don't wake up when I sleep walk or talk. Apparently I do both. I get sleep easily. Every time we go road tripping with a car or travel by train etc. I fall asleep in minutes if someone isn't keeping me company.

**giggles** Nice B-day present for Andy But I still liked Matt's better. Fun chapter.

oh... Andy is starting to recognize something in him. I liked how you brought it out. Not just best bud feelings for Matt developing into something sexual, but also the red haired boy in the locker rooms stirred Andy's attention making this story heaps more realistic. I have not read many bi-stories in this site, I'm happy to have found yours

Well, Andy is the king now, thanx to Stacy ADD? Does that explain his lack of self control and screwed up self-defense behavior? Interesting. I like Matt wanting to keep him closer.

Oh, poor Andy First love, first time sex, bittersweet summer romance... Sigh. You described it so well.

Since I don't know yet what Mystery is about, I go with the safe choice! Would loooove to read them both, naturally. Why do we have to choose, BTW? I don't really care about the order as long as we get them both and many many many more!

This is to my gal Sara: Once there was a wonderful author named Kingdom, she managed to get a taste of stardom, a fan here and there, no enemies anywhere, since she was so sweet to us all and soon to be LukaDom! With adoration Maria

What do you say about a sequel now...? I love Brishen. I might draw him soon, he is soooo strongly in my mind!

Hihihihi... I think my signature is sexy too! Now the ultimate reason for starting this thread is coming clear... And I totally agree with you Cailen on the rest of the post too!

If I say I find how someone's brain works sexy, for me that does not yet qualify as romantic interest I do hope you'll find a whole package!

Ok, I can see Dark's point. Sometimes those can't be parted like said above. Personally I wasn't talking about ideal mates. Things, not only people, can be sexy, moods can be sexy, thoughts can be sexy. I'm throwing out some examples too.

An older woman **snickers** soo cute. Yup, a gal17 is much older than a boy 14 I feel Stacy wasn't as innocent as she looked out to be in Andy's eyes. Another well written chapter!

OMG. I gotta love Andy's logic, haha. Pandora's box is open for good, I'd say. This is so well written and you carry the story on with ease and make me smile with funny lines here and there.