Marzipan
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That hit me. Hard. With just few words a whole story in my mind.
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Try shutting it down and taking the battery out for a while then restart. I don't know if that helps any. I have had same troubles in the past with my previous lappy, and it worked then.
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HaPppY BiRthDaY JWoFL Have a good one babes! And save us some cake
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Shattered Moon, Broken Rose
Marzipan commented on S.L. Lewis's story chapter in Shattered Moon, Broken Rose
Made my chest ache, it was so perfect. -
My favourite of the three This came closer to me and was easy to relate. The Dorian Gray part was amazing.
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New York, I'm Going...
Marzipan commented on TIMOTHYtimothy's story chapter in New York, I'm Going...
WOW. This was breathtaking! A love poem to New York. You made it sound such a living lover. Breathing, pulsing and hot. Images flashing and mixing together in a combination that can only be NY. -
I liked the links between nightmarish images and the indications to the happenings in real life. At least I assume that the police officers kissing and controverce around it was something that I have read in papers - not sure . Well. It was quite hard to read for me though. It was maybe too clever for me.
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To Bob - It is not? How do I make it easier then? I think it is something that everyone experiences differently. I don't dwell on it 24/7 but it does hurt when I really allow myself to think about it.
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**Demands more poems from Comsie** They made me smile, so that can not be bad.
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Hmmm... I have been told this A LOT lately. You can't choose who you have feelings for. Just try to figure out what it is that you excactly want. This could be an indicator that you are not in the relationship with the right person. Or it could mean that you just spice up your life with daydreaming. I'm not the best advisor though. I let go of a ten year relationship since it just didn't make me feel complite and I was constantly wanting something else. The amount of unhappines I had been hiding inside came clear only after separation. Now I'm happy - mostly. I still have unrequited feelings and that is just a bitch to live with.
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Ditto. And that is beautiful what you said about the never ending love to your wife. Yoy'll find new love too one day Bleu.
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This was just super cute start. Big C and Big... hmm Hero made me smile from the starts just as you promised. I wonder what Andy was saying in his rev? You are planning to make changes to the start or? Oh well, I enjoyed this so much!
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Welcome Pabz and every newbie in the thread that I have yet to wlcome. Have fun and just poke me if you need any help or a friendly face
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Errr... They are men or boys at least, right?
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Darn stubborn guys. If they were women, theyd be fighting with words all night long and then have really good make up -sex. Oh well. They are men. Sad, I broke my heart too.
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Did I just write down Lisa... meant Tina. OMG I have been reading way too much lately. Sorry for this double review also Hmmm... well... I liked Charlie with his kids too and the music in the background. Was that the special Adele song you had been talking earlier?
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Chapter 6 - The Music Knew the End
Marzipan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 6 - The Music Knew the End
So Charlie makes some relevations of himself. Really good. Now who is gonna go and look for the other, Charlie or mr. Blue Eyes? Setting Lisa free is something I can relate to. Been there and done that with my ex bf for likely the same reasons now coming to surface with Charlie. I am so looking forward for more. I thing this pace, slow and melancholic is perfect for this story, so if someone says speed it up, don't listen. Well that is my opinnion. -
With some blunt, almost funny lines inside this was still a tender and sensitive poem. Really beautifuly written Jian.
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Thank you for sharing this personal moment of your life. Wise words from such a young boy.
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We all have shadows of past lives. Some stronger and some whisper only in the weakest voice. They should be listened. Thank you for sharing Jian.
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Sheherazade The beautiful and wise Indian storyteller who could talk all night long
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I'm speachless. I hope you could have had this discussion earlier. I think I'll be begging for more poems from you now! Please!
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Shape-Shifter (my Anthem)
Marzipan commented on oneinillinois's story chapter in Shape-Shifter (my Anthem)
Ooooohhhh gooossshhhh. This is my river of thought also. I loved this! -
**sigh** I think I have been there too. Brought back memories from January 2009, when My eyes opened. Thank you for sharing.
