Philippe

I’ve actually done a good number of these type comments. I was encouraged to start a poetry collection to not lose them as they are not indexed or saved separate from the story comments currently. This one I believe to be the first ever, with some becoming more frequent these days. Thanks for your encouraging comment.

Jett-ed to collect, as muscle of the mob, Opening the door to wonder April fools or job? A Huntsman for a Summer, with a debt to pay, Installment of principal, for care of Jay. From Mining Crypto to researchIng a fever, April and Jett, will prove a believer. It’s hard to describe, beyond Theo-retical, Zane-y enough to become hysterical! A baby of blood? Or, just magic to bond, Our Two young lovers, with love for beyond.

Dr Seuss doesn’t live here, his words grew silent, Rough are the times, no more words from this giant. Original like no other, indeed he was, Yet, his words and style, they do still buzz. Gone perhaps, are the simpler times, But who can resist, his learning rhymes. It’s exciting to learn, timeless to recall, Voices speak, his words taught us all. A Rainbow of words and colors unbound, New words learned by color and sound. Education by phonics like Green Eggs and Ham, What of Horton and Who, Excited I am! Who indeed can not smile as they read or recall the magic of the whimsical author that touched so many; to: Dr Theodor Seuss Geisel, 1904-1991, RIP. https://gayauthors.org/author/philippe/

The dreaded hospital walk, Be it for news or life goal talk. Sought for presence, by father, but not dad, Knowing mother’s illness, is not the only bad. Father shows promise, though far too late, Mother begs for feedback, of her life of hate. Family debts settled, misdeeds and love lost, Short is the victory, as romance is good, but it has costs. Favorite spot journey, sets erotic desires burning, Will the magic of teens, grow into adult yearning? STOP, No touching, Alec! For a talk we need, With new confidence, a smile for the blond, yes indeed! https://gayauthors.org/author/philippe/

These are just shared words of rhythm and rhymes; submitted on GA as a collection; chapters with independent themes, often as comments to other authors’ stories. Please read any referenced stories for proper context and understanding; hopefully you’ll find the source stories as interesting and enjoyable as I do.

Laundry day again…piss on that!

It’s hard to put into words how much I’ve enjoyed your stories. I guess I’ve kinda been making book reports in installments! Haha 😛

Wow, while I play with the authors words and stories, it is humbling to realize that my word play brings thoughts and smiles; thanks for the kind words.

Goodness, where is the blush emoji? Thank you for saying so, I’m so glad they seem to bring a smile and always hope they do the story justice.

Like a moth to flame, Alec to Finn, Why is he here, he doesn’t want this again. Must tell this to Finn, but Milo has phone, All his courage, and will, not to run home. A quaint warm home, why here for Finn’s phone? Knock on the door, brings little blond stare, Surprise alights, You have blue hair! Invited to witness, warmth of a home, Milo, Nina, Gracie too, where has time gone. Gracie Blood of Finn, Nina shames Milo for tease, Your welcome to dinner, homemade pizza please. Thoughts of Finn’s blood and a family brings pride, They we’re just kids, but why did he hide. Finds Finn drooling, relaxed and so young, Defaults to stroke hair, awakens Finn before done. Relives the past, jumps to have Fin, Moans and groans, they’re at it again. These feelings and emotions, deny the years, They are as they were, this moment without fears. Gracie has ears, so Milo cries fowl, Reality sets in, Alec runs with his scowl. River brings counsel, tells Alec to try it, Alec the adult, can’t argue, just buy it. Will his courage still hold, facing the old, Dad wants mom visit, Alec seems sold. https://gayauthors.org/author/philippe/

Sunshine Ray, having a cloudy day, Drowning in cereal, until taken away. Eggs by Jonathan, is a better way, But he has butterflies that want to stay. Registration by Hanna endorses her boi, Call JJ a washboard, but don’t be coy. Save the animals, Hanna does implore, Wants you to strut, with the Fab Four. In notion and practice, all seems fine, But for Jonathan’s turn, Maddox says MINE! Dowsed with water, to fashion in kind, Blocking the scenery, but witness my find. Fragile emotions with undertones of burn, Stepping up in public, respect, the BF did earn. Quick exit for shower, comfort, concern, Jonathan and Maddox put doubts astern. Passion abounds, without constraints or preps, Great for bonding, but too soon, for reps. Now JJ is happy and Ray has the creds, Voting gives confidence and Ray has peps. Jonathan has doubts, road trip, no back out, Maddox needs coaching to join the team, Jonathan thinks Maddox but macho dream. Dex knows solution for Maddog…bottom, As his two dads have easily taught him. Nothing remains but a little hard driving, Then start the road trip to get them thriving.

Well thank you, @astone2292. Goodness no, not that many stories get poems. It’s mostly just yours, @Laura S. Fox and @Demiurgestories that somehow makes me think in terms of twists and riddles, mystery and rhythm, comedy and rhyme; just all depends on the mood and any inspiration I get…and whatever concentration I can muster! 😝 As I’ve expressed in another comment on GA previously, any poems are just a reflection or interpretation, my perceptions of your stories. It can’t help but have a little of my humor, wonder and excitement for what your stories mean to my twisted mind. I believe it started with @Laura S. FoxBe The Father of This Child and perhaps some within Spark and Stone. Then maybe a few with @Demiurgein the Light Dancing in the Dark series, among others. I haven’t collected a list or separate posting for any of these comment poems…sorry. Thanks again in appreciation of my simple little word ditties; it’s all in fun.

A North American Summit brings lessons anew, Supernatural egos and arrogance askew. Dirk in absentia, brings his mentor so much pride, Caleb dilemma, a dad-in-Law, to take in stride. Owensville Alphas, challenge words, Mason to motion, Young Alpha Mage Mate human, stops verbal commotion. Ultimate challenge, fight beyond spar, not land or life, Enforcer conflict, for Alpha honor or for wife. Cyrus and Marlo, formal day from Dias and floor, But for first challenge Cyrus has bubbly demeanor. Burning stares, Alpha to Alpha, Leopard and Mage, Caleb stops spar, Enforcer Barbeau advice be Sage. Time to stop Alpha Leopard-in-Law shenanigans, For Tasha, Lowe, the best Alphas and his new home lands.

These are not the droids you’re looking for…

Oh @Demiurge, this is a therapeutic chapter in my mind. Alec is acting with confidence…at least more confidence for Alec, and Finn is even more prepared for the complexities known as Alec; and his ~1700 mile problem! 😝 So yes, I see this as a positive chapter for the boys…BUT WHY ARE WE STILL ON THE WEE LITTLE TIKE OF A GIRL CLIFFHANGER? 👿

The extra bad news was that it was a court order reversing the school ordered expulsion; so the school did right by expelling the repeat offenders, following their earlier suspension.

‘Tis true for Essell, but remember the Kardoval recognize his bond with Garjah; and to Bouncer too. We have yet to learn what the consequences of a separation of a bonded pair would bring, but it was hinted as to being of significance, and perhaps even that is not fully understood due to the unique DNA morphing of Essell and the changes to BOTH. And then there is Bouncer, which shares his parental imprint and family clan bonding with both Garjah and Essell. His sentience remains veiled but is possibly more complicated as witnessed in chambers with the Galactic Council. I believe we may see some really surprising events in the next few storyline days, as I believe @Ciaalways has surprising twists hidden within the storyline just waiting to wow us!

Rum cake? I can’t believe I ate the whole thing!

Hear ye, hear ye, please gather ye round, Xpress knows secrets no other has found. With full anonymity we do expound, Now Hanna Milton news does abound. She is with Franklin, officially, Hamilton roommate we all can see. Dorm departure with MADDOX KINGSLEY, King romance cover, obviously! A secret crush with Hanna revealed, Ray is the host and three is the deal! Cloak of respectable pushed aside, With Hamilton two foot from bedside. We say two and two makes three with pride, Therefore Maddox Kingsley must be bi! Jonathan be a heartthrob to most, This gentleman of honor we toast. Kissing Kingsley after morning post, Protect madame Hanna with a boast. With the prior history, nothing like having Jonathan run to you publicly and ask for a kiss 💋. Regardless the underlying intent this was a milestone for Jonathan. I expect the stand asses to have comments but I expect John may very well fine more support and understanding now that it’s out in the open while he has the two roommate clans to help. @Laura S. Fox, another wonderful and exciting chapter to reflect the rollercoaster known a life, ❤️ it!

Oh wow, you remembered better than I did, but YES it was inspired by the ups and downs reflected in the emotions of not one but two beautiful young hearts. Somehow that joy, the hurt, the apprehension, and that little bundle that nanny April was using his vast internet experience to care for! Omg hahaha YES! YES! YES!

No harm, no foul. It’s a compliment that you appreciate the delivery of my comments. I believe they first started with a joking summary of one of @Laura S. Fox‘s stories in progress. Sometimes, not always, it just feels easier to summarize the story/chapter reflecting my interpretation of spirit, characters and theme. Hopefully my interpretations don’t ever distract from the impact intended by the authors nor dampen comments by others. Thanks for your compliments, they are appreciated.

Caught indeed. Within many states in the US this could easily be beyond school discipline as the kidnapping and conspiracy speak of higher crimes even through remaining on school grounds. These boys could also be headed for legal troubles from Dechen’s Aunt/parents as well as the son/nephew of the local lawyer. They may be juveniles but they could well be headed for another “boarding school” with less freedoms, simple uniforms, …stripped inspections and cavity searches.

What a traumatic experience for young Dechen, and Giles too. Young scheming minds just don’t stop to think of the true consequences to their victims or themselves as they selfishly come up with these ideas. In my last year of high school, we had the school marching band gathering in the parking lot for inspection and warmups; prior to loading on buses taking us to the football stadium for our Friday night game. As drum major I was very much involved and helped coordinate between the director and the members. I believe jealousy lead to a hoax emergency phone call via the front entrance area pay phone (before the days of cell phones), with an student messenger staged to alert me to the call. The caller then informed me excitedly of a family emergency and the need to quickly return home, as he was a distant neighbor to our family home. I informed the director and was off in a dash, rather surprising my mom when I showed up excitedly worried with what’s going on…what happened! I rushed, too quickly and picking up a police car following, as I returned to my school and duties having realizing the hoax. I was still in time, foiling their plans to remove me from my position in a very notable absence. The director, the general assembly, and our uniforms I believe helped in getting me a quick warning verses a public humiliation of ticketing me in front of, and delaying our formation. Needless to say I wasn’t focused that night but I did get past it. Unfortunately the anonymous phone messenger, the denying neighbor classmate, and the real perpetrators went unpunished, but from their prospective perhaps the police involvement was vague enough to have them all a little nervous too, as they didn’t know the full extent of mine and the directors conversation with the officer as I returned to school. Ahhh, the simple workings of young simple minds….sadly smh.

Perhaps he want some control, and then you promise a wild ride, so maybe a quick hard tug! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B005JEQIEE?ref_=cm_sw_r_cp_ud_dp_NF8YJ2HRSE3ZCY7SV1TH

Goodness, if Nic says “I know something about Meg that could help you get back at her,” then it must be truly juicy; as Nic has perspective that Meg would never understand. The question may be whether Jake is ready for the seatbelts required for this ride. After the house lands on the evil witch, Nic might get the ruby slippers too!