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Oh my goodness, the darkness is closing in and too close; so much so that my throat constricts and my eyes water just thinking about this. I ready do miss the other characters but readily admit the focus being on George to this point helps with feeling the sense of isolation and darkness that is enveloping George on what I hope is the cusp of rescue from himself; his own mind. @LittleCherryBlossom26, please don’t leave George, or us hanging on this cliff of the dark abyss.
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I love where lawyers practice “legalized” bullying and get called out. The maneuvers they use in subterfuge and financial extortion often through legal filings, delays mired in discovery of tangential distractions, and court proceedings designed to delay the core lawsuit while the decisions of allowing or disallowing those superfluous counter claims and their discovery to yet again delay the court hearings…argh. But then when their underhandedness finally gets them caught up in board review, they suddenly have a seminar or high priority case that requires their attention, causing them to reschedule their calendar and/or to have another lawyer cover proceedings until they’re back; in other words, even within the brotherhood they got sanctioned or disallowed court privileges until their penance is fulfilled; assuming less than disbarment of course. Hopefully the lawyer gets his just rewards and either the junior partner or paralegal comes clean to avoid their own sanctions. Hmmm…Perhaps the heavenly voice can whisper in their ear also. Hahaha 😝
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Hopefully George will come back to some sense of resuming his own life without Nathan. It’s so hard in the youthful years to understand just how much life has to offer you. I can only hope he doesn’t go out the deep end and try to join Nathan; that would hurt so many and deny others of a more compassionate and outstanding future doctor; once he can climb from the turbulent pit of depression he has thrown himself into. I to miss Karl and look forward to catching up on his progress, achievements, and whether he has received any news from his occupied homeland and family. There are still many dark events and times for all to bear.
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By being her attorney, they must work through him, not her. Therefore, all the time and efforts in facilitating and accommodating Ann Marie’s living are billable. It may not be a thank you but he can likewise extract a little reasonably good pay for all that are impacted, BEFORE, that escrow account will be released. Whether in cash deposits, bonds, or deeds, Ann Marie will not hold any until the billing is debited from such holdings. Ann Marie losses much power to abuse or misuse them when her licensed attorney is the broker by judicial law; unless she fires him, which could risk the lawsuit too.
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Chapter 26: A Lovers’ Quarrel
Philippe commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 26: A Lovers’ Quarrel
My my my, this is more confirmation than a reveal. Yet it does make subtle hints and promises that deserve evaluation and weighing. It is a very difficult position for Dani to be in, yet there too Dani appears to use his gifts even at rest, maybe more so. Dani seems too be slowly uncovering facts, marrying past and present, that are leading to truths; truths that are true reveals as opposed to revisionary history too often told to fit a more convenient history for the ones telling it. Vinicius does appear to have been a remarkable psychic. The gifts Dani has are the result of a long planned and specifically tailored set of tools that seem to help Dani arrive at an informed and balanced value system. Likewise, Dani can transform or return anything he knows he is facing; however, he remains alone within the Deadnus crowd and he has friends declared to the Vincient movement. It seems the birthday letter is a long awaited key to much of Dani’s questions; questions of what Vinicius was unable to say…before the 18th birthday, the day of his powers coming into full manifestation, perhaps a day of full enlightenment also. @C. Henderson, you continue to wrap mystery within mystery, wrapping past within present, and the historical supernatural within new generation designer supernaturals; wow 😮! Super job at creating new twists for mythical tales. -
Even with George in mental distress it’s hard to have sympathy for him while he is lashing out at another, somewhat innocent individual. Within the context of his mental anguish, I still feel sorry for George. He is living in a age of no tolerance for, a gay man, the sodomite; and to be declared as such may lead to quick persecution and/or extermination, depending on locale of such deviant behavior. Therefore, he can’t truly mourn nor take comfort from those whom would normally be able to give support during such a loss as they wouldn’t know or understand. Those societal pressures just multiply the number of mental stressors George is dealing with at this time of close, personal, and intimate loss. It’s an explosive scenario and the damages are yet to be accounted or revealed. So yes poor George, and anyone unprepared for his mental driven, explosive physical rages. So terribly sad 😢.
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Yes, probably from regret of ‘cheating’ on Nathan when still unable to accept his loss. Yet, the actions to find some grounding will now feel like even another layer of betrayal for trying to replace Nathan; as if trying to forget, irrational. Hmmm 🤨, on top of all his emotional baggage, he now has the more personal sexual identity issue of cheating his own heart, trying to live a lie, that is against everything he and Nathan had. With alcohol diluted rationalization, of what he his doing to himself mentality, but add to that the more common lack of planning for the stranger, hetero, hookup; in an age of uncommon birth control (with appearances being, without personal protection), and risking great shame for an unwed mother, or living a sexual misogynistic existence as a gay man. Hopefully, the soldier didn’t infiltrated enemy territory without protective gear; otherwise, he could be in a continuous state of regret, sexual frustration, and with unsettled mental issues from his youthful loss trauma.
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Sounds sorta like a multifunctional SUV; Donald SRT, good to have around.
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Porter Pizza, home of the fresh Goat Milk Cheese Pizza; a Climactic Cheese Experience from our farm to you. Employment opportunities for youth seeking the full experience and rewards of milking and culturing.
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Lmao 🤣 “Fuck fuckity fuck fuck fuck! He was so going to kill Rusty the first time he had the chance.“ With all the awkwardness of quenching a young men’s sexual and mating drive; how much seeking/allowing to find your own comfort and/or accepting ones own destiny often appears a blend of a potato sack race in a hopscotch relay. I agree with other comments that Rusty may have saved them both from ruining their chances at a growing relationship as Jonathan is reserved and Maddox is more of a honey bee; but now with a fatal attraction. So perhaps a little cold water from Rusty will help in the quenching and melding process of Madathan.
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Poor George; whether survivors guilt, the lost of a friend, or the loss of an undeclared/declared love, it is obviously more than George can accept at this point. With his shattered mind rational thought processes are not possible, but at least the depression didn’t lead him to a more aggressive self harm. His mental health will be difficult enough to recover, without adding self inflicted bodily harm; especially in an age with less understanding of mental depression, and many families are losing young men to war, the knowledge of a young man harming himself would seem unforgivable. Karl is somewhat confused; by his lack of full communication skills, by the growing bonds he has yet to recognize, and by new psychophysical symptoms he is now experiencing for the first time. This is a very new world and age for young Karl. Great job for these young men keeping their cools under pressure, in an emergency; especially when Karl recognized that the brute force attempt to open the door was not working, and that Paul may be injured if he continued to overpower that locked door. @LittleCherryBlossom26, please don’t keep us sidelined with this supporting character in a coma! 👿
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Difficult to write, difficult to read, but ultimately most difficult to experience it. @FrankD, you’re bringing us through the more difficult but more realistic and likely journey that many will face; too often it’s the tragic traffic accident with the police at the door approaching midnight. The tragic accident gives us the immediate shock and loss but this journey deals with choices that don’t allow for delays or indecision without a significant penalty for no reply; brutal but likewise it hasn’t opportunities for plans, new memories, and a chance for last words and farewells. I’m glad you’ve returned @FrankDand that you’re forging ahead with a real life journey that’s sure to pull a few tears in heartache and yet a few more in relief for continuity of a secure and loving support family.
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Poor George, it appears medicine is the correct field of study for him, as his luck… is NOT in the cards. 😝 Young Karl is not of book learning, but his brain is far from idled. Karl is becoming more engaged in his own life with each choice he is making; though obviously needing help, support, and guidance, he is gaining confidence to make choices when presented. Hopefully, Karl will soon start more intensive studies to gain reading and writing skills too. Ironically, he will become more literate with english language skills than was possible and expected in his native tongue. As the family becomes more engaged to help Karl attempt family contact, one can only hope that Karl will still have reason to hope for his family’s survival; as the harsh environment they may be facing with the confluence of German Naval Forces, supply lines, and movement security can be unforgiving, especially in war. Likewise, Karl is young, but rapidly approaching adulthood, …and the the age of service. Even as a foreigner, he is a defacto resident citizen of England. This in itself may present challenges too, as even if not on the national registry he will be open to scrutiny when young men of equal age are called into service unless specifically exempted with cause. I wish not but that Karl was just a little younger…
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The fecal oscillator is set for maximum dispersal should….sheep happen! These guards are untrained for anything fruitful and are more likely to back themselves or someone more dangerous than themselves into a corner…kinda like poking at a caged animal. It reminds me of the old joke…Did you hear what happened to that gal that backed into a guillotine….disaster. Even small movements in a hostile environment can be catastrophic.
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“His kind are predators, armed with claws, teeth, large ears and eyes. His skin is naturally armored. And he will not hesitate to act if we feel threatened.” I named him Bouncer, but as he is getting older perhaps I should call him Shredder; would you like to see me feed him? Geez, are these guys really soldiers or contracted security guards? Their chattering, lack of discipline, with little respect for a chain of command, does not bode well for predictability. These scientists are not prepared for first contact observation and communication; they threaten Essell with hostile actions, while having no patience to hear or understand the communications from the entity of questionable familiarity. Whether alien or familiar these actions, amid no hostility, are far from desired for first contact with aliens of unknown patience or tolerance for forceful challenges.
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All work and no play has George showing a stiff British manner. While the poor country child can show him how to dress down whether it be beach wear or a cards competitor. I love that the young Dane is starting to truly accept that he has a family for support but I’m hoping that as he now sees this situation to be more enduring he will be more able to return the relationship as more that a guest. Karl is doing amazing in an environment of different people, customs, and educations ; all while he is constrained by his language barriers. Likewise, Karl has mentioned getting family letters from siblings after their leaving the family nest, yet Karl has not yet found the confidence and understanding to send a letter to his family to establish some communications with them. Hopefully, the parents have survived the possible repercussions of Karl’s quick and secretive departure and that has not also blown back to affect the siblings possibly suspected of hiding Karl away. @LittleCherryBlossom26, so many thoughts and threads dangle from Karl’s lack of language skills in this new tongue, but increasingly now the foster parents/family need to guide Karl to build a foundation of understanding of his travels, home, and family; at least as he last knew it… Excellent transition chapter to Karl becoming more self aware of his new life, family, and relationships. I look forward to seeing his quickening acceptance and starting to build a new life and goals within this period of war and chaos; I’m sure his prior life and skills will also be more contributory in the trying times of rations and limited food supplies.
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Thank goodness Karl is safe, and agreed to return with the ass, named George. George somewhat apologizes to Karl, but Karl can not fully understand for what George apologizes, nor comprehend why George is still less than friendly towards him. But most importantly, George should be more honest with the family in confessing his guilt and make his apologies to all but especially Karl in the family setting; after all, it was a fright to all and required an all hands approach to locate Karl. For now, the guilt of Karl worrying the family by unexpectedly running away remains Karl’s alone, without the confession George needs to give them to unburden himself and the family in trying to understand Karl’s displeasure being in their home. George may not feel he can confess what disturbs him with full disclosure, but he can explain enough to give the general understanding the family deserves and Karl needs in his vulnerable situation. @LittleCherryBlossom26, you’re doing well as we manifest these emotions towards the characters you’ve give life to; congratulations and thank you for sharing.
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This is all happening because he is so distraught over the loss of his 25yo dog(s) that he just recently lost…
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Yes, a twist indeed. Mom hasn’t been the most warm, and even appeared to need more time to adjust and accept the boys’ relationship. Now we hear she is responsible for the the interior decorations…that already has a room set for Donald; has Donnie been busy whispering in mom’s dreams? 😝 Yeah, the vagueness of the letter, at least for the readers, makes the setup for the surprise less than desirable given the family history; as it ran the possibility of going horrible wrong for Stephen, luckily Tim headed that off by taking the wheel. @CLJobe, a nice curve ball delivery to hit a sweet spot landing!
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Goodness, I couldn’t help thinking of the Paul Simon song…You Can Call Me AL. Yup, the little brother, Randy, is quite a bonding element as the parents prove they are not in a rush to establish their empty nest. What a heartwarming experience for all but especially Randy as he has that security and love of his extended family. ❤️
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Yup, but it’s hard to remember your objective is to drain the swamp, when you’re up to your a$$ in alligators! 😝 Two Garjahs; four hand DNA? Or does their sensors not pick up on Garjah’s DNA and they only pick up / recognize Essell’s markings from Garjah being claimed? Bouncer is being extremely docile considering how entangled Essell’s emotions are; but then again, Essell is taking more logical steps vs his more typical loosing his shit.
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So sad, shuttered from his natural life and memories without the chance to grieve and say fair well; his grief is much as if freshly imposed by those losses long held at bay. The heart bond seems to be strong for Levi and Jin, now for the minds eye to open to what the heart feels and knows as true. oh my, what is Bastian gambling now? Hopefully, his game is strong and he remains lawful and ethically true.
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Why talk when sexual sign language and Braille are so powerful! Hahaha 🤣
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It seems more than just the young prince was hidden away these past 5 years. Hopefully, with the wounds and emotions of long ago refreshed, but with this present day understanding of nefarious acts, perhaps the good and true will unite in an alliance that will finally end this madness made normal
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Chapter 24: Trust No One
Philippe commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 24: Trust No One
For carving the fat lies(liars) and dissecting the morsels of hidden truths! It promises rave reviews for this tasty Brunswick stew recipe of supernatural suspense, and romance, you’re tossing in the stock of sacrum broth.
