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I am definitely in agreement with the first review. I'm amazed they expelled Cole. I'm also surprised Cole's father didn't go right to the media informing them of what happened. I would have. I'm glad Cole found a farm to work on and it clearly shows how much he loves working with horses. It'll be interesting to see how the boys' parents react to their living together. Great chapter Sasha, I hope it's not the end b/c the end of the chapter sounded like an ending. lol

'...before he pooped the head into his mouth' - this was hysterical and ewwwww. lol I think you meant 'popped' and not 'pooped'. hehe Terrific chapter Sasha, as always! Hated when you foreshadowed that everything is not just butterflies and chocolates. lol I'm hoping that Cole's parents don't come barging up the stairs. They may be ok with him being gay, but I am sure they don't want to see what that really means. lol Oh, maybe it's my poor memory, but for some reason I thought they were in Texas, or Cole was from Texas, or something that had Texas in it besides Cole being a cowboy. I bring this up only b/c if they are in the states, there are many, many British terms througout the story. 'Arse, ass', 'till, register', 'quid, money', 'sort out, figure it out', 'indicator, blinker', just to name a few. I was just confused is all, thinking they were in the states but seeing all the BE terms.

Good story so far wildbricks. I like Omar. I feel pretty badly for him and his mom. That's a rough life they have. His friends sound like a great bunch. The chapter does need work though. There are quite a few "sentences" that stop and a new "sentence" starts, but the second "sentence isn't a completed sentence. The first sentences were complete, so all you needed was a semi-colon in between the two thoughts, since they were directly related to each other. Then you could add a word that would make the second sentence a complete sentence. Or you could have had two complete sentences with periods after each one. Also...some of the tenses aren't consistent: prompted instead of promptly, that's the only one I can think of right now. I think that was it. Anyway, you should have someone look over it before you post it. Looking forward to chapter two. =)

Cole was so cute in the drugsore. But in all his online research, he never found out which condom goes with what lube? Tsk, tsk...so important. I'm glad the boys made up.

I love thw way Andy & Matt feel the same way about each other. I like your writing style; the dialogue flows and I like the description of their confusion and not knowing if how they feel is normal. Looking forward to more.

Yep welcome to the world of love. Sucks doesn't it? Lol Cole really needs to tamper down that temper. His brother's remark was very stupid & nasty, but that's no reason to beat him up. I hope Cole can make amends.w/Jared.

Terrific chapter Sasha! I love Cole's folks! They are wonderful and all parents should be like them. I also think Chase is great. His other two brothers, not so much. Lol Loved the pictures at the end. I think it's great that Cole is learning to sign. It definitely shows that Jared is important to him. Ok on to the next chapter

I really enjoyed the 1st chapter. The emotions are so clear w/Matt that I feel like I'm in love w/Andy too. Lol

"A Country Boy Can Survive", playin' Cash, Hank, Willie, and Waylon? Is that the Brantley Gilbert song you were talking about? As soon as I read that in your review response I thought of that song. Andy is the best friend everyone needs. He has such a tremendous heart. His dad should be so proud of him. Instead of spending his money on games & iTunes, he's helping out a kid who has no one. Terrific chapter Billy! Oh a kippah is spelled with an 'ah'. And Doc Collins has the same last name as Andy? Or did I read that wrong?

This was the only spot I could find that let me review/comment again. I hD no idea Meatloaf sung that song. I love him (esp the Bat Out of Hell) album. I wonder which one is the remake? I only know Celine Dion's version. Now I gotta Google it. Lol

Oh Lab I can't believe you left it like that! Lol. I can guess what Jason's going to say. Looking forward to the next chapter so we can learn more about Jason.

What a fantastic story Sasha! I'm so sorry to see it end. And Celine Dion's song was perfect for Maxie to play to Jesse. When that song first came out, my now twenty-one year old loved it so much we got the cassette (yes they did make them back in the day), and listened to it until the tape of the cassette was worn out. lol Terrific song. Ok, now I need to catch up on "Don't Shout". This is what happens when your computer craps out on you and you have to rely on your phone.

I think that Alec should get in contact with Maxie just to let him know that Jesse loves him and regrets what he did but he's trying to get better. Just so Maxie isn't thinking all these horrible thoughts. He should also tell him that it was Jesse's mom who tried to fill in the hole, not Jesse. Although he probably doesn't know that....but at least Maxie will be ablel to breathe a little easier. Oh, and I see now I can read Maxie's pov. lol

Omg, this was horrible. Where did Jesse go? How did he just disappear? He's not in school either? I was thinking that maybe he came clean with is mom and she found him a good therapist. Is he planning on feeling "better" before he faces Maxie again? Shit. Ok, on to Jesse's pov...

I also agree w/Prince; I think Michael is calling to set up a replacement ball game date. One where they can talk and not have to listen to loud crowds. Or maybe not talk..... Great chapter KC!

Funny how Cody and Justin caught up with Brice's thinking about the two of them, or I should say the three of them. It will be interesting to see how the night plays out. Oh Andrew, what's going on with "Lessons Learned"? It's been awhile...you didn't finish the series w/o me knowing about it, did you? lol

Wow, Jared and Joel - didn't see that one coming. lol Hope Cole doesn't find out about them. I like that Cole and Jared are 'talking'. It's a good start. Oh, and in the first chapter, Jared's sister was Katy, not Shelby.

Thank God Zoe's calling the cops. She's a terrific sister. She totally believes Nick (as she should), but I'm sure there are siblings out there who would believe their b/f or g/f before their brother or sister. So kudos to Zoe for believing Nick and for calling the cops to get his ass behind bars where he belongs. I would not want to be Dave now. Not only is Jason pissed that he "borrowed" his bike, but his dad's gonna flip a shit when he walks in that house. Not only is his son a "poof" but his son knocked him out cold. Of course he's gonna blame the whole "poof" thing on Nick, thinking that Nick corrupted his son. He's definitely going to forbid Dave to have anything to do with Nick. Looking forward to more fallout.

Terrific chapter Sasha! I loved the changing pov's; I think it added a lot to the chapter. I think for the first time that it was good that Maxie was the one on the bottom, but I think that Jesse would want to switch with Maxie next time just so the last person that was inside him wasn't his attacker. He wouldn't have to feel filthy anymore. I also loved the way they admitted their love for each other. That just made the whole night even more special.

Ah, Jake's dad shoulda gone for it! lol But I guess he was being the responsible parent. I'm a little surprised that Tony suggested it while he was still Jake's teacher. Hopefully they'll both be free in June. And did Jake's dad have a feeling he wouldn't be free in a few months? lol

Holy crap! Siggi and 'the bastard' are funny! Trading bj's in the bathroom, omg, I was cracking up! Their banter is hysterical! If Gunni agrees to go out with Dmitri, he's gonna be in way over his head. lol

Am I the only one who is totally shocked by Sarah's behavior? I don't know, to me it seemed so out of character. She always seemed so nice and generous with her time and her love and she was really there for Scott when he needed her. I think back to that and it's hard to believe that she's just a money-hungry, lying bitch. She begged Tom for a Porsche?????? Is she for real? I have NEVER asked anyone I was going out with for anything. Is she that materialistic? I feel really badly for Tom now, I can't believe this is the first break up he's ever gone through. How old is he? lol I'm so glad Zachy will have another set of grandparents now. (that was including Scott's) He really seemed to liven up Richard and Lydia's home. I'm looking foward to the custody hearing. Awesome job Fitz!

I love your new story Sasha! I look forward to seeing how this will all play out. Daithi is right, we don't know if Jared even signed those words that Katy told Cole. She could have made the whole thing up and Jared could have really signed something nice to Cole. I'm looking foward to the next chapter. =)

It's just amazing how we never see ourselves like others do. We are never looking in the same mirror that others do. Dan thinks he's such a bad person and he's so down on himself, but no one else thinks he's a bad person. Loved the scene in the locker room! Dave is really cool not caring that Dan's oglng him. I'm sure he's flattered. lol And Dave's too nice - I'm with Dan, I kill bugs too. The more I kill, the less there are out there. haha

There you go Jesse - try to let it go and focus on Maxie, the boy who loves you. Great chapter Sasha! I loved Strange Land. I wanna go there! Hopefully the next chapter in Maxie's pov will be a positive one.