Lisa

Omg, I almost wrote my review for the NEXT chapter! Shit, glad I caught that in time. The fire scene was amazing! I was really at the edge of my seat! How the heck did Zune think of everything he did to save Ariel and Wheelchair Lady? I would have been panicking and probably wouldn't know what to do. He was incredible. He should really be given an award; he did save those two people! =) And wait! MR. ARROGANT SAVED ZUNE?! Say it ain't so! I was expecting Kev to be the knight in shining armor! lol And Zune sure is stingy with his kisses! lol Poor Kevin! Great job sacred! Looking forward to more!

God, they should lock Willow up and throw away the key! She makes me so angry! She really fucked up her kid and the worst part of it is that she doesn't even care! She never told him that she loves him! That's unforgivable! The only person who ever said that to him always leaves him. It's no wonder he has trust issues. And on top of all this, his whoring mother is whoring herself out! With her four year old in the house! How disgusting is that? And apparently she's always yelling at him.No wonder he thinks everyone is going to yell at him. And maybe Zach doens't like baths b/c Willow leaves him in the tub alone. Or maybe she doesn't even bathe him b/c she doesn't care and can't be bothered. She's too busy whoring herself out. This was a terrific chapter Fitz! I just hope that the cops don't interfere. I didn't even think of that until I read the review from Rebel. But really, can they even do anything? Wouldn't it be up to the courts, not the cops? And the courts already granted them custody. Ah well, I'll just have to wait until the next chapter!

I ditto everything Louis said. I assumed from the end of the chapter that it was just a one chapter story. I hope it isn't. It was wonderful, heartwarming, (like everyone else is saying), emotional, (you know me and my Kleenex), funny and just a beautiful, beautiful story. If you do continue it I hope that Simon, (was that the bully's name), gets what he deserves. I hope they press charges and send the bastard away for a very long time. Terrific job Andrew!

Hey Kim! I, unfortunately also have a D.B. in my life, but I refer to him as db. It stands for douchebag, but douchebag is just so long to write out all the time, so he's db for short. Anywho....Heath needs to come clean to Alec and it seems Alec definitely has a sordid past with Simon. He also needs to come clean to Heath. I just can't imagine kind, generous, sweet Alec being a player and taking people's money. That sounds like Simon, not Alec. I'm not even sure if I believe Simon. He could have just said all that to Heath to get Heath off his back and to get him to see Alec in a different light. Awesome chapter Kim! Can't wait to find out what's really going on!

Where was I that I missed a chapter? Well now I had two to read. Siggi sounds like an real ass. He thinks everyone is gonna roll over eveytime he speaks. I did like the line about not having enough Epi Pens in the second chapter; that was funny. It is strange that Eirikur, (how do you pronounce that?), so readily agreed to let Gunni stay there. It's as if he already knew about it...hmm, from the mom maybe? lol And I'm sure seventeen-year old Eirikur is not the same as twenty-six year old Eirikur. It'll be interesting to see how they get along. As Gunni said, they didn't talk much or know much about each other all those years ago.

Hey Yanks, congratulations on being published! That's awesome! This story sounds like it will be amazing. The first chapter was, well, sad. It just made me so sad to think there are kids out there who struggle with this every day and they're confused and don't have anyone to talk to. I think maybe Chance could have/should have talked to Dusty, since Dusty brought the whole subject up. It just sounds like Chance has to talk to somebody or he's gonna combust. He can go to his parents; he's very lucky. Chance and Dusty's parents are terrific! It's about time I read a story where the parents are actually "parents" and love their kids unconditionally. They won't throw them out onto the street, they won't beat them up and call them horrible names. What a pleasure to read about great, understanding parents. =) I was a bit confused though: somewhere in the chapter it was mentioned that Chance was going through puberty, (his mother pointed that out), and Dusty is four years younger than him but almost as tall as he is. Well, my youngest is practically finished w/puberty at fourteen, (I think) I mean I think he's almost done w/puberty, or all done, not that I think he's fourteen; I know that for a fact. lol Anyway....so if Chance is going through it, how old is he? Twelve? Thirteen? Do kids really talk about sex that young? Obviously I wouldn't be asking if mine did. haha Why would Chance be ashamed of being a virgin at his young age? I was just wondering how old he is. Anyway, awesome story! I love the way you write and I'm looking forward to more, whenever you're allowed to update. =)

Soubi should kick Rin the f out. After he blasts him for even showing up. How dare Rin think that he can just waltz right back into Soubi's life after what he did to him. He's such a tool. If Soubi can't do it, I hope Ryo does it. I can't see how Rin can redeem himself after what he did to Soubi. Awesome chapter! If ya couldn't tell, I liked it. lol Looking forward to the next one lilansui!

I too was sad to see this story end. But I'm glad you'll be continuing it at a later time. I think when the boys volunteered to watch Maxie every day after school, they weren't thinking too clearly! lol He's gonna be a handful! But he's so cute who can resist him? Dussy Zaky, I wuv you, omg I could just eat him up. I know I've said that before, but seriously; he's adorable. Oh, and by the way Andrew, I'll never look at another horse again w/o wondering what's stuck in his mane? lol Looking forward to the next adventure......

What a great chapter furnished! =) Caleb's mini panic attack thinking about gay bashing cabbies was pretty funny. Some of the lines in this chapter had me cracking up. I like Cassie. Isn't she like thirteen or something? She's very insightful. I hope Caleb and Clark's "date" goes well. Maybe he can meet a nice boy at the gay bar. lol I was so happy to see you updated furnished! I purposely waited a few days to read it, just so the wait for the next chapter won't feel so long. lol

Lol Sacred! I'm still waiting to find out if I win my $100.00 bet about 'Brobdngnagian' (I just copied it from lilansui's review)! hahah And if I may just borrow this space for a sec to give a shout-out to Carrie - @Carrie - you and I follow each other from story to story, lol. I need to thank you for your awesomely kind words. =) You and sacred really made me blush. lol Ok, thanks sacred...back to the review: the whole scene in the restaurant with Zune's mom was hysterical! She's a pisser! Nothing embarrasses her, huh? lol Meanwhile Zune is trying to hide under the table. hehe And good for Zune for sticking up for himself with that bully Edward. I always say it's the bullies who are the worst closet cases.... Great chapter sacred! You'll get the next one back soon...lol

I love George! Almost as much as I love Lily! lol They seem to be cut from the same cloth. =) Joshua is so good for Alexi; the trip to the park was exactly what Alexi needed. And it was so nice to see him just let loose and relax for a bit. He's always so stressed out, having panic attacks and just worrying about everything. He really needed that day with Joshua to unwind again. Looking foward to more happiness for Alexi! And of course Joshua!

That scum Gabe is back! To wreck some more havoc on Kyle's life. That smarmy bastard! lol I really hope Gabe thinks Kyle has moved on with Riley. Riley will probably pretend and rub it in Gabe's face. lol I also love that hearbreaker of a story Kyle wrote way back when. =) Great chapter Sid! Can't wait to find out what happens next with the three boys!

Well I do still feel bad for Henry. Especially now. It's hard enough trying to over someone who really didn't care about you, but then to have this person talk so blatantly about sex and what you want in front of everybody; it's humiliating. And it's obvious to me that Jean really does not care about Henry. If he did then he would have been the one to approach him days ago. Now he just made Henry feel worse. Why is Jean so immature? And poor Edward; but why does Edward still hang around Jean if he didn't like it so much? lol

Hey lilansui! Great new story ya got here! I meant to read this last week when it was posted....excellent start to yet another one of your great stories! I feel so bad for Soubi. He's on a self-destructive path using drugs and sex to combat loneliness. All b/c of Rin. That shit. Does he just expect Soubi will run to him with open arms? Is he for real? He left w/o a word. They were together for eight years. This guy's a real prick. I hope he feels guilty. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. -)

Omg, I MUST adopt Maxie! He is the cutest thing! He just cracks me up. =) This was an especially sweet chapter the way the boys all bonded together and with their partners. I also love the way the two Great Danes stand over the boys and protect them. Mainly Zak and Maxie. Another terrific chapter Andrew!

I'm glad Noah and Scott were able to talk about what was bothering Noah. I'm sure Noah feels horrible that he can't contribute more financially to the relationship. At lease he's not a mooch! lol They'll work everything out in time. It's just so new and overwhelming for all of them. And of course Zachy was as adorable as ever! I LOVE when he says "Fine!" with a little indignant pout! lol That'll stop as soon as he hits twelve. Then it'll be "NO!". So Noah and Scott should enjoy the "Fines" now and be happy that Zach is listening to them! haha I totally agree with Noah about sleeping on the couch and not wanting to stay in Scott's room. Their relationship is so new and now Noah and Zach are moving in; it's going to be difficult for awhile. Noah and Scott haven't even really gone out on dates together; they're still learning about each other. =)

Ok, I think THIS has been the best chapter yet. I think I keep saying that after every chapter.... Maxie is just so adorable; can I adopt him? lol 'Pin, omg I was cracking up! And how he got Zak to wake up by pulling on his eyelid, shit, brings back memories of when my kids were little. And when he was riding "Herky", omg, priceless. I can just eat him up. =) So I think I went thru my whole box of Kleenex, but in a good way. lol I do tend to get too emotional with great presents, amazingly awesome b/f's, wonderful moms, terrific friends, (old and new), and hella awesome bosses, and my diminished supply of tissues only proves what a fantastic birthday chapter this was. Terrific job Andrew! Looking foward to the next chapter - hehe, maybe Noah will ask " 'Pin" how big his is!lol But of course not in front of Maxie!

This has got to be the best chapter so far! I think I ran out of Kleenex! But in a happy way! lol The whole explanation of the different colored roses and the lunch Dusty had for Zak and the trouble he went to to get him things for Loki and Onyx just made ME fall in love with him more! Never mind Zak! I also adored the last chapter with Nick and Noah, (always want to say Nick and Norah! From that movie....),, anyway, I think they're great and I would love that they all kept in touch. I think Nick and Noah should visit the ranch so they can visit with Revalance, (sorry, I forgot the horses's name. I remembered that it meant revenge though. lol) I loved hearing their backstories also. I think it's a terrific thing Nick and his folks are doing by trying to find homes for all those beautiful horses. And like I said in an earlier review, I always get choked up reading about how horrible people can be to animals and how wonderful people like Nick, Noah and the boys at J Ranch are to counteract that cruelty. Well, I'm all caught up on this site. I'll wait patiently for the next chapter. Have a great Turkey Day Andrew!

Oh, I forgot to comment on how much I loved the gay porn line! lol Now Jess is checking out gay porn; maybe Chris should be worried? hahah But what will she do if the government has their way and starts censoring internet activity? She have to kiss any kind of porn goodbye; gay or straight.

Yay! Dylan's back!!!! lol I loved reading about Kyle and Riley's backstory. I can't wait to find out more about their relationship, and what Riley did to lose Kyle. I just pray he can find Kyle now. Great job Sid!

Jesus, I don't know where I've been that I missed a bunch of updates. A few things confused me: when Jen confronted Rodney about the rumor she had heard about him being gay, she made it all about her. She felt betrayed that he didn't tell her. After all, they were best friends. Then she comes out and says to never talk to her again. Well, maybe that's why he never told her. Although I think she said that b/c she was upset he didn't tell her, not because he was gay. But she made it all about her. It was his choice, his decision if he wanted to tell anyone. She needs to get the fuck over herself. Luckily she came through for him in the end, but she was a real bitch to him when she found out. Next: when Rodney went to stay with his aunt, why was he getting all these phone calls if only two people knew he was there? And who were the two people? Also, the news reporter who reported Jacob's suicide said it was by hanging. At the end of the news report he/she went on to say that an autopsy was being performed to determine the cause of death. Say what? Umm, hanging? Also, throughout the last chapter Jacob's name keeps switching to Jason. I'm glad Thomas finally came around and was able to be there for Rodney. Same for Jen, as I just stated. Rodney's mom was terrific, but his father. What the fuck was he thinking? How selfish could he be if he thought his wife and son were better off w/o him? Ok, so he fucked up. True. But he realized he fucked up with the help of his wife, so why not be the mature adult, FATHER, and go to your son and apologize? He would rather kill himself and have leave his wife w/o a husband and his son w/o a father? How sick is that? He couldn't just fucking apologize? I don't get this. Rodney is going to blame himself for what his father did. What an ass his father was. And wait: as far as I know, YOU CAN'T COLLECT LIFE INSURANCE IF THE PERSON KILLS HIMSELF. Ok, so one more thing and I'm done nitpicking: you keep switching tenses, from the past present, (not sure what it's really called, lol) to the present. For example: We hopped in my car and went to the store. We walk down all the aisles searching for what we need. We buy, blah, blah blah. We left the store and went home. (not from your story; just an example) Do you see where the sentence starts out sort of in the past, but then changes to the present and then goes back to the past? But, besides this, it was a really good story and it did make me cry. I love all stories that make me cry. You know just how to pull at those heartstrings. lol I look forward to reading more from you Remijay. =)

Jon! You're back! Good, now I can call off the search and rescue team! lol Glad to know you're just busy and nothing is wrong. Boy did I miss my Corbin/Pete fix. So hard, (ha, no pun intended!), to figure Pete out. I'm with Corbs on this. When it's just Pete and Corbs together, he's great. But what's with his pushing Corbin off him when it was clearly PETE who tripped Corbin and made him fall on him? And then the tables are turned and he pushes Corbin out from under him. But all this happens ONLY B/C SOMEONE SAYS SOMETHING. What would have happened if no one had been in the room? Or if they were in the room but they never said anything? What would Pete have done then? So curious..... I too LOVED the "Scotty Doesn't Know" song! I just watched the vid on YouTube just to hear it again, lol. I'm also curious about Dakota's past relationship with Pete. She was in love with him, but what did he feel about her? Does she know all his secrets? Seems like she should if they are indeed bff's. And I'm sure she could totally tell how Corbs feels about Pete. I didn't like Corbin thinking that he didn't want to wind up like Dakota regarding his feelings for Pete. He can't just give up b/c he's not sure where Pete stands. If he doesn't take a chance; take a risk, he'll never know for sure. He does want to know one way or the other. He's gonna have to be the one to make the first move. Pete will never do it. At least with anyone in the room. And maybe he'll bolt, but maybe he won't. Corbs won't know unless he takes that chance. But totally love Dakota; she rocks! And totally LOVE how Mister is in love with Pete too! Hahah, Corbs has a gay cat, oops, just remembered she's a she and not a he. hahah Never mind, Corbs doesn't have a gay cat; he has a straight cat and she's in love with Pete too. He has some tough competition and unfortunately I think Mister is gonna win. lol Ok Jon, welcome back! Can't wait for the next installment. =)

Dylan....I love your new story! =) I felt so bad for Hayden; he definitely didn't deserve to be treated the way he was by that loser ex of his. I'm looking forward to the next update! Maybe I'll see your Dylan story in my mailbox someday...although this chapter was really well-written; you probably don't need me anymore. lol Anyway, looking forward to chapter two!

Ah, James blew it! lol And just when his mom's cell rang, I looked all around for mine b/c I have the same ringtone! Anyway....I just happened to find the forums today. I'm a late learner. I clicked on yours b/c I was hoping to find out if you'll be updating any of your hella awesome stories. I guess I'll keep checking in...... Have a happy Turkey Day Comsie!

I think I'm all caught up! lol I haven't read the latest chapters b/c I'm waiting till you post them all on here. I really love how the boys are so welcoming of other people. They really took to Mattie, (especially Spin, lol), and now he gets to be a part of their group. Mr. Jones's employees are growing. I especially love reading about how Zak and Onyx bond and Mattie and Ash bond. I love reading about kids and animals. The scenes where Zak is talking quietly to Onyx and hugging him really make me smile. And I'm learning so much about horses! This is a great story Andrew; I'm looking foward to the next chapter!