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  1. Lisa

    Chapter 6

    Lol, in the states take-away is called take-out. =) Joshua's ex-wife is a bitch! I bet she knew all along that Shane wasn't his. And after he was such a good father to him, she's denying his right to see him. That's horrible. He's the only father Shane knows. She's a bitch. I don't know what to think about Adrian. Did he take Alexi's credit card? Is he going to use it for his business because his agency isn't doing too great? And if Alexi can't play for a crowd for Adrian, who's to say he can play for Joshua's college? I'm anxious to hear about the meeting with Lily and Joshua's college's rep, was it Allan? or Robert? Sorry, I can't remember his name... Another awesome chapter lilansui!
  2. Lisa

    Ogre's Awakening

    Wow, the stuff you can find on Google! I wonder if they had videos. lol But that is dedication, I'll tell you. And he didn't even know for sure it would ever happen again, but he still wanted to learn. What a guy! =) Awesome chapter Mann! Can't wait for the next one!
  3. Lisa

    Cock Block

    First things first: Mister only had ONE dosage today! She/he needs another one before Corbin passes out! lol See, in all this relationship mess, I'm looking out for the little pussy. Loved the confession that Corbin only signed up for chorus so he could use it as an excuse to get out of any frat shit. But.....the funniest was when he and Amanda was it, had a three-way with a HIGH SCHOOL STUDENT!!! During an open house no less! "Oh mom, dad, I'm just gonna check out this dorm room 'real quick' (wink, wink) and have a threeway with these two kids. You don't mind, do you? Nope, great, I'll catch up with you at the end of the campus tour. You know, to get that whole college spirit thing down." Corbin is too funny. The funniest part is that the kid wound up going there. =) On a more serious note: why is Pete sending out so many mixed signals? From day one he's been giving Corbin mixed messages. Maybe he's not sure of what/who he wants, like Lee. Which was another surprising thing. Lee and Steph I mean. I could see Corbin getting all jealous and possessive, but really Corbin; you've been pining over Pete since you met him and plus you haven't spoken to Lee in at least a day or two, right? IMHO I think that Corbin should just go with the flow as far as Pete goes. Maybe he's just trying too hard and if the relationship is gonna happen, then it'll happen when it's good and ready to. Corbin should just chill, relax and see where being friends with Pete takes him. Sometimes it's the relationships that take time to develop that are the ones that are way better than the quick hook-ups that may fizzle out. In any case, awesome chapter! I wonder if they stop drinking at any point. lol J/K at least they don't drink during classes, right? hehe I remember those glory days, so long ago.....when we didn't care what your mama thought 'bout your name on my arm....." Sorry, got carried away. I was thinking about college, right. Looking forward to the next chapter when they wake up in each other's arms, yet again. lol
  4. Oh no, the lockers that are filled with 'other' kinds of swim suits! Can't wait to see what the boys do next! And I don't think Scott has to worry about Joe; he seems like a really cool guy.
  5. And there's a day when you're not reading Andy? From what you just wrote you'll be reading from now until Kingdom Come. lol Whenever that is! They really had a dislike button? That would be horrible for an author! Way to boost their confidence, lol. I think there should be at least fifteen likes for the day. Because as you said Andy, sometimes you're reading more than one chapter for a story and you want to 'like' all the chapters but you can't. Maybe they should limit the likes to the last chapter then. Idk.....I just think five is too little. Or maybe I should just get a life and read less. ;(
  6. Oh podium, you never cease to make me chuckle. Yes, five likes per author would be much better. I just get annoyed when I want to hit the like button and it doesn't go thru b/c I used up all my likes for the day.
  7. Yeah, I've done that before also; wrote it in the review that I ran out of 'likes'. What really annoys me is when I stay up late (on the weekends) and by the next morning, I already ran out of 'likes'! And I still have a whole day ahead of me!!!! hahah Ok, so I really need to get a life. I just don't know why they would set a rule that you could only hit the 'like' button five times. And it's not fair for the authors who count on these 'likes' in order to get on the main story update page. That's what they're for, right?
  8. Heath, Heather, lol. Ah man, Heath's already cheating on Alec with Nina! So, Nina does the same thing as Heath? But Heath supplements his income somehow. And he was hired to "get in and get out" of Alec's house, life, heart, what? And why Alec? I'm so intrigued! Great chapter Kim! Can't wait to find out more about Heath. =)
  9. I had a question about the "Like" button at the end of each chapter. Why is it that readers are encouraged to click on the "Like" button if they liked the chapter, but they are only allotted a certain number of times they can do this per day. I think it's only five times, right? But how about if you read more than five chapter updates that you like? Should you save your five likes until you're through reading everything and then pick and choose which of the stories you liked better? It's frustrating as a reader that I can't click on the "Like" button as often as I'd like and then the authors don't think you liked the chapter because you didn't click on the "Like" button. Who made up this rule and why do you even have it?
  10. Ah those poor pledges. They won't know until the end that the pledge masters aren't serious. Good chapter, although it was short. Looking forward to the next one.
  11. Lisa

    Present in Spirit

    Ahh, how could you leave it like that???? lol So first things first: good for Patrick for sticking up for Darrin when everyone else was afraid of going against Greg. What was up with that anyway? Were they part of a gang where Greg was the leader? And Rob, why was he hanging out with the womenfolk? lol I mean even his brother Kurt was downstairs watching the game. I have a feeling that he didn't like Patrick hanging out with Ben and of course Ben got a little jealous seeing Rob getting close to Patrick when they were playing pool. And of course we know Rob didn't have to go looking for them; he was just trying to prevent Ben and Patrick even communicating. Why would it matter if Ben and Patrick continued their friendship? Who cares that it was so close to Emily and Joe's wedding? Wouldn't Emily want Ben to move on and be happy? What's up with Rob anyway? Awesome chapter Random. Looking forward to more 'catching up'. Is that what they're calling it nowadays? hahah
  12. I ditto everything Louis said. What a great chapter! And thank God Joey's all right! Well, as far as the save goes anyway. He definitely needs to speak with a therapist. He needs to know that it's ok to feel love and express that love with Andy. He needs to know that what his father and the baseball coach did to him was dirty and it was against his will. I think once the therapist gets that message across, Joey will be ok. But it'll take baby steps; he's not going to all of a sudden want to jump in the sack with Andy. I'm also on pins and needles about JT. Who killed his parents? Not that his asshole father didn't deserve it. I hope JT survives; now that he's a changed person (for the better) he needs to live. Awesome chapter Billy!
  13. Lisa

    Chapter 1

    What a great story! It's such a pleasure to read a story that has a happy ending. =)
  14. Lisa

    Chapter 7

    Wow Sid, what an awesome story! How long ago did you write this? And it says that it's completed, in the main story info section. But it doesn't sound like it's anywhere near from being finished. For some reason I thought autistic people were better with numbers than words. And I'm sure that Luke has been asking about Noah all this time and I know that Lucinda is a very controlling person and probably thinks this is best for Luke. I'm hoping Lily can change her mother's mind. I can't imagine how hurt Noah has been all this time. I hope you continue this story; it's great! And of course I LOVE reading about Nuke; oh, I hope the new tutor isn't Reid! lol
  15. Hey Bill, I really liked this story. It's too bad what happened to JJ doesn't happen to all the bullies in every school. I read some of these stories online and it makes me sick to think kids actually get a kick out of humiliating and physically abusing other kids who don't live up the their 'standards'. This was a great story! Oh, I was a bit confused at one point: the first day JJ morphed into the other kid, he was in the shower and looked at his chest and noticed his hair was gone. It was noted that he was a sophomore and he had some sparse hair on his chest, but at the end of the story it was noted that his friends wanted to listen to him b/c he was the top dog (or something like that) of the senior class. So, was he a sophomore or a senior? lol
  16. It just amazes me that even after she's been away from her boys for awhile and her husband comes to try and talk some sense into her, she's just as idiotic and irrational as before. I mean, doesn't she talk to people? What does her sister think of her actions? Her brother-in-law? Have they tried to talk sense into her or are they just as ignorant as she is? I wonder how she was brought up. Why does she have such a deep-seated hatred of gay people? And of course her behavior/reaction towards her sons was the catalyst that resulted in Jacob losing control with Thomas. Well, that's my opinion anyway. I'm glad the principal isn't sweeping Thomas' outbursts under the rug and he's addressing the issue. As always, I LOVE Kyle; he was so supportive and he didn't even flinch when Thomas went on his verbal assault rampage. Because naturally not only did Jacob out himself, buy Kyle is now outed as well. Awesome chapter as always podium!
  17. Lisa

    Chapter 13: Reaction

    Intune, you're back! Finally, lol. I absolutely LOVE this story so I was thrilled to see an update! I purposely didn't read it on the day you posted b/c now there will be less time I have to wait for the next update. =) I actually feel really bad for Jeremy. Here he is, in love with a guy (Matt) and he finds out this guy loves someone else (Lucca) even though this other boy had no clue b/c HE'S also in love with Matt. Then Sam comes along and is also falling for Lucca. Jeremy has to see Lucca in school, at the hospital, all the while knowing how the person HE'S in love with feels about Lucca. Now Lucca has two guys after him, while Jeremy only wants one of these guys. It's pretty sad. (Unless I misinterpreted everything I've read so far) I hope Jeremy comes clean to Sam. Although....that may not be good for Lucca, b/c obviously Sam doesn't know ANYTHING about Matt. Sam was amazing in the Japanese restaurant. (You also made me hungry for sushi, my favorite) I don't know many people who could deflect such a seriously sad situation like what Lucca was saying about his mom with a funny scrabble question. I'm glad it worked. Awesome chapter intune, I hope the next one will be out relatively soon.......=)
  18. Holy shit my computer just combusted! My keyboard melted and now I'm gonna have to go get a new one. Shit. If you keep writing slash like that I'm gonna have to buy stock in Best Buy.=) What an awesome first chapter! You know, I always like to picture the characters and you've mentioned how tall Eric and Ogre (I keep picturing Schrek; hope he's better looking than that! And not green! lol) are what, six two and six four maybe respectively? How tall is Little Man? The only thing I'm upset about is the fact that I'm not getting an update every hour! Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder if Eric's gonna stumble into the room to check on Little Man, hehe. Ha, what a reaction THAT would be! =)
  19. Lisa

    Chapter 5

    Adrian who? lol Maybe with Joshua, he can realize what Lily told him was true; there are plenty of fish in the sea. I liked how disappointed Joshua was to find out that Alexi wouldn't be staying in New York permanently. Maybe that will change. Then Alexi will have Joshua and Adrian to deal with. Because we know Adrian's feelings for Alexi are still there. Great chapter lilansui!
  20. Lisa

    Mister

    Those drunk text messages of Corbin had me cracking up! He's a pisser! Even when he's pissed! lol (get it, pissed as in drunk in British terms, lol, ok lame, sorry.) He agreed to take a kitten! And the runt of the litter no less! Too funny! I loved the potty-training. For some reason I thought kittens/cats were ingrained to use the litterbox. I see halfway thru the chapter Pete must have still been drunk b/c he was talking with a Southern drawl! lol Y'all. So you could really cut the sexual tension between Corbin and Pete with a knife in this chapter. Just when you think they're gonna give in and start making out, they do a 180. lol The arm wrestling was funny; they both cheated. But I could definitely see Corbin's point at the end. He's too afraid to confront Pete about his feelings for fear of rejection and he figures he'd rather have Pete as a good friend than not have any relationship with him. Makes sense. I do think he needs to give it a bit more time though. They've only known each other four days after all. And maybe Pete was asking about the dating thing b/c HE wanted to ask Corbin out. But I think if that's true, he's gonna let Corbin stew for awhile; he doesn't want to seem too easy. Another awesome chapter Jon!
  21. Lisa

    Lions Do It Too

    Haha, where did Helena come up with lion porn? And didn't Oscar know there are many animal species who get together with same-sex partners? I thought that was common knowledge. And Helena is a bitch. And Oscar takes Biology AND Chemistry in the same year???? I thought you needed to take Biology before Chemistry, not at the same time. Ok, sorry, I'm focusing on the wrong thing here. lol Poor Edward. I actually don't think any boy in that school is safe from Jean's powers. lol But didn't Henry get jealous seeing Jean trying to turn Edward? Great chapter James!
  22. I love your new story Kim! I was kinda confused though: I thought Kaila was supposed to meet a client? Anyway.....was that Heath at the beginning getting out of the shower? That phone call at the end seemed rather shady. I hope he's not scamming Alec. Great start! Can't wait for more! =)
  23. Lisa

    Chapter 5 - Mutiny

    I agree with Rebel; I was cracking up! Joe was really getting into the whole announcer bit thing! $137.43 was donated; who donated the 43 cents? lol Great chapter bashful!
  24. It's a country song, but not Billy Currington. Jake Owen's "Barefoot Bluejean Night". And the line, "Blue eyes, auburn hair" is in the song, so when I read that as part of the description of one of the characters, my mind went in a loop, singing the whole song. lol But of course he's talking about a girl. Funny, all these country songs talk about girls, trucks, tailgates (ok, still trucks) and beer. Well, other booze too I guess. And parties. We need some gay country songs. lol
  25. Lisa

    Chapter 4

    I'll take the salmon! Just sayin'.... I think Adrian loves Alexi but can't handle his feelings so he runs away from them. He was trying so hard, avoiding Alexi for two months, and then they kiss and every feeling he was trying to suppress just comes bursting up from the surface. So now he's running away again. I actually think it would have been a bad idea for Adrian and Joshua to be at the dinner together. Especially after that kiss. Joshua would be able to tell that something was going on between them and he would feel like the third wheel and feel like why did Alexi invite me if he's so into this other dude? I do hope he doesn't cancel on Joshua. Maybe Adrian will show up unexpectedly and then get jealous of Joshua. I'm not meaning to use Joshua, but maybe seeing Alexi interacting with another guy will snap Adrian out of his "anti-Alexi" phase. Anyway...great chapter! Can't wait for more!
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