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  1. Lisa

    Chapter 51 Uphill

    Yay for Andy beating Kaz!!! Even if it was only three times! lol Yay for Andy making a friend (Jeff), and coaxing him to join the track team with him! Andy has come a long way. I think Zander's very wise saying about not being in your body but in your mind, will help Andy with other things besides athletics. This was a great chapter, Parker! I love seeing Andy conversing with friends like any other teenager.
  2. Damn, Emi beat me to it!!!! To my friend, the wonderful Sacred, I wish you a terrific birthday full of love and happiness. HAPPY BIRTHDAY SACRED!!!!! I hope you're having an awesome birthday!!
  3. Trey! What a relief for us and for Mark! I hope though that his injury to his brain is healing and there aren't any repercussions. Now I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter! I can't believe I never saw this one! lol
  4. I agree with all your reviewers; I do not like David's decision. David doesn't even like David's decision. He still thinks he's straight. He's going to throw Twoey into a mountain of turmoil and sadness if he does what he's thinking of doing. But, as one of your reviewers said, maybe David needs to do this to finally figure out he loves Twoey way more than a friend. I'm curious to find out what the doc will think. David made quite the impression on Mike. I realized once David took out the half-dollar I totally screwed up my last review! So my idea obviously wouldn't have worked. lol I'm glad David thought of the perfect solution. He is a very smart boy. We still have Erik waiting in the wings, and of course Mattie, who'll take either Twoey or David! lol You can tell that Erik really has feelings for Twoey, just like Ginny said. Maybe that's why David doesn't like him all of a sudden. He realizes that Erik can be a potential threat to his relationship with Twoey. On to the next chapter!
  5. I'm surprised Grandpa didn't jump in a plane heading for whatever town near Syracuse David lives after he heard Aunt Sarah describe her phone call with David! I'm sure Aunt Sarah relayed that weird phone convo to Grandpa. If I were Aunt Sarah, I'd call my brother, David's dad, and ask him to lock his son up. lol What a monologue! And now I know Tommy takes after his brother. He threatened to kill Mark (wrapping the putter around his neck? lol), just like David threatened to kill Josiah fucking Coulton. Maybe Tommy has an anger problem too? I do love how they had such a great day together with their friends. So Tommy DOES know about Mark and maybe Mattie and Cory, and all the other brothers who are fucking each other. lol Interesting. He seems to know about David and Twoey also. I can't wait to find out what idea David came up with regarding the dollar. You know, they can cut it in half, can't they? Or instead of a dollar, use two half-dollar coins. Or does that totally ruin the meaning of the dollar?
  6. I love how close David and Tommy are. I'm wondering the same thing Jess is: does Tommy have any idea what his friend is doing with his brother and his other friend? I'm not sure how I feel about the two sets of brothers hooking up with each other. Besides my feelings they are way too young to be doing that, I don't really know. Is it a matter of boys will be boys? How healthy can those sibling relationships be? Just wondering. lol Sunday should be interesting with Twoey, David, and Mike. I think Mike will be jealous of David and think he's been replaced. On the other hand, I also think he'll figure out what's going on between Twoey and David. I hope there won't be any fighting; we know how David's temper can flare up! Another great chapter, Skinny!
  7. Lisa

    Chapter 22

    I'm glad to see Matt trying to get back on track. Andy's smart to throw that tough love out there for Matt. I like the doc's marble/water/sex analogy. I think it made the boys think more about what they were doing. I wonder if they're going to be able to go through with the foursome. They say of course they want to, but once Sunday comes and they're faced with Thomas and Colt, what will happen? What will they think then? Will the doc's words come back to haunt them?
  8. Lisa

    Chapter 2

    I really like Luke. It's funny how he's trying Jack's patience! lol And how on earth do they NOT know one another if their moms are best friends? I do think Jack is a bit spoiled. He gets away with everything. It is sad he feels he'll never be the kid his parents wanted, but his folks are right with him taking responsibility for what he does. It is time for him to grow up a bit. We'll see if Luke can help him with that! Great chapter, Krista!
  9. Lisa

    Chapter 1

    Krista!! You're back! I love the story so far! Jackson is a hoot! lol Calling the principal by his first name. And he's dating the guy's daughter? Too funny! I can't wait to find out what's gonna go wrong to make his parents find out about his sneaking away. lol Ok, on to chapter two.
  10. Wow. Mike's letter made me cry too. Unfortunately it took a near-tragedy to get Mike thinking on what he had done to Twoey, and how much they both lost by his actions. He grew up and apologized to Twoey. Twoey's wonderful in forgiving him. David's wonderful in telling Twoey to forgive him. I don't think Twoey is looking at this dollar-best-friend thing the same as David. David is looking at as Mike was your best friend since birth, and now there's no reason for him not to be his best friend again, with the dollar bill. David will still be Twoey's boyfriend, Angel, whatever, but the best friend part will be separate. Which it probably should be anyway. But Twoey's looking at it like if David returns the dollar bill, he doesn't want to be Twoey's best friend anymore. I'm actually surprised David was so gung-ho about returning the dollar bill. But that's David, always looking out for others. So yeah, David, OCD much? lol Even though no one sees his boxers, he still has to match the color with his shirt and jeans? lol And everything in his room is arranged 'just so'. He's very organized, like his little mental shelf. I can't wait for the webcam to start working! Sam's a genius! How does one go about encrypting a computer? lol And how did he know about the webcam app? Amazing! I'm so out of the technology loop it isn't funny! I wonder if David will have to wait until Wednesday before he sees something. Wednesday seems to be the magic day for loitering in David's room. lol
  11. That BITCH Kathy dumped David OVER THE PHONE?????? She didn't even have the DECENCY to do it face-to-face????? Grrrrr That BITCH Tommy's mother is giving David AGITA!!!!!!! Even though most of the adults in David's life are supportive, he's under the impression Tommy's mother has more power than she does. His father is finally stepping up to the plate now, and I can't see him letting his wacko wife get away with trying to kick their son out of the house. Plus I don't think Liz would be on board with that, and we DEFINITELY know Tommy wouldn't! Tommy would fight Tommy's mother (hehe) tooth and nail for David. Plus there's always Ginny. I can't see her letting Tommy's mother get away with that! Yes, the Erik, Twoey, David tutoring will be interesting to read about! lol Throw Matty in there and we won't know if Matty will be going after Twoey or David!!
  12. Lisa

    Chapter 21

    I'm glad Matt finally got himself back to therapy. The first step of getting better is admitting you have a problem. Kudos to Andy for trying not to take no for an answer, and special kudos to Mrs. Spence for using reverse psychology on Matt. Let's keep our fingers crossed that Matt stays with Doc Walker. Hopefully he can change his priorities around and get back to focusing on school and sports.
  13. Omg, the "conversation" (read: threats) between David and Josiah fucking Coulton was laugh-out-loud hysterical, Skinny! I kept picturing David saying the f word with so much infliction in his voice it sent Josiah running for the hills! I do feel bad for Josiah because he obviously doesn't have a fucking CLUE what he's talking about! Pig-Fucker and Tommy's mother are on him too, I see. Tommy's mother is so horrible -- not to even ACKNOWLEDGE your son is in the same room as you is just downright rude and obnoxious. I wish David's dad would just DO something already!!!! Take a fucking STAND! Grow a pair, goddammit!!! Grrrrrr So wth is going on with that skank Kathy? She's back together with Cal? Great, but she doesn't have the balls to tell her CURRENT boyfriend this? I wonder if Greg already knows. Terrific chapter, Skinny!
  14. Lisa

    Chapter 48 Scars

    I can't believe I'm practically caught up! I don't wanna be caught up! lol I love this story too much to have to wait for chapters. lol As all your other reviewers stated, this was a beautiful chapter. I loved Andy initiating his and Zander's first date, eating everything on his plate with no remorse, paying for the dinner -- it was wonderful! The most beautiful part was at the end when Andy took his shirt off and Zander lovingly kissed every scar on his back. That had me in tears it was so sweet and poignant. I'm thrilled Andy's opening up more to Dr. O'Shea (she does sound a little gruff to me; I'd most likely be in tears hearing Andy's story, but that I suppose wouldn't be too professional, huh? lol). Andy needs to face his demons before he'll be able to move on. Maybe there will be justice for Andy, and that scumbag pedo "Uncle" Ray will finally be in the big house, being Big Bubba's bitch. I also applaud Monica; she handled the sex subject with finesse, even if it was embarrassing for both her and Andy. I read this chapter late last night, so forgive me if I'm getting it mixed up with the previous chapter, but I laughed when Andy was thinking now that he's actually ALLOWED to listen to music, the music he likes is country, but others thought country music is always sad music. Nuh-uh. Today's country is nuthin' like your mama's country! lol Have you heard Luke Bryan, Jason Aldean, Chris Young (ok, one song isn't sad! lol), Randy Houser...I could go on and on, so I'll shut up now. But you get my point. lol Anyway, one more chapter to go and I'll be all caught up. Boo hiss.
  15. Heya, Doc! I didn't mean for you to stop writing your beautiful, deep, intricate poetry. Just because I may not understand the poem, doesn't mean others won't. Keep writing, Doc!!
  16. Lisa

    Solitary

    Damn, I ran out of likes. Sorry, Addy, I'll have to come back tomorrow. Beautiful poem. I loved how you used 'solitary' throughout.
  17. Sheriff of Nottingham: [to a wench] You. My room. 10:30 tonight. Sheriff of Nottingham: [to another wench] You. 10:45... And bring a friend. Nobody could do lines like these better than Alan Rickman. I loved everything I saw him in. The world is definitely a lot less brighter now. He will be sorely missed. RIP Alan, thanks for all the laughs, and thanks for showing us your emotional side, proving you were a master at your craft.
  18. HAPPY BIRTHDAY RILEY!!!! I hope you're having a hella awesome day!
  19. I do like the imagery here, Doc. I can just picture Shade's skin, rough like a dragon's lying out on the rocks being warmed by the sun.
  20. Lisa

    My Lord Blood Gem

    Yeah, I'll go with what Parker said! Ok, you asked for it, Doc, and now you've got it: a review I wouldn't normally write. It was a very good poem, but at the expense of sounding stupid, it was too deep for me! lol I'll read chapter 21 now.
  21. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAVID!!!!! I hope you're having a great day!
  22. Lisa

    Chapter 2

    So the phone sex thing was a little weird considering they just met and Rob was in a hospital bed, with one of his legs in a cast and hooked up to something suspended from the ceiling and one of his arms in a cast. How on earth he managed to j/o without hurting his leg is beyond me! lol It's good that the three of them came to a decision regarding Rob's convalescence. Looking forward to chapter three.
  23. Lisa

    Late August

    Oh man, Skinny, another story from you???? lol What rock was I hiding under that I didn't see this? And just when I was gonna read another chapter of Twoey...oh well, Twoey can wait. Can't wait to get lost in this promising story!!
  24. Lisa

    Chapter 1

    What a first chapter, wow! lol Poor Rob! He is lucky all he sustained were some broken bones. Jerry is a funny guy. But a really nice guy. Rob and him go well together.
  25. HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY CASSIE!!!!! I hope you had an awesome day!!
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