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    Chapter 1

    A journey south while being pursued. I suspect trouble and danger on that road. Inquiring minds want to know what kind of weapon was used that came from the sky. If they are going to succeed they will need to understand it and it’s weak points, in order to master or destroy it.
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    Prologue

    An interesting beginning a ray of light/hope when all seems lost.
  3. So nice to see CC’s story and how the ranch came to be!
  4. Poor Tom, and hopefully the outhouse holds together… Spring must be near….
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    Saturday Problems

    #teamlukekit, why not both? I wonder if the hidden hand of the twins are behind this?
  6. Just wondering if Luke teasing, interested, or plain old advertising…where will next Saturday’s tutoring take place, kitchen or behind a locked bedroom door?
  7. Not a river in Egypt?
  8. I fail to see how this is all Oliver's fault; throughout the entire story, Julian has been the lead dog throughout. As to the guiding, I can understand; as to other times when not guiding, it still seems to me it has to be Julian's way. I repeat myself... When will Julien stop being an island with a population of 1?
  9. When will Julien stop being an island with a population of 1?
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    Chapter 7

    As a history buff and an alternate universe buff I’m loving this!
  11. All those poor little swimmers…and NNN to boot…well done and loved that twist
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    Fort Huachuca

    Not sure what TOA is… At least it wasn’t millions…. This was just the right length chapter and well done!
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    Chapter 17

    I’d pay twice to see this if it were a movie and if a TV series, I’d put up with the political commercials too! And yes, a shout out to Big Z, owner of one of the hardest slapshots… You've been hit by Zdeno Chára
  14. Could not say it better and as a doctor with a license right from the box of Cracker Jacks I concur with the diagnosis above…
  15. Paddy is a practical legend to say the least…now in the planning of further capers, they need to widen the circle as to lead suspicion away from the estate….and spending that much money at once is bound to garner comments…and notice… I still would like to see Lord Fat Ass Cheating Bastard to pay his “dues!”…
  16. Curiouser and curiouser…I admit some, actually, most of the math escapes me, while Norris and Viv, who would have guessed….And now a hint of the Knights Templar and possible royal blood lines. Could there be interested parties out side of the school? What could possibly be hidden at this school that someone died?
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    Chapter 7

    I am throughly enjoying this story! As a history buff it is excellent!
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    Chapter 22

    Before I read any other comments, I’m rooting for Marco Polo and Robbie…the other two are smucks…..
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    Chapter 2

    This was intense and so well written…had me forcing my self to read slow and carefully…Thank you for an excellent chapter!
  20. I can only imagine that Julien will appreciate what Oliver has done. Understanding that Oliver found what teams of legal beagles couldn’t..
  21. Bittersweet, and to live as one half of a whole...
  22. All of those backed-up little swimmers, with nowhere to go....
  23. Agent Crin.... -4" 🍆🤔
  24. Ohhhhh...what's going on here??? Focus, he ordered himself. You are a hunter. You are the Hammer. He adjusted his flashing glasses, entirely unaware that a secondary personality was currently sleeping inside his own brain, actively looking forward to a coffee date with the exact people Crin was trying to arrest.
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