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Chapter 12: The Haymarket Hoax
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Haymarket Hoax
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I nearly called FanKings to put a Grant on Seabiscuit…or DraftDule loved the following… For the first time since he'd been injured, I stopped pretending that what I missed was my linemate. I wanted Jackson
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Very enjoyable and thank you for this!
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Thanks for taking the time to comment…it is appreciated! As to the ADHD…I got better 🤭
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You and me both brother!
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Ain’t telling…🤭
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Thanks, there were times I couldn’t wait for the bright lights of away, and as a retired old fart, I am back living in my small town…
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Both actually happened…Mom was so pissed at the invented use of Monopoly money and Father Dwyer wasn’t very happy with me either..
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Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
drsawzall commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
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So funny and sweet….sometimes the obvious ain’t… Oh, it's always there whether you perceive it or not,” Quilla said, answering my question before it came out of my lips. “Take your time. He'd never rush you into anything.”
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Truly delightful and what a wide, believable varied cast of denizens!
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I so enjoyed the other two so much and now I will have to go back to read them again!
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Glad to see we on the other side are not alone 🤭
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So well done…simply could not put it down…Karen is in full CYA mode… I believe the attempt by her to minimize warnings will come back to bite her in the ass as she try’s to shift the blame elsewhere.
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So there isn’t a need for Julian to assume some responsibility for having an equal partnership… I understand where you are coming from, but fundamentally I cannot agree.
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Thanks, much of this was drawn from real-life experiences...
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Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
drsawzall commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
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Your editing and timely comments are greatly appreciated. Both the church and the duck-and-cover drills actually happened, and when my parents heard, as in a small town, nothing stays beneath the radar- Mom was unhappy with me, and Dad just smiled...
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The boys’ bathroom was another milestone in public education. The first time you walked in and faced a row of urinals with no dividers, you understood that privacy had not yet been invented...or at least had not reached our school district. Some gifted souls stood back, planted their feet, and demonstrated to the world the pneumatic pressure their kidneys could produce. Naturally, some smart aleck decided to place bits of toilet paper on the floor as distance markers, and just like that, civiliz
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The Swimming Hole Chapter 1. I owe my journal a little background before I begin this crazy tale...a story about unspoken feelings for a boy and one who discovered perspectives could have infinite horizons. But I digress dear journal, so…from the beginning. We argued in our family, partly because we didn’t have a TV. My older brother and sister were always fighting over what to watch when we did have one, until Dad picked the set up and tossed it out the front door w
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Horrified, I jumped off and rode home standing on the pedals, moving like the wind. Mother took one look at me and had me lie on the couch with my shorts and underwear around my ankles. She tried to pull the splinter out, and I screamed bloody murder. Then she wrapped some ice cubes in a facecloth, hoping to numb the area before trying again. Have you ever had an ice cube escape its confinement and pause as if deciding how far it should travel? I now know that water seeks its own level, and ice-cold water is no exception. It found the perfect valley to irrigate.
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Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
drsawzall commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
Not to mention the yards of lacy material for the manufacture of her under garments….. Spandex must love it when she orders from them…. -
Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
drsawzall commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 38 ~ Broken Glass and Bitter Truths ~
And ye shall reap what ye sow….. Oh my freaking goodness…the poor merchandise…. -
Amen brother…from your keyboard to the authors ears, and Season 2!!
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Chapter 3 - Getting the Band Back Together!
drsawzall commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Getting the Band Back Together!
Or one of my favorite porn actors back in the day, Rod Steel….
