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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    I had the timing wrong in the last chapter, the ride is coming late due to coitus interruptus...
  2. Well now...discovery is beginning, how long before the boys connect? #Hinthintwritefasterharderstronger....thanks @Danners
  3. Hoping there aren't another ten chapters before we get to the ball as Richard can't be any more obtuse as he is right now, Dickoless is on a path with a brutal ending and Daren, if he lived in the states, would be a rising star in the retardican party... Harriet's world is chock full of distractions...something has to give...do you suppose she and her fellow band mates take over the music at the ball?
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    So tender and poignant, I loved the way their love grew organically. The rose garden reminded me of the last time I was in Portland, Oregon, and visited their world-famous rose garden.
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    I'd say at least 3....
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    So...that's what happened to Mother's rose bushes.... He had spent the last three hours attempting to read a rather dense, highly technical tome on interdimensional gardening—specifically, the cultivation of aggressive, flesh-eating hydrangeas—but the princess’s relentless, high-pitched monologue had effectively butchered his concentration.
  7. drsawzall

    Dawn, part 2

    How long before the dam of self-denial bursts....🍆🍆🍆🤔
  8. Ok...I think I am becoming my grandparents...the leap in technology in "play" has left me stunned at my vanilla youth...the name of this chapter easily could have been, " This Ain't Your Grandpaw's Jerking off Sonny:.." Or, "Batteries no longer needed, it's all rechargeable!!" Or, "Speak softly to the huge lavender dildo..." Or, "If That Lavender Dildo could Talk...!!!" "You Want to lock Up What...??" "Just Where Does That Shiny Thing Go...???" "Whatever you do, Don't Lose The Key...!!!" Lastly, "You Can Trust Me, I'm The Installer..." “Really, such a thing exists?” “It does now, and if you all agree, this playroom will be the first location to have them operational. What do you guys think?” “Wait up, you mentioned the cushioned anti-fatigue mats. How would that work?” “To best explain, some playrooms have areas where the floor is cushioned for ground play. The mats used in those areas are thick, so the tap device can be embedded right into the mat.” “Interesting.” Matt then asked, “Have these been tested and worked?” “Yes, sir. In fact, if you all would like to come by our offices, I’ll have Maxwell give you a demonstration. It’s really cutting-edge, and I believe you’ll be quite impressed. At the same time, he can show you all how the voice command technology works as well.”
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Only time will tell. So....they did talk about the trust funds while showering; I have to believe it was via probing sign language secretly hidden from prying eyes...kind of like braille... See where your mind goes after too many years of self-indulgence followed by flashbacks while sober....might be time to call DoorDash and see if they will deliver from the local packy....
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    I get the feeling from reading the comments and the following, something or someone will force the boys to ''break-up''. midway through our junior year. We fell stupidly, irrevocably, and deeply in love. I was in love. I was so screwed. Then our esteemed author let this slip... The shitshow is still there but we're just ignoring it. I do, however, have inspiration for a future character that everyone will hate. Believe me folks....it's gonna happen.... The only unresolved question in this chapter is, did the boys talk about the trust while showering???
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    It would appear that the man was "gifted" not only in talent....
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    The memories are coming quicker, sometimes overlapping, having spoken the words that began this mess, Vale/Maelor must have an idea by this point how to conduct a repair in the curse/blessing. Will it have anything to do with the archaeological dig site, something found, or will it act as a nexus of ley lines?? It is frustrating to see the total lack of honesty in the way Marcus/Marco and Vale/Maelor communicate with Christopher/Ceyln. What is it that precludes this? If my head hurt the other day in confusion, it is double today...
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Oh...oh...oh my goodness...such a protuberance....this had to be filmed back in the days I wasn't exactly sober...but still that's quite the appendage....
  14. While times haven't changed much, back in the late 70's, all of the 80's and 90's, where it started to get better, being gay wasn't easy, and could be downright dangerous...From the bigotry to AIDS and back to the bigotry, it was never easy. As a teenager in the late 60's the biggest fear was herpes, a disease that lasted a lifetime. It scared the crap out of this poor old country boy...Try explaining to your parents that not only are you gay, but a gay boy handed you a lifetime sentence. I became so frigging cautious I went to the bars, back then we had the alternative newspaper called the Boston Phoenix, and they broke major stories, covered the news everyone in power, authority, or civic leaders wanted swept under the rug. Like the FM radio station WCBN they catered to the younger generation. The best part about the Phoenix were the classified pages at the back end of the paper. It was Grinder or Tinder before the age of the internet. I met, and did so very carefully, so many "straight' boys and boys who fulfilled my gay fantasies. I never went anywhere without condoms in my wallet or pants. Funny story aside, Mom found a pack of condoms in the bottom to the washing machine while I was still in high school. This was when dinosaurs still roamed the earth folks...Needless to say, Dad pulled me aside and told me to keep it wrapped up, they weren't ready for grandbabies, I gave him my solemn promise that I would never do such a thing. He patted me on the shoulder and walked away never realizing he did not have a thing to worry about... Thanks to the Boston Phoenix, not only did I get to explore my sexuality with every flavor of boy, twinks, and older men, but had the addresses of every gay bar in the area and beyond... Thanks @Jason Rimbaud for the trip down memory lane... The Boston Phoenix (1966-2013) WBCN | Boston radio, alternative rock | Britannica
  15. Oh the memories of those days....
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 27

    Thank you for so succintly saying what so many of us feel, and kudos to @Summerabbacat for posting this song. For me, and for my own selfish reasons, I thought this day would never come. I am saddened beyond belief; it is her songwriting that stunned me the most, over three thousand songs attributed to her. Her humble roots started in the backwoods of Appalachia, and in so many of her works one can hear the strings of bluegrass, perhaps the most democratic and original of American music. One may say her music truly is a coat of many colors... RIP Dolly..... From the following article, History of Bluegrass Music | The roots of bluegrass can be traced to the different waves of immigration to America, starting back as early as the early 16000's. Immigrants from Ireland, Scotland, England, Europe, and Africa contributed blues and jazz, gospel, Northern European ballads and dance tunes, and African American genres. As the settlers began to move into North and South Carolina, Tennessee, Kentucky, Virginia, West Virginia, and other parts of the American South, they wrote songs about daily life in the new land. Since many of these people lived in remote areas, their songs reflected life on the farm or in the hills. This music was often referred to as hillbilly or old-time music. Its development included the blending of elements from gospel music, the blues, early jazz, and various forms of commercial music. The proliferation of phonograph and radio technology in the early 20th century brought this music out of the hills and into the homes of people all over the United States. There were gourd-bodied lutes with long and short strings in Africa, but the five-string banjo played in bluegrass music emerged in the Americas through the adaptation of African musical traditions by enslaved people of African descent. Early banjos were made from gourds, calabashes, and wood, with skin heads, and often had three long strings and one short string. The banjo became a central part of African American spiritual, ritual, and communal life, carried across the Atlantic and throughout the Americas, evolving into the five-string style we recognize today. Interesting histories can also be told about the other instruments used in bluegrass music: the fiddle (same as a violin), the steel-string guitar, the mandolin, the plucked string bass, and the resonator guitar (also known as a “Dobro,” with Hawaiian and Slovak ancestry).
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Early days yet, the captain has been approached as to a possible business venture and one has to wonder, will Sam stay with the ship, minding Julian's cargo of coffee beans to port, or handle the logistical business of the island side? I can understand the attraction, but love like that takes time to mature...
  18. Now why does the QB hate so much??? And has Noah earned playing time?
  19. drsawzall

    Feel The Rush

    This looks to be all kinds of fun...
  20. Oh...dear lord in heaven, hopefully someone spiked her drink and put her to bed...to sleep it off...
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 21

    Wow, this was an intense chapter with some unexpected developments... Christopher recognised the chant. Every phrase belonged. Every cadence. Every invocation. Then one word changed. One word. Another. A phrase forced into the ancient rhythm, desperation bending sacred language towards impossible purpose. Then... Maelor had not set out to create a curse. He had tried to prevent a farewell. Marco was not cursed because he lives forever. Christopher was not cursed because he is reborn. They're cursed because neither had been allowed to finish grieving. The curse had begun at the precise moment Maelor believed love could be preserved by refusing to let death complete its work.
  22. drsawzall

    Rock Stars

    I had to go with WOW...this chapter had me rereading several parts many times!!! Richard...Richard...Richard....Dickoless is stringing you along, will he have a change of heart at the dance?
  23. A complicated society, but as noted, Henry should do well!!!
  24. And the hits and reading lists just keep on growing and coming!
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    My deepest thanks for all of your kind words. As noted in my comments, this story involved quite a bit of research, and all in all, it was fun to put together.
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