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  1. Much to wrap up with one chapter to go...
  2. Shawn went and did the wrong thing; his best hope is to become a double agent and bring Director Green down along with Professor Durand...
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    Rough House

    Having grown up on the 'other' side of the tracks from Brandon, I've met a few just like him, never quite understanding their lack of reality at times...
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    Chapter 6

    A chapter of discoveries for Finn, realizing it is the person who matters, not the legends of those who weren't!
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    Chapter 5

    Could not have said it any better, other than Ain's little head seems to rule his body in quiet times...his focus is all over the place, is it a result of his powers?
  6. Noah seems to be quite the charmer, and at odds with his controlling parents...where is this seaside community located, is it England...the US???
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    Chapter 12

    And the following article appeared in the NY Times today...talk about life imitating art...All about the market, legal/and non-legal in isopod collecting and trade.... Pillbugs Are Getting Top Dollar Online. Poachers Have Noticed. - The New York Times
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    Chapter 12

    Resulting in an aurora borealis of isopiod sparkles when the protocols be damned and the chaos is embraced...Hopefully, Garrett isn't looking through the window; it could be contagious, much to Kyle's surprise... I think Orel is your most engaging character to date and his interaction with Kyle was truly priceless...
  9. And some growing pains in the near future... Gavin patted his son’s shoulder. “Once we are back home, Jason and I are going to explore our options. Which means getting places valued and seeing what is and isn’t possible.” Jason grinned. “What he means is there’ll be maximum disruption, having to keep the place tidy.” “And no wandering around naked, or near naked.” Gavin raised an eyebrow at his son. Matthew looked alarmed. “Won’t the valuers make an appointment?”
  10. Plans within plans
  11. Only fools rush in without a solid plan...Shawn is dealing with multiple layers of duplicity here...it's like trying to pick one snake out of a basket full of them...That and I can't believe I am recommending patience here.... And, therein lies the danger to Shawmn and all his friends... "I'll keep poking around," Prof. Petrov added. "I agree that you're no use to anyone, including yourself, if you get revealed too soon. The current control system doesn't like things it can't understand."
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    The New Bag Boy

    I loved this, every young gay boy's fantasy...there were a couple of Brians when you should have used Ted... "You're welcome Mrs. Travis. I'll be heading out now. Like Brian said, lots of cart wrangling. I'm going to go home and take a hot shower. Chase away the sore muscles."
  13. Another thought, they should take this public. Bad press is not what a studio would want, and it just might be the sword of public opinion that kills the bitch.... Ask yourself, how will the paying audiences react, and just who would they root for???? Needless to say, I am enjoying this story!!!
  14. It needs to be said again, after the fiasco preceding their flight to Milan, my thought was to start the divorce as it were, while they were on their way. I would have had an attorney tie her ass up so fast, it would make your head spin….She ceased to be anything at that moment…..legally she was not acting in her “client’s “ best interest and subsequently failed in her professional duties…
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    Chapter 3

    These boys are forging an unbreakable bond that will serve them well. Tomas whispered: “Ronan… I thought I would fall before the end. But when I saw thee beside me, I found strength.” I’m reminded of an old fable, the one where the father has seven quarrelsome sons. He gathers them together and asks the youngest to break one of the sticks he is holding, and does so easily. He then takes seven sticks and asks for the oldest one to snap all seven together, and he can’t. Asking the youngest what did they just learn? He responds that together they are unbreakable.
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    Chapter 11

    I think Oliver suffered a temporary lapse in judgment, and once the info in the "little red book" comes out, he will see the light of day....and it is past time to let it be known it exists...
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    Chapter 33 S3

    Loved the skunks, here's hoping the trespasser learned a lesson...Preston looks like a good friend to have as they move on with their lives...is it possible he might have a different supernatural ability??? As to the baseball cards...WOW...
  18. You mean the condition where Former quarterback Tom Brady announces he's coming out of retirement??? Just kidding...
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    Chapter 10

    Exactamento...the fastest way of neutering, or is it spaying, Tarquin, is to get the facts out ASAP through a highly qualified barrister, funding isn't an issue. Think of the fun of watching the arsehole sweat and suffer over the course of many chapters.. #makethebastardpay....
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    Chapter 10

    Or a prison colony...
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    Chapter 4

    Something is off regarding the Bulwark...Not sure I trust her, considering Ain seems to have 'issues' with the herald...what is the source of animosity between the two? "Yeah," Ainreth confirmed through gritted teeth, glaring at the Herald, his formerly mostly relaxed pose now rigid. Fennrin expected him to say more than that, but he stayed silent, continuing to scowl. Fennrin truly wondered why seemed to dislike the Herald so much. The man had so far seemed very reasonable.
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    Adjudicator

    Don't I know, they have been, my team that is, absorbing way too much of my time, and going to games in the rain, sleet, and snow has been a struggle, thank goodness yesterday's game was in Denver... Going through this story and trying to keep the multiple story lines informs me that stopping the assassination is going to be quite the fustercluck...not mention several personal lives....I suspect no one is going to come out of this unscathed or unchanged!!
  23. The plot thickens, and yes...phasing through the outer shell of the spacecraft would't be pleasant...What game is Professor Petrov playing?
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    The Chase.

    An interesting beginning!!
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    Chapter 10

    It is well past time others become aware of the notebook, such as Lydia, Oliver, Mrs Patel, Andrew, and Tommy...Notarized copies made and the original secured for safekeeping.... It is time to go on the offensive, send Tarquin daily snippets of the juicy stuff, just to remind him he's standing on a rapidly disolving pile of dung... "I am scared," Orel admitted, so softly Finn almost didn't hear it. "Me too." "But I am more scared of going back. Of you being gone." Orel clutched the notebook to his chest. "I didn't get a shelf and a rug and a stone just to give them back. And I didn't get you back just to lose you to a cage." He held the notebook out to Finn. "We fight. With the truth." Orel and Finn hold the upper hand; it's time to f'ing use it!!!! For god's sake, show some f'ing initiative!!!
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