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  1. Plans within plans
  2. Only fools rush in without a solid plan...Shawn is dealing with multiple layers of duplicity here...it's like trying to pick one snake out of a basket full of them...That and I can't believe I am recommending patience here.... And, therein lies the danger to Shawmn and all his friends... "I'll keep poking around," Prof. Petrov added. "I agree that you're no use to anyone, including yourself, if you get revealed too soon. The current control system doesn't like things it can't understand."
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    The New Bag Boy

    I loved this, every young gay boy's fantasy...there were a couple of Brians when you should have used Ted... "You're welcome Mrs. Travis. I'll be heading out now. Like Brian said, lots of cart wrangling. I'm going to go home and take a hot shower. Chase away the sore muscles."
  4. Another thought, they should take this public. Bad press is not what a studio would want, and it just might be the sword of public opinion that kills the bitch.... Ask yourself, how will the paying audiences react, and just who would they root for???? Needless to say, I am enjoying this story!!!
  5. It needs to be said again, after the fiasco preceding their flight to Milan, my thought was to start the divorce as it were, while they were on their way. I would have had an attorney tie her ass up so fast, it would make your head spin….She ceased to be anything at that moment…..legally she was not acting in her “client’s “ best interest and subsequently failed in her professional duties…
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    Chapter 3

    These boys are forging an unbreakable bond that will serve them well. Tomas whispered: “Ronan… I thought I would fall before the end. But when I saw thee beside me, I found strength.” I’m reminded of an old fable, the one where the father has seven quarrelsome sons. He gathers them together and asks the youngest to break one of the sticks he is holding, and does so easily. He then takes seven sticks and asks for the oldest one to snap all seven together, and he can’t. Asking the youngest what did they just learn? He responds that together they are unbreakable.
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    Chapter 11

    I think Oliver suffered a temporary lapse in judgment, and once the info in the "little red book" comes out, he will see the light of day....and it is past time to let it be known it exists...
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    Chapter 33 S3

    Loved the skunks, here's hoping the trespasser learned a lesson...Preston looks like a good friend to have as they move on with their lives...is it possible he might have a different supernatural ability??? As to the baseball cards...WOW...
  9. You mean the condition where Former quarterback Tom Brady announces he's coming out of retirement??? Just kidding...
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    Chapter 10

    Exactamento...the fastest way of neutering, or is it spaying, Tarquin, is to get the facts out ASAP through a highly qualified barrister, funding isn't an issue. Think of the fun of watching the arsehole sweat and suffer over the course of many chapters.. #makethebastardpay....
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    Chapter 10

    Or a prison colony...
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    Chapter 4

    Something is off regarding the Bulwark...Not sure I trust her, considering Ain seems to have 'issues' with the herald...what is the source of animosity between the two? "Yeah," Ainreth confirmed through gritted teeth, glaring at the Herald, his formerly mostly relaxed pose now rigid. Fennrin expected him to say more than that, but he stayed silent, continuing to scowl. Fennrin truly wondered why seemed to dislike the Herald so much. The man had so far seemed very reasonable.
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    Adjudicator

    Don't I know, they have been, my team that is, absorbing way too much of my time, and going to games in the rain, sleet, and snow has been a struggle, thank goodness yesterday's game was in Denver... Going through this story and trying to keep the multiple story lines informs me that stopping the assassination is going to be quite the fustercluck...not mention several personal lives....I suspect no one is going to come out of this unscathed or unchanged!!
  14. The plot thickens, and yes...phasing through the outer shell of the spacecraft would't be pleasant...What game is Professor Petrov playing?
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    The Chase.

    An interesting beginning!!
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    Chapter 10

    It is well past time others become aware of the notebook, such as Lydia, Oliver, Mrs Patel, Andrew, and Tommy...Notarized copies made and the original secured for safekeeping.... It is time to go on the offensive, send Tarquin daily snippets of the juicy stuff, just to remind him he's standing on a rapidly disolving pile of dung... "I am scared," Orel admitted, so softly Finn almost didn't hear it. "Me too." "But I am more scared of going back. Of you being gone." Orel clutched the notebook to his chest. "I didn't get a shelf and a rug and a stone just to give them back. And I didn't get you back just to lose you to a cage." He held the notebook out to Finn. "We fight. With the truth." Orel and Finn hold the upper hand; it's time to f'ing use it!!!! For god's sake, show some f'ing initiative!!!
  17. Sadly, some of these stunadas grow up despite social darwinism...
  18. Cahrlie's aunt and uncle are in it up past their arseholes...and what a spiteful bitch she is serving a meal such as that... in direct opposition to my preference for not eating flour-based products. And amongst the vegetables were Jerusalem artichokes, designed to induce smelly wind, as well as being (I discovered) one of Charlie’s bugbears. That she was aware of these problems was clear when she commented that —as it was only a pie—she was sure I would be OK with it and that Charlie would not notice the artichokes amongst the other vegetables. So suck it up.
  19. What a sweet chapter!
  20. Oh-oh
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    Chapter 3

    I am truly enjoying this story. It just keeps getting better!!
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    Chapter 2

    What will Fenn find out about himself, and will he be helpful against what we saw in the first chapter? **/*************************/( Ain swallowed, taking a few deep breaths. The Bulwark was not going to be happy to hear about the Daybreaker being defeated at all, much less as embarrassingly easily as he had been. He had been an inch from death, and he had the feeling that this woman could have easily finished the job had she wanted to.
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    Chapter 9

    #TeamMrsPatel
  24. Things are moving fast…loved the images
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