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drsawzall

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  1. Missed this family for a bit and glad to see this chapter!!! Picked up a new slang word...pukka!!! Urban Dictionary: pukka And so do I!!!! “No! But the other day, Rory’s door was open, he had his nose more or less embedded in Slav’s bum.” “Slav’s capacious bum.” “Full of ripe smells and…” Jason broke down laughing. “OK, I get you. And no. I don’t go there. I like my guys clean and sparkly, thank you, like a certain person next to me.”
  2. Wow..,.there's a lot of ground...ahem...space to cover here...the upgrade just in the nick of time, who was the 'helping hand' that instituted it, and did they have foreknowledge that it was needed?!!! What of the remainder of the crews and the instructors? Did anyone else survive? Was this 'incident' part of a plot by the Director and possibly Professor Stick-Up-His-Ass? It would seem there is a concerted effort to 'neutralize' Shawn... Where is the 'boy' writing the AI program, having dessert? Is this boy someone who will be coming into conflict with the Director and the 'established' order??? What's the difference in their timelines???
  3. Color me hooked!!!
  4. drsawzall

    Poetry Deep Dive 8

    An incredible amount of talent here!
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 55

    Ah...the sweetness of young love!!!
  6. I wonder if Asher and Axel will connect???
  7. Thank you for sharing this with us, I look forward to what's next!!!
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    I wonder if the guys realize or have any inkling that they are bromancing....
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    And when does he have time for studying?? Talk about busy!!
  10. Will Shawn's cover finally be 'blown'??? And what's going on with Professor Stick Up His Ass??? Is this a 'true' emergency?
  11. I want my own Percy, handy tool included....yowzer!!! Santa, if you are listening.....
  12. I am freaking curious to knowwhat Seb and Robert are looking for...all that effort to get to the mine, and for what???
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Finally, a responsible driver...first a motorcycle and then a car, I understand the motorcycle was left to him, where did the car come from???
  14. And another thing, this story is not good for my diet!! Loved this chapter!!
  15. Have you actual resturant experience? The realism is fantastic!!
  16. Yes indeed... The GIF twigged a memory from yearsback...
  17. I hope reese is smart enough to realize what he's just done when he wakes and kicks the pills to the curb...
  18. Good news, there were no pills to be had, bad news...the wine...If this is going to work, they will need a sous chef quickly!
  19. Can Reese get through to Dexter? It would seem that Dexter has multiple triggers...
  20. It would seem the bottom isn't too far off...In Dexter's case, detox is urgently needed...
  21. Late to the party, looks to be very interesting!! I have/had a friend much like Dexter, the world by the balls, but being drunk at 8:30 in the morning destroys careers as well as friendships...
  22. drsawzall

    Resummoned

    Here's hoping love finds Sakis...
  23. An interesting beginning, and considering the following, I sense trouble/conflict ahead... The truth is, no matter what, Espers and Guides can never be equals. There will always be a power imbalance because while Espers need Guides, Guides don’t need Espers…”
  24. Louis and Thomas Englert have met, and Louis may correctly suspect he's been in the house before. Having learned the sum total of what Louis knows, what is Thomas's next move??? I was hoping we get to know PJ's full name, perhaps there's another story there!! Note: A word about names. Detective Sergeant Joss Burgess is called ‘Joss’ by his friends, but his boyfriend calls him ‘JB’. His boyfriend is uniformly known as ‘PJ’, and we never find out PJ’s full name.
  25. I get the feeling the immediate aftermath of the fire is still to be dealt with. Thinking of Chris Steel, along with the rest of the slaves who survived. It sounds like, from what Mistress Carolyn noted, that there was insurance on the farmhouse, more importantly, that the repair to the gas stove was faulty, and there may be some financial compensation due to negligence, along with shoddy workmanship. I can't recall...what of Sarah's husband? And Miss Brittany needs to marry as well as Alice... as not so cleverly noted by Mistress Carolyn's comment about a future mother-in-law......and how is her health? Tom has truly been put through the wringer to life's washing machine...and Frank drinking whiskey... I'd like to see more about how Sarah, Brittany, and Alice truly feel about each other. It seems Alice's independent income may be a source of jealousy... And Frank...Miss Parker would love a crack at his child-making organ...could that be a possible spot of tension with him??? Loved this chapter, so many unresolved issues yet to be dealt with, along with those festering in the background...
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