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Chapter 44 - Three
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 44 - Three
It all seems too convenient, Xylda has Twani musing on about going to Falland, killing the King and Queen. To me, it is a clever way to get Bix back and the capture of The Ghost.... Can you say...mission accomplished??? -
This is all Noah's fault, and Nick needs to flush him out of his system... Should be an interesting weekend to say the least, and bring on the visit from Grandma!
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S2 E11: Careful, Dylan…
drsawzall commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E11: Careful, Dylan…
Dylan is like a candle, he'll burn out by the time he hits his late 20's, and way past trading on his looks... I'm sorry, but Troy is a vacuous airhead...destined for a career in the back office somewhere unimportant. Poor Elliot, he deserves so much better.... -
Let's not forget the important part of my comment, here's a hint...Volvo?
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Wow...wow, I did not see that ending coming...well done!!!
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I had to go with angry, I have known Jason's father's twin and a few more like them...and I am better for it... What did happen to Jason's father, and we know old Volvos never die, they simply turn into rust... What happened to Blake, it may have been mentioned earlier, while I was under the influence of the meds while recovering...
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Perhaps it is for the best, as something has to give, and neither can see a way forward...and we are stuck in quicksand.
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I'm hooked and eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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We often forget we don't live in a TV sitcom world. That life for many of us is gritty, full of dark secrets and unpleasant encounters. In a world such as this, growing up during puberty, asd it wreaks its havoc, can lead to all sorts of uncomfortable, yet exciting encounters as we try to figure out just who we are. A reminder of my own struggle to escape such a world as this. A story is meant to engage, to make you think and comment, and boy, did I comment. Kudos to the author for engaging his readers so.
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If you can survive stepping out your door from the deadly predators inside the house, what's outside has a better than 50/50 chance of getting you before you get to work...
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I'm glad to have waited to finish this, having had major surgery last week. Had I read Ch 24 while on the pain meds and seeing 2 Stokers might have set me back a week or three... Seriously, Billy and Miller together during the Regan years, I think it is time enough to have processed what Hugo had to do, I hope he will find forgiveness in his heart... If Dottie is gone from the streams and off to her final nothingness. Why not Miller as well? Then there is Henry. What kind of role will he play? lastly...In what order should I read the Carter books?
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And let's not forget the Purtian from book 1 hunting witches....
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I only wish Dottie had a few seconds to understand she was about to be ended...however...
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And here I am thinking of a task for our dear imp... Henry nodded with a sigh. “The integrated younger me, was shot and killed…” “By that son o’ a bitch Miller,” Stoker growled in fury. “I ate him,” Thomas murmured absently. “He tasted like Misery dipped in Sadness, it was quite filling.” Everyone of the companions gaped at the boy. “What?” Thomas looked confused. “I like that flavour.”
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Chapter 43 - Threesome
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 43 - Threesome
Drumroll please... Bix’s hurt softened. “You told her about me?” Tawni nodded. “Okay, so, what’s her name?” “Xylda.” -
Home, would appear to be wherever they are!!
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I'm guessing "Topher" is going to get busted...the photo was a very bad idea.....
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Brent is gonna lose it if he can't remember he is on a team...his sulking has to be noticed... without his back-up goons he's just a pathetic dirt bag...
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So glad to see you are going to continue with this, like others, a quick review of some earlier chapters brought the story and some of your others back! Looking forward to so much more!!!! BTW...Brent is all mouth, I suspect, pressed he'd fold like a cheap paper bag...
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Ok...all of you past a certain age, like Jason, raise your hand if you've had a similar moment... Jason nodded, leaning closer to the blurry image. "It's got thirty thousand likes, does that mean it's going virus?"
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I could see a book coming out from the radio program(s) called Fireside Chats With A Chipmunk... Not sure I understand the need to pry into Jacob's relationship or lack thereof..
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Hopefully, Roku and Tomas can move past Laren and Solan...and spend some time getting to know each other better...
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Yes, it does, and those like the a-hole Lauren do get caught. The boys realize what happened, will they have the nerve to call him out on it, to send him packing, or inform the authorities?
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Chapter 42 - Muddy
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 42 - Muddy
Will Tawani be able to overcome those kryptonite charms??
