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Everything posted by drsawzall
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All I got is...
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That's one way to start off with a bang.....
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I would expect the Chris just might thrive in this new setting...that is if Matthew allows him to do so...
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Part One: At The Movies
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: At The Movies
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Part One: At The Movies
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: At The Movies
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I think what happened here @Geron Kees, @Summerabbacat, @Al Norris, is that Will incidentally/accidently has created the prime suspect for Joey's murder... Like others I simply cannot fathom how Will could still be in love with the parasite.....all I got is.....
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It should prove to be very interesting to say the least....will they be able to co-exist???
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I hate that I love this story so frigging much...parts and pieces are perambulating across my scattered synapses...saw a news report regarding a new digital gang called 764, and it triggered the following memory/snippet... FBI hunts digital cult ‘764’ forcing teens into abuse, bomb threats, and self-harm “Whaz dis, homes?” Teyshawn stifled a groan as Silas Green stepped between him and the building’s nearest exit. “Youz lookin like a rich cracker7 now, huh? Too good for da hood?” “It’s required for a school event. Believe me, I am not wearing this by choice.” Teyshawn tried unsuccessfully to move around the human blockade. “I’m going to be late, Silas. Please?” “Please? Listen, homies. Dey makin’ diz boy into a fiiine whitey. We don’t want no whiteys in the 624.” Silas pulled up the front of his oversized sweatshirt to reveal a large, silver handgun wedged grotesquely into the belted waistband of his sagging, oversized jeans. He covered himself and the gun reluctantly at the sound of the door opening behind him. What are the chances/odds that Damir stumbles/meets up with Silas Green and the 624 or Silas is a true Turd Jr in the making and decides to go after Teyshawn and friends??? I'd hate/love another chapter now/soon.......
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Produced by a descendants of one Francis Bacon perhaps???
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Chapter 5 - Edgedale
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Edgedale
They've let their misery poison their minds and their surroundings left to decay, much like what is happening to the inhabitants...... -
Part One: At The Movies
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: At The Movies
Ok all....raise your hands if you have done the same....- 28 comments
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The Turd known as WSIII isn't very a good actor, he's leaving clues all over the place. While Damir drove an hour and a half away to see medical attention, it isn't going to buy him anonymity, I suspect because of the nature of the attack, there will be a wide-cast notification to medical facilities. Where did he leave Mary's broken heel??? WSIII's mother is sharper that thought, she will be able, in the light of the day, begin to sort out what happened, and henry, will anyone discover what you think you've so cleverly hidden??? When Walter begins to recover, will he remember what Damir whispered to him??? Roger has the gist of it; will he seek answers from former associates??? How long will they watch over those who witnessed the attack? How effective can/will Damir be...time is running out??? So many other thoughts are running thru my head....
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Well said, and so very true!!!
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Part One: At The Movies
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: At The Movies
Me too!!!!! Dylan is duplicitous little snake isn't he??? Just what did Tyler say to Devin, while Brandon sat with Mindy??? Glad to see the date went very well!!!- 28 comments
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Not much to admire about Troy either, he made off with Seth's food as well!!
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What a meal and gathering, and as noted, the flying, insect pest has yet to be heard from...and there is still the possibility of even more treasure to be found as well!!
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Talk about what is called "Stinking Thinking".... Aidan insisted we have a celebratory dinner after Nikki's big news. While I was grateful that Nikki had somehow sold three of my paintings and handed me a one-man show and a new job on a silver platter, I couldn't help feeling that I didn't deserve any of it, or that it was all somehow a well-intentioned plot hatched by Nikki and Aidan to cheer me up. Sounds like someone needs to get in a car with Killian while Killian is driving blindfolded...WTF??? After everything Joey the frigging Putz did??? "Aidan..." "I've wanted so badly to tell you that I loved you, but I knew I had to wait, that you had to make the first move." "Aidan, last night was a mistake." Punching him in the stomach wouldn't have created the effect those words had on him. He seemed to cave in as his face fell. "What?" "We shouldn't have...done what we did." "Done what? Say it, Will. We shouldn't have had sex? What do you mean? You came to me. I thought you wanted me." "I don't know what I wanted. I still don't. That's the problem. I still love Joey, and right now I can't separate what I feel for him and what happened last night. Maybe I did want you, but what if I only went to you because I needed to feel loved, because I couldn't have Joey?" One can only hope Will was dreaming the ending of the last chapter....he needs therapy ASAP!!!!
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Someone needs a dope slap and an attitude adjustment...pronto...or he may end up like his mother in the future... While this was taking place, the seats would jerk about and pivot with every act that was taking place on the screen. I was glad when we finally reached the end of the ride, so we could move on to something more thrilling. “That was fun,” my mom said when the ride ended. “I guess, but it would have been more fun if we were still in elementary school,” I replied snarkily. “So, where do we go next?” Devin quickly stated before my parents could react to my comment. So...there is an evil skin walker near, best to let the grand's know ASAP...and nice to see the bullies taken care of...
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Bob the Blabbermouth Bed
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Bob the Blabbermouth Bed
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Bob the Blabbermouth Bed
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Bob the Blabbermouth Bed
It must be a universal truth.... "My mirror reflects what happens in front of it, so I get it straight, and bounced. I tell ya, you don't miss much that way." "Can I borrow your mirror next time?" "No. You wouldn't be strong enough to hold it. You'd probably let it hit the floor and break into a hundred pieces, Nightstand." "You guys always pick on me because I'm little." Tall Boy and Mirrored Dresser echoed each other's responses, "Well, size does matter." -
Is this where the Railroad song originates?
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To the Range! - Part 3
drsawzall commented on Late to the party's story chapter in To the Range! - Part 3
The job of any parent is to guide their child!!! -
Passion excuses many errors in judgement....
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Chapter 4 - Into the Wilds
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Into the Wilds
Don't touch the stove dear...its hot.....a moment later...ow!!!! Never listen to common sense..... -
So how many Quana's are there? Are they cloning? Also, have they hidden tracking devices where the sun don't shine as well? “You’ve gotten sharper. I’m impressed you noticed the bug,” Edwin said with a chuckle, taking the dish and tossing it into a black box before snapping the lid shut. “Wait, is that gum wrapping?” “I had to improvise—it was all I had left. I have no idea where the rest of my gear went.” I said, a little frustrated. “Also, I think Klaus’s training really helped…” For some reason, my butt suddenly started hurting, but I decided to ignore what was clearly a hallucination. “So is it safe to keep that thing around? Could it reveal our location or something?”
