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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Very enjoyable and thanks...loved the following!! He put both bottles on the counter and glanced at my notebook, which I closed, which he pretended not to notice. “Hike later?” he said. “There’s a trail behind the lighthouse. Views that’ll make your metaphors behave.”
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    Chapter 27

    Leo needs to understand Jessa was thrust into their situation just as he was....
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    Chapter 10

    So Blake survives to torment Pitt another day, and in much better shape than the claret....
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    Chapter 10

    Neither do their bedrooms with, ahem, dirty socks that were used for a secondary purpose.... Or ...The way not is....
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    Chapter 15

    All of a sudden, Caleb is number 1 on the most likely list...is this a distraction???
  6. Was the dream a warning??? A hint of Final Destination here as well!!
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    Coffee

    So sayeth the civet... "It is... a bit of a waste." I stared at my reflection in the viewport, my eyes-- blue as a cloudless sky--staring back at me. "But at this point, it's too late to dwell on it."
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    Chapter 19

    It would seem that John's injuries are very serious and a lengthy recuperation is in order...
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    Chapter 18

    Hoo boy...things are a bit dicey!!!
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    Chapter 15

    Was Marco's body tested for drugs? While Asshat may not have seen Killian at the barn, his car is at the Haynes's house. Will he see it and go back to the barn???
  11. I have to believe that the paperboy was shooting blanks...
  12. But of course... There was a sudden click. And the stone door blew inward, revealing a veritable army outside the door. The fight was back on.
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    Chapter 10

    Team Daoel, Jovin????
  14. Looks to be very interesting, when I clicked on your story, there was a Authors Needing Help Banner, try clicking on that in your search for an editor
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    Chapter 8

    I can't see Sam staying. How can he go back to the blacksmith's shop???
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    Chapter 17

    To hear Sam asked to play it again?
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    Chapter 16

    I suspect at some point, a trip to 1949 may be in order... Sinjin, obviously, is more than he seems... and would like to know him a bit better....I like that he's confident about Hugo and concerned by his comment about Stoker... Words of wisdom by our little game keeper.... “It ain’t right fer sure,” Stoker agreed. “Yer better off callin’ ‘im sommat else. Gives yer more control over ‘im, I reckon.”
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    Chapter 9

    I am willing to bet, our midshipman faces a long recovery, and what of midshipman Vane???
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    Chapter 17

    Be very careful not to slip inside the urethra, it could be a wild ride!!!
  20. Early Victorian titillation perhaps??? Copies hung in all the finest gentlemen's clubs????
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    At some point, these various sources will/should be competing against each other...
  22. A historical supernatural thriller that you will have difficulty putting down!
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  23. At last, Brother Mathias met his match, consumed by his own hatred and met his end at the power he sought to corrupt...Marie with the knife was poetic justice.... And Lucien, a golden child, portends a bright future!!!
  24. Uh-oh...someone needs to be...
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