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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 3 of 10

    Troy is in desperate need of help and medications....
  2. The first of many 'public' steps taken, I did miss however, one Venetia Murray...
  3. drsawzall

    Skull's Watch

    And after all this , they are no closer to ending all of this....there has to be a sunny day oceanside somewhere...
  4. Oh...the things we should say when it is time to say what we feel...
  5. Early days yet, but hope is growing or so it would seem... Ewan turned to go—but paused. “For what it’s worth,” he said without looking back, “I like your mother. And I respect her.” Kieran grunted. Then, quietly, “Yeah. Alright.” And Ewan walked off. Kieran stood alone in the courtyard, the wind tugging at his cloak. Maybe leadership wasn’t about controlling everything.. Maybe it was about letting go of what didn’t matter, so you could fight for what did. And right now, that was keeping Arcum’s soldiers alive. Those disgruntled nobles have a pathetically short memory...they were once nearly food for demons... Seraphine isn't doing that great of a job concealing what it is like to have a splintery stick up her butt.... Rory needs a giant bottle of testicular fortitude, assert his rank, and f'uk the rest of the high and mighty elves and tell 'em to assume the positions....
  6. I think those legs need a closer exam after that strenuous workout...Pronto Troy, freaking pronto...time's a wasting...
  7. This story keeps going from strength to strength and just keeps getting better!!!
  8. Well...as it's a moving island, it could have been named U-Haul....
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    I suspect the man at the funeral/interment was Joey's father...other than that, Will continues to go from moron, simpleton, idiot, and...wait did I mention moron already??? Let's not do the right thing, take an attorney with you when you go to the police station...and...leave 'em in the dark regarding the necklace and the envelope it came in.... Will...Joey's family should know about the baby as a matter of simple courtesy...and you are playing with Catlin's well-being for all the wrong reasons in the worst way possible... It is as if someone is trying to frame you for the murder. Have you washed those pants yet? Perhaps accede to Joey's mother's wishes and give her the f'ing necklace... But then again, at this moment in time, 20 to life, just may be doing you and society a favor...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 44

    Looks like Bobby's talents have come to the fore... For goodness' sake, put in an indoor bathroom...Going outside to the outhouse in Mid-January isn't the thrill one wants after the first or second time... Two weeks later Dad and Uncle Joe made a visit. Dad had the details of my accounts and the numbers I found hard to believe. I never knew how much gold Dad had placed in my bank box or how much he converted to cash. I did know one thing, I didn’t have to worry about not having enough money.
  11. Mommy dearest, what secrets will you reveal now that you, we all know there are compelling reasons your sister is the Queen....in your lust for Gab's power, you played your hand poorly, as it has been said before, not so wicked smaart!!! On a side note, I find it interesting that she reeked of Lillies...back in the day when folks held wakes and funerals at home, bunches of Lillies were placed in the room as the smell of them masked the smell of the bodies' decay...
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 2 of 10

    Wow...aren't we just a tad delusional, self-absorbed, and a potential serial killer in the making... "Well of course your day was fine," I called back as I started climbing the carpeted stairs to my room. "All you had to do was babysit handicaps for an hour or two." "I wish you wouldn't call them that, with that tone…" As she muttered I was rolling my eyes, kicking open the door to my bedroom and slinging off my bag. Dropping onto my bed with an exhale I forgot about her and brought my mind back to Seth Boughton. My perfect, sexy, soccer-playing boyfriend. I gave a lover's sigh and dragged down my pillow, clenching it tight to my body as I daydreamed. ******************* And in who's arms are you gonna cry in when you screw this all up??? Seth is not a special kind of person. At the end of the day he is still just a sporty ego-driven teen who desperately wants to fit in, just like everyone else. When school finishes he would find a job, a nice sweet slut, marry and have a couple of kids. They would've been so happy together, Seth and his wife. Whereas I would be stuck with some self-loathing freak. Fuck that. To me, all gay people are the same. They either work too much or they drink too much, and all that comes down to how desperately unhappy they are with themselves. I'm better than that and I wasn't going to take “no” for an answer. Just as well, now I have a perfect boyfriend because I didn't settle for less than I knew I deserved.
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Poor Liam, confronted with an ass that puts his girlfriend's to shame, that and a burning desire to tap it...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Personally, I would like you to continue to keep the story character-driven and add some world-building as needed to fill in some of the backstory and augment the thrust of the story!
  15. drsawzall

    Always in Service

    Anduin is pathetically sad, he's a random nothing burger looking to give indigestion to all in his presence. The truly sad part in all of this is he knows he's just that...incapable of change, wallowing as a default mechanism...His cloud of misery gives everyone the vapors in his wake as he traverses the halls of that house...quite frankly he's become repetitive and boring...it is past time for he and Claire to tumble down several flights of stairs falling onto a basket freshly sharpened knives.
  16. drsawzall

    The Invitation

    You could raise the flag on the pole sticking up at the front of my pants... I watched him, waiting. “I don’t want this to be a thing we fumble through,” he said. “I want to do it right.” His voice was low. Measured. Like saying it out loud cost him something. “You caught me off guard last night,” he continued. “Not in a bad way—just… I wasn’t prepared to want something like that.” I blinked. Something like that?
  17. With a bit of the Beav' mixed in. Lord knows just why his popped into my head, must be all that fresh air from doing chores outside this morn...
  18. Anyone got a set of jumper cables so I can jump start my muse???
  19. drsawzall

    Shelter

  20. Ya know, when @Lee Wilson gives us a chapter like this, we all know the wheels are gonna fall off the wagon...we got appearances by a Mel, and it sounds like relatives from the dark ages coming up....
  21. 10 days with an ex, and a guy who tweaks your sensibilities and a dozen or more folks you've never met...what could possibly happen????
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 43

    I suspect David will be building all sorts of cabins for this campground...and a robust septic system....
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 1 of 10

    Troy, it would be ok to carefully step down from that ladder of self-infatuation...
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I think the shorts were an icebreaker...
  25. Well, we are leagues past the looking glass and what will this new island be like???
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