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Sober or inebriated this boy is a slow-moving trainwreck... How will I ever live this down? Why did this have to happen to me? I guess I'd figure it all out after waking up sober. Shit… can't wait to see how that'll go down.

Like ships that pass in the night, I'm sad for the missed possibilities and hopeful that they meet again. I'd like a bit more background on the disparity between the Outside and the City!

Well, this is one heck of a ride, let's see where this is going...Hope Bry knows there are many stops on the hormonal express....and looking for love in all the wrong places....

This chapter was exceptional, a master class in wordsmithing! You've struck a vein of possibilities, none remotely promising. I can't wait to see the interaction between Griff and Alexis. Knowing what she knows about Griff, will she allow Griff to have any skin-to-skin contact? Would Griff be able to 'see' anything from Alexis by touching an object she held? While this style isn't my cup of tea, I am fascinated to see where you take this. Well Done!!!

Jealousy is a green-eyed monster that destroys those who harbor such feelings. Needlessly, a rift has been opened. Can anything be done to heal the fracture?

That was very intense, suspenseful, and worrisome....glad to see the author's note at the end...

Well, at least it wasn’t a case of , what’s on the menu dear….

Well...that was different....😉

I'd hate to be Troy's underpants...this slow denouement has gotta be straining to say the least....

Have to agree with the comments above, enjoy your break and come back to us rested and full of great ideas for the continuation of this story!!!

A fitting conclusion to this part of the story...and oh what tangled webs we weave when first we practice to deceive... Who knew just getting the Senate to play along had already cost me my Right of Correction? "Raising the torch high on the darkest night, summoning the willing to gather in the light, illuminating the path to the future." Carefully, I slotted the circuit board into the hidden bay. "Time passes, withered leaves will fall, branches severed from the tree will decay." As I watched the slot retract and the cylinder lower, I knew it was done.

How about magically power(ed) tools????

I used to live in a town where the better off would discard power tools and things like lawnmowers and snowblowers because they weren't working...due to the lack of simple maintenance... Needless to say, I loved this chapter!!! Not a clue... Hope you enjoyed this little snippet! Still not a name, but a bit more detail about the mystery boy. Maybe some have figured out who it is?

An auspicious beginning....have we seen the last of Michael or Smith???

Well, for the most part, Will's mission to find Joey succeeded...and then some... Will has some reminders, some painful, some as evidence, and the folks Joey screwed over... There's a reminder on Will's pants...Could those pants become evidence? There's a reminder of Joey on Will's cast, where it met his face There's a reminder that Catlin is carrying a baby of Joey's...is she the only woman he got preggers? Who was that mysterious man at the bedroom door? did he have contremps with Joey? How did Joey make it to the pool unnoticed, were his pants down around his ankles, or did someone manage to hide the offending member? That's all I got for now....

So you say....I'm left wondering if there is some underlying medical reason for so-called Dad's behavior. I get it that he's a control freak, an unmitigated disaster as a parent but, something's wrong with his reasoning abilities...

Talk about a hot, fast, and furious beginning....

I only stared back in an ecstasy-induced stupor. Troy had swallowed all the cum that got in his mouth. Now he was licking up the puddle on my stomach, not giving a shit who saw us now. You say that now.....what will the morning bring???

I think Leo is going to be the distraction that allows the crew to go play without Jeisa interfering...

As Admiral Dewey noted in a famous sea battle..."Damn the torpedo's, full speed ahead"...

My mind kept screaming...take some f'uking pictures, it is the only way to nail the bastard. I am very concerned/worried that after mom got in between father and son, that his anger just might/may be turned towards her in his uncontrolled rage, I fear for her health/safety.... Take some f'uking pictures and file a report!!!!! Thank goodness for Luca....

Not sure why, but the following bothers me, I see this officer as a weak link.... “What did you find, boy?” Juan asked before turning his attention to Thunder’s human partner. “Cute.” K9 Officer Tony Scanlon was one man who didn’t approve of Juan’s return to the Chicago Police Department. “The trail stops about a block from the building. The attacker must have had a car waiting or hitched a ride.” “Tire tracks?” Juan asked, ignoring the man’s obvious disdain. “Even if there are, it’s Chicago. We’ll never be able to prove they belonged to the attacker.” He didn’t like taking orders from people younger than himself, especially faggots who wore the badge, simply because they were personal friends of the bleeding-heart liberal Commissioner.

A very unique tale of hidden treasure combined with a mysterious organization dabbling in genetics. I found it very enjoyable!!

Am I to feel sorry for the act of retribution, considering the way Oscar was killed? I fully understand that in a world where an eye for an eye rules, eventually the world becomes blind. But I have to think, much like rabid animals need to be put down for the larger community's sake, so it is with Ralph, Klaus, and Deiter. They claim to have been following orders, but I can't imagine orders called for what they did, drawing unnecessary attention, but more to the point, the very real possibility that it would escalate. Sometimes discretion is the better part of valor.... The result of this retribution is a twofold path: Ralph and the others suffer and seek a quick ending, or they heal as best they can and try to find a way to enact their retribution...Which way will they go, I suspect it remains to be seen...In a way, I would have rather they left the gym in body bags... Gen 7 has been noted; will we hear from or see them again? Thank you for this epilogue...

Agree with spreading the news about the humans, folks should know, and if possible, do what they can to prepare...