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In a strange new world Richard is playing a long game, I believe Michael's instruction has paid dividends...We see/hear of some political opposition which is fading in the face of Richard's outreach to all the children....One hopes that any disgruntled suitor/political opponent, stays clear of the children....for their own sake....
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There's much to be said about living on a farm at that impressionable age!!!
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Hauntingly and a sadly beautiful chapter, like others, I suspect the journal will play a large role in 'closing the circle'...
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Some very sensible advice in this chapter, not living but a couple of hours from Rock River, I just might/may/will have to check it out!!
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And the tension is building. I hope to all heck that there is a tail on the Jack and he is followed from a distance. What will Eddie have left Roger, and it is good to see Melissa begin the process of securing the twins with Roger’s help! Here’s hoping the boys in the van are taken back with little trouble!!
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The era in time is important….banks and the stock market may not be safe…
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Flying Blind in Liberation's Gambit
drsawzall commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Flying Blind in Liberation's Gambit
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Loved this chapter ever so much!
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Am enjoying the heck out of this story!!!!
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Good on Robbie on standing his ground, fingers are crossed he and Manny find comfort in their journey. As to the rest of them, the parents were so aptly described as transactional...siblings, the jury is out at the moment as the story blurb indicates some issues are forthcoming... An interesting first chapter, looking forward to the next...
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Folks, this story is as good as it gets...stop reading this comment and start Ch 1!!!
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And the boys are on the road again to their new future and it looks bright...if they use Mickey's swimmers...that's 12K saved...and I would expect if Casey agrees to be the surrogate, them there would be some savings there...still it is early days yet... WTF was the Ass Dean thinking??? While I agree with his thought about clerking for SCOTUS, I can fully understand the need for Mickey to establish some permanence as he noted, he's been away from home since he was 13... Like @mayday said...more, more MORE!!!!! Here is another future story line gratis...Mickey saves Drew's father's company in a precedent setting courtroom battle against the evil step-bitch...and her drug addled sons....taking down those cafeteria, so-called christians....
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Unscripted Bit Under the Spotlight
drsawzall commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Unscripted Bit Under the Spotlight
The good doctor is anything but....I mean...WTF!!! That was stooping to an all time new low.....mighr be time for threatening some legal action to squeeze some $$ for the old bank account... -
Kids do the darndest things and for some stupid reason it brought back the following memories....
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Ya know that bragging like that is going to hurt the Korner Krew's reputation....oh wait...we'd have to have a rep to ruin....
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Wandering hands and risqué pictures
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Wandering hands and risqué pictures
A marvelous chapter to say the least…Someone needs a quiet conversation with Morrie say the least…can’t wait to see how Ralph handles his next get together with his parents….Therese is warming to me and looking forward as to how they discuss the facts of life with the twins…. -
Getting Closer, and Spit Happens
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer, and Spit Happens
I get the feeling it’s the NHC’s loss….- 24 comments
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Sorta sums it up for me... “Wake up! Everyone is lying! This is an industry with a lot of money involved. Everyone is making moves based on that, don’t ever think any different.”
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There may be hope for Alan but it's early days yet...how about the dining hall manager....
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I'm hooked and looking forward to more...THANKS!!!!!
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Some Things Will Never Change
drsawzall commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Some Things Will Never Change
And for the sentiment shown below, I would restrict FTL and other advanced knowledge until Ark lll can be fully trusted and understand the dangers they face from others... There is no perfect society or utopia. Humans will be Human. Imperfect and flawed, but we can always strive to make one. We gathered likeminded individuals dedicated to bringing life to planets were there wasn’t any. We are still working on making that utopia. As a species.” -
At least their talking, and I have to wonder if we will see the pussycat in the future....
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Oh dear lord, there's hope for the boy!!!! And good on talking about the car!!! For the first time, I thought, Maybe there’s more to Ken than I’ve been willing to admit. But my case was different. My dad didn’t leave—he died. And Ken? Ken was trying to replace him. Or was he?
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A text to Roberts IT friend is in order to glean all the pertinent information he can on Paddy, if he also perished in the war, where was he buried, or if he survived and went back home and began a new life. While it is a longshot, was about the history of the bakery? And let's not forget the journal under the sink, take photos of the pages and replace it!!
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Too soon to talk about any possible ending!!! I see many story lines coming out of this tale...for instance, Mickey taking on the evil monster-in-law and the superficial, sanctimonious judge at the contest and cleaning their clocks!!!
