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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Looking forward to see how this develops!!
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Sounds like they are ready for the tasks ahead This was more than just a pack; it was a family, bound not just by destiny but by choice and by the battles we had faced together. We were ready for the trials ahead. Then there's this... The significance of the number 3 changes as the dimensionality of the space increases, from simply representing a position on a line to being part of a complex coordinate in higher-dimensional spaces. Ginnungagap and Ginnregin are both nothing as well as everything. Our limited perception of reality with seemingly free movement in 3 dimensions and a rather limited forward movement in the 4th dimension is not all there is. Maybe we misunderstand “The Triad”. Much of my story—to the dismay and confusion of readers at times—is built on false premises. Oh, what a long, strange trip it's been/gonna be...
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Hummm...Tygo could be thinking about anything... Better yet, Tygo would be the perfect candidate to finish off Abernathy....
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Sounds like leasing agent was asleep at the wheel so to speak!! Hope her firm has insurance!!!
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Was this after we all heard the phrase..."Let there be light?"..."Or on the seventh day...another two chapters cleared editing?" Oh look @weinerdog and @kbois the first reader comment on page 3!!!! Time for some fireworks!!!
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Diego should/will realize that Attorney Clark will do his best to rattle him, Billy will have his back when the questioning gets out of line, at the moment I am mor interested as to who the last witness is...one hopes it is...
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Oh my, there were some comments about the chapter despite the snarkfest...and 20 more chapters to endure I mean enjoy!!!
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Pong anyone???
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One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
Can't add anything to the comments above other than to say I clicked on the link you provided and was stunned, and in a good/bad way... It is incredible that this company, Unlimited Tomorrow has come out with an inexpensive and elegant answer to the hideous costs of other companies' products, and equally stunning is the failure of insurance companies to cove r basic needs, as it would affect the bottom line... Kudos to you for a great chapter...well done sir!!! -
Chapter 19 - The Witch
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 19 - The Witch
Will Abernathy and Croosen work against each other or with each other? They has left a trail of sorts... -
And here's the proof!!!
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Like all the others we await here with bated breath and caseloads of impatience...I have on good authority, (CIA, MI5, and the SVR) that the following Foto is of your desk...may suggest a match or one of those firms that deal with organizing your stuff??? Tell me please that isn't a Fisher Price 186 you are using for a PC??? Thanks, your hard work is appreciated...
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Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
So frigging true...this is exactly why they should have gone to the police after visiting the psychiatrist.... What we do know is the father is from the shallow end of the gene pool...Hopefully at the end of all this Bruce gets help as well... -
Chapter 18 - Olona
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Olona
Well...little does Abernathy know there are two groups out looking for him, whatever he has planned will cause attention and hopefully lead to his eventual demise... -
Can't add anything different from the comments above, one thing that did stick out was the upcoming talk Keith has been asked to give. I wonder if Isobel has arraigned this presentation as a means of possibly raising funds for the restoration...
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I may have to rethink, it seems nearly everything down under wants to eat or kill you... Massive 18-Foot Crocodile Captured in Australian Outback: Largest in Decades (msn.com)
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Will need fair warning as I will have to book a flight from the far side of the world!! Loved this chapter as the box of Kleenex will attest to!!! May any bumps in the road be minor and I like my steak medium rare!~!!
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It will be interesting to see how all this works out when Simon is finished traveling the ethereal plane and his spirit returns to his body...
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Chapter 17 - Gilnik
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Gilnik
The salient question remains, can Abernathy be stopped and one other thought, what happened to the photonova glands??? -
I don't for a moment trust Rabiah...she has her own agenda....as evidenced by the following... She looked up again, hoping to catch another glimpse of Theodrik in the sky. “Truer words were never spoken. Oh, but wasn’t it magnificent? Gods, to have such a being at my disposal.” “It’s not a pet,” Brohm chided. “And I don’t care how friendly it seems. Reckon nobody can tell a daemon to do something it doesn’t wanna.” Nathan recalled the alchemist and how he’d somehow managed to turn the daemon into Lord Helmsley’s slave. He pondered if Rabiah had the same knowledge. She was dangerous in her own way, of that he had no doubt. It didn’t mean she couldn’t be trusted, but he had to remain vigilant.
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Your craft in this tale is more than good enough to keep readers coming back and thanks for your response!!
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Every now and then a story comes along that simply demands you start pounding the keyboard in your reactions/frustrations to a chapter, and boy o boy does this story grab you right from the beginning...You'll want to defy physics and the laws of nature in trying to reach through the PC monitor and have at some of the denizens of this unique tale!!! Kudos to the author for crafting this tale of intrigue and suspense!!!
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Thank you for this story, as you may have noticed...it elicited some strong reactions from me and that is what a great story should do...and...dagnabit...you got me to liking...loving Connor!!!!
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An interesting chapter to say least! As with too many cooks in the kitchen spoil the soup, too many cliffhangers ruin what could be a great story…
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IhearJulieFreakingAndrew’spsingingSuperfreakinfexpialidociousdingdongdingdongthe wicked agent is dead!! Way to go Connor!
