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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    humm....what could the following possibly portend??? I stood on the Dock and watched as I waited for them to depart. All the time working out how our relationship would work as a Bonded set of Mates. And unless they or I will change lifestyle, we wouldn’t. I shouldn’t say that. I could. They could stay on their ship, and I would stay here mining. We would see each other two, maybe three, days a week. I could live with that, but I don’t think they could, as they are having so much trouble handling this. Maybe in time they would be alright. I watched as the ship pulled away and the running lights blinked. One last wave to me, which I returned, and I headed back to my quarters and bed.
  2. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Well now, I will be nice to catch up with Josel, but I am curious for a bit more background on the following... Zal nodded. "All right then. We'll have to find something for him to do. He can't get over the loss of his wife and children, but he can learn to live with it if there is something meaningful to do." The blond man frowned and looked at his brother, who mourned the cruel death of his own family. "I'm sure we'll come up with something," he said. In addition to brotherly love, his concern was probably mixed with a sense of guilt. After all, he had made a terrible mistake. As a result, his brother Avinnor was now in this state, having lost his family and perhaps his sanity.
  3. God I am so angry, I'm not sure if anyone knows, but in many ways Nick's story was ripped right from the pages of the Boston Globe and the sad, and I'm not sure sad is the correct word to use but...I digress, story of Elijah Lewis, a 5 year-old boy killed by his mother and boyfriend...who weighed 19 lbs when the autopsy was conducted... I was watching the news before reading this and a segment came on about the sentencing of the mother and my blood was boiling mad... if anyone would like to know the particulars the following would be instructive... Mother of Elijah Lewis pleads guilty to 5-year-old's murder (bostonglobe.com) Nick, truly the bravest boy ever!!!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Two frigging weeks to get his glasses/contacts, WTF???? Simply no excuse for the delay.... Zac and Jessie just might be in cahoots with Killian's father... Asher is a wuss...not sure I can trust him; it is beginning to look as if he is setting him up...something is off with him, and he simply doesn't ring true...hope I am wrong...How is he gonna square hanging with the A-Hole twins when he is back spending time with Killian, and how is Killian going to deal with all his, "I'm staying stuck in the closet" mode???? Kane, it is time to level the 'you've been lying to me Mom...and when I turn 18...the last you'll be seeing of me, is my backside as I walk out the door!!!! Mom...proving to be quite the match for Killian's father, and another who simply didn't fully think things out when lying to her son....
  5. dear lord in heaven, Ralph is 35 for goodness's sake....talk about the 'original helicopter parents'.... The twins know more that assumed..... Ivor has the right of it... Ivor considered, “I know this might sound a bit radical, but what harm might there be in just ignoring them and doing what the hell you want.” What indeed?
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I think this story has legs, would love to see more!!
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 35 S2

    A very nice chapter indeed…
  8. This is gonna take some patience and possibly a spare keyboard...it helps knowing that the POS parents do face 'justice' and pay for their behavior/actions against the children...
  9. Well now, what will become of all this kerfuffle?
  10. drsawzall

    The Garden

    Oh my goodness...the angst permeating this chapter is palpable... and as our esteemed @Summerabbacat noted, Jackie is playing a version of Beach Blanket Bingo...gasp...with a continental...and Gordy, while his play may/might have been innocent, what hidden desires has he woken, will Arthur become more than a 'buddy'????
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Killian, once again not thinking things through all the way through....good on Mom, let's hope her plans are finalized quickly, and just where is dear old Dad when he isn't coming home????
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    With all that the local constabulary is involved in, I'm sure the visit by them, was just that and surprised that it simply wasn't a simple phone call....
  13. Or a bungeup of Quokkas.....
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Thank you for the comments along the way and sticking with the story, it is greatly appreciated. I would be very interested in your thoughts after you've had time to digest the story. Again, my sincere thanks!!!
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    I think over time they will come to realize the necessity of following the tradition. It would be folly after all to think that life would evolve in the same way as it is here on earth.
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    So true, Mithras chooses wisely in my estimation.
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    It is clear that both present a danger to the planet and their way of life.
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    That Mithras has plans for Thad isn't a surprise to Ned, how it will play out is worrisome!
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    With the passage of more than a thousand years, time enough to 'recover lost technology' and it will be interesting to see how they may change things...
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    Great comment, I think the lesson here is that everything is interconnected, that while the sacrifice seems to be unjust by some, everything used to survive requires a sacrifice of other 'living' things... With the addition of the survivors a way to find a 'balance' will be found...
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Well now, cakes are baking and will everyone come out unscathed? Will they settle for 4 kids or 8... And is Christopher's hands completely clean in all of this?
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Ok her folks, we can now assume these boys from Norway are actually aliens from a distant galaxy far...far away. And are here to take over the planet by seducing Matt and converting him to their evil ways knowing in the distant future he will become the president of America....that's my story and I am sticking to it until Oscar shows up in my bedroom to insert the dreaded probe....
  23. Ralph needs to get the heck out of his head and embrace new possibilities... Before he could think about that more, the party started to break up. The evening was spent in the usual way, the organised chaos of bath time, stories by the fire and then finally he was alone. Ralph didn't like the person he was becoming, sex with Nolan was fantastic, but the need to keep it quiet, to pretend. He was uncomfortable being gay, of admitting it. However, the alternative, the Ralph who pretended and lashed out at people wasn't acceptable either. He drank too much, got maudlin and fed up. Then late, late, he pulled out his phone. Somewhere he had a phone number for Tommi's parents, he retyped the message more than once, before finally pressing send.
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Ethan, you ain't that smart, talk about a babe in toyland....WTF are you thinking??? So sad....
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    When you think on it, both the dildo and Alan are the same...inert pieces of plastic to his everlasting shame....
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