drsawzall

Well with the counting of the early comments...votes...75% are begging for a continuation...I'd have to agree with them, giving you 80% for more of this story....

A true to life story, not for the faint hearted, gritty, thought provoking, and at time will have you pounding your keyboard in reaction to the subject matter. Not everything in life is sunshine and roses, sometimes all one can do is to make the best out of a terrible situation, and that makes this tale worth reading.

Thank you for sharing this with us, as every author strives to engage their readers, I have to say you hit the mark with me...for the good, not so good, and the truly despicable... As you could tell by my comments, I was fully engaged...and to that...well done sir... All I got, is from this... To this...

While the boys seem safe, and I have to think so, considering that some of them appear right out of his father's books, I hope the epilogue answers more questions than it raises. Otherwise...

Not a pat down or frisking for dangerous items???

And once again Anthony the asshat shows his true colors. He’s nothing more than a puppet for dear old dad….He should reach between his legs and give his testimonials a grope and find the courage to be his own man…. looking forward to the date!!

All I got is...

Zac and Jessie...destined for menial careers in the lower end of the blue-collar world....

So it isn't only me then...hummm

Wasn't on the boat....Alex...what possessed you to come up with that story??? Did you not understand what the Mexican authorities were doing when they recorded yours's and others passports??? And cleaning out the apartment/condo...making room for another boy-toy??? I truly believe Logan was assisted in his fall into the seas....

Marc's growth is remarkable along with his attention to detail, he needs to learn some of the finer nuances of command I believe. While he was correct in bringing to everyone's attention the condition of the vessels he is/was renting, I wonder if a less public approach might/may have worked a bit better. I'm concerned he is creating adversaries needlessly. I think a "discussion" with Sa Henderson about his concerns with a warning proviso, that if it should happen again to him or anyone else, then he will bring it to the attention of everyone in the 'Bowl"... Now, having said all that, if scheduled/routine maintenance is being marked as done and Sa Henderson knowingly knows it is not, what happens to the "items" noted as used, but not. Who then is profiting, just Sa Henderson or are others included?? If that were to be the case roast him/others very publicly.... “It just so happens that I should have a say, as I have the requirements to rent that equipment and you do not, Sa Henderson. Although I am sure people you hire do. Still. When I step aboard a vessel that I am going to use. It had best be ready or I will be looking for the reasons. I will say this now for all to hear. When I track back the what and who of the next set of issues with the vessel that I rent. I will file a formal complaint and request for restitution against the party responsible

That asshat defense lawyer nearly got me to trigger a carnal oops a cranial explosion, but I survived knowing Jill is going to take the stand...

Good on you Todd, way to move forward out of the shackles of your past, and Barrett...as well as searching for your mother, don't think it will be all sunshine and roses, you may not like what you find, and most of what you are looking for, happens to have admitted is attraction to you... I wouldn't trust any overdressed artsy fella wearing a bandanna, scarf, and a fedora....

It brings to the fore that adapting and accepting change is critical, thanks for reading!!!!

This should be interesting, and if I remember correctly, Simon still has one more death to go...

You hooked me, looking forward to the next chapter...

Major changes all around, should be very interesting to say the least... We'll take the chapters as they appear...meanwhile at work you should...so to free up you writing time....

This brings up another thought, what exactly is the status/nature of the relationship between Alex and Logan, married, committed couple, occasional FWB????

I'm trying to figure out what in the heck to say about Alex, it's been a long time since I've been stumped, I mean...how many ways can you say what you think about Alex the Asshat douchebag, I really need @Summerabbacat's take on this. I can't figure out the reasoning or the motivation in delaying Logan missing other than that must have been a substantial financial reason, not necessarily cash in the bank but perhaps, a life insurance policy, Alex may have thought Logan wasn't wearing a self-inflating lifejacket...I pity the fool he is to some degree as he isn't as smart or clever as he thinks...and Oh boy, is he in for a world of hurt...providing he hasn't fled to parts unknown.... Next chapter pleas and thanks and ASAP damn it!!!!

I can't wait till Eric gets to tangle with Alex....

So death comes slowly?

This next chapter should be very interesting to say the least, and this chapter was very instructive in how to turn the tables... As I entered his room, a shocked Prince Francois Valois blurted out, “Why are you here? Are you going to kill me? This is all my fault. It’s too late for peace. They’re invading your lands and those of your allies right now. The Habsburg armies have already taken Navarre and Bruges. My brother’s army took Le Havre and executed Louis Bourbon and Admiral Coligny. They’re besieging Boulogne. No one can leave this city until tomorrow, and they have thousands of soldiers with orders to kill you. You also have no abilities. I’m so sorry.”

I have to give some credit to Channing, having the good sense to give Todd, a pep talk, and a bit of quiet time with Barret....

Anthony is still an idiot without a filter....a chip off the old block, hopefully he becomes aware it is a 'learned' behavior...he's a walking Human Resources disaster.... I think if I were to have one of those black bean extravaganzas @Summerabbacat, the local environmental protection agency just may happen to stop by... The black bean burgers would be delicious. I regularly have a vegan black bean, beetroot and caramelised onion burger which I enjoy immensely. They may be a little "troublesome" for the digestive system of some who eat them though - @drsawzall you may find yourself in trouble with mother again for unacceptable behavior in the living room.