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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 29

    Ruby, not smart enough to pull something this complicated off, regardless of Jeff's status, Ollie should be the sole inheritor of his parent's estate... Can't wait for the other shoe to drop on the following... Calling Ruby a turd would be demeaning to turds.... One thing she told Andre was that she had been to the bank, and they had frozen Christine’s accounts. Ruby was furious about that and wanted Debbie to tell the bank to unfreeze the accounts. The bank on the other hand were concerned about some debit and credit card use after Christine’s death.
  2. No good deed goes unpunished as we find out. And...as others have noted, there are those who would wish to control the supposed gravy train for their own self-shorted, greedy interests....suspect many will be crying over their spilt milk in the morning.....so to speak...
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    At the end of the day Quinn is less than 10 days from being 18. There were no signs of a struggle at the apartment or any sort of ruckus at the school. Given the preponderance of other crime issues that the local constabulary have on the books, this isn't/shouldn't raise an all-out APB...as there are more serious matters to be investigated, given the fact the mother 'stole' funds belonging to both Orion and Quinn, that alone sheds reasons enough, to not take Q's disappearance seriously, probably thought of as a "heat of the moment argument"... That's my story and I'm sticking to it.....
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    I'd say Killian's father was a piece of shite, but that would be insulting to shite... Hopefully the hospital reports the beating, I may be wrong, but I believe that they are required to do so by law...at least the beating will be a matter of record... What was Killian's father at the memorial service, as noted previously, while he's running for reelection, trolling for votes does not make sense, we now know there was plenty of publicity, methinks Killian needs to talk to at least one of the newspapers, with pictures of the bruising. Thank goodness Killian has a place to go, will Mom follow with Killian's belongings...if she is allowed to do so? Is she even safe in her own home??? At the risk of repeating myself, she needs the prestigious legal firm, Dewey, Cheetham, and Howe to begin the process of emasculating dear old dad... Once again, I'd say Killian's father was a slimeball but that would be insulting to slimeballs... And Asher, someone needs to check up on him ASAP!!!
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    Could not agree more!!!
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    There was much in the conversation between Ned and Bahet. Ned needs to keep the faith as it were...
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Partaking of the drink allows one to connect easier with Mithras, you might say it acts as a conduit...
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Thank you for your thoughts and comment, it is appreciated, all I can ask is that you give it a chance. There will be some dark moments but in the end, perseverance will pay off!!!
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Oops...brain camp...
  10. Well, that would be kissing and telling...about multiple reincarnations now, wouldn't it.....
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    Things seem to be going too smooth....and what part of "Stay the fuck away", is difficult for Chris to understand...
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Sounds like a case of being able to run...but not hide...there are hidden hands here....
  13. Well, all I got is there was one time I was on this date when... "Yes, I can see how that would be fruitful. But humanoids are not capable of sustaining that state. The only human to have ever been merged then evolved into a torgon, well, their shell expired before it was introduced into the world. Or born, as you call it. But there are literally dozens other species where that is quite normal."
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 34 S2

    A nice quiet Thanksgiving was had by all....
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Good on Quinn on starting an honest conversation...I suspect as the boys get closer and better understand each other there may be a few bumps in the road, a couple of rouge waves perhaps???
  16. The iceberg known as Ralph is beginning to crack....with a bit of a struggle... Ralph blinked, "OK after last night?" He ended up smiling at the memory. "In case you had a morning-after freak-out." "I..." Ralph thought, "come in." There were croissants in the bag, good ones. Over coffee and croissants Ralph stared at Nolan. "Last night was fantastic." "But..." "I want to do it again."
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    I think Prince George needs to be kept in the loop via backchannel communication....
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    Forgot Mom following dear old Dad...did she make the call to Dewey, Cheetham, and Howe or is she about to kick his ass out of the house and call the cops???
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    Chapter 6

    Well now....some thoughts as I adjust to being back from the left coast on vacation.... Seth's and Killian's attacker was solidly built... Then we discover that notes were left in Seth's locker...3 that we know of, printed off a computer printer, one belonging to the school??? If so, would there be a record of what each printer was doing, in my former place of employment when we upgraded printers/copiers, our IT Department had to remove the brains of each and they were brought to a firm that would destroy them, while they were there to observe...more importantly, if a school printer/copier was used, there will be a record buried somewhere on the network... I'm not completely convinced on Asher, what works in his favor is that Killian doesn't react to his voice... Killian's father, he's hiding something, more importantly, and I'd be judging this on his so-called record, if he's running for office in a homophobic town, the service is last place he should show up to...not many votes in that crowd... Zack and Jessie, where were they that late afternoon/early evening???? Then, why the supposed lack of interest in investigating, so quick to brush it under the carpet...Is Killian's father involved in this as well?? Once Killian hears that voice again, his life will be in grave danger, I'm not sure he could hide his surprise/recognition.... "What? How do you know?” “He kind of stopped when he saw who I was. He was going to kill me, too, but then he got a good look at me and just froze. He said ‘Shit,’ jumped up, and ran.”
  21. drsawzall

    Two

    @VBlew, now that would be a fitting gut punch to find out Dave's partner hasn't a frigging clue either.... Our protagonist needs to get hisself to a lawyer once he clears the garbage from his head and life...He needs to take the asswaffle to the cleaners.... Dave, and Gary for that matter are two of the lowest lifeforms imaginable, the nerve of Dave riding that road of betrayal for starters, I think the word I'm looking for is chutzpah, and these two have it in spades....here's hoping they both come down with an incurable rash down there!!!!
  22. Thank you for sharing this with us, the comments said it all for me!!!!
  23. This story is chock full of troublemakers...thake your pick, Todd, Anthony, dear old Dad, Barrett, jobs and whatnot... To me the following sort of suggest the real culprit....
  24. Barrett is a first class dofus...2 weeks...really... Is Dad having an epiphany??? Anthony, just a cheeseburger and a large order of fries from meeting his maker...
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    I think both Orion and Quinn suffer from DSB, (Deadly Semen Back-up) and should be forced to rub one out twice before bed and three times before work... I get the feeling something has to give and hopefully there isn't any blood splatter...
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