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Cormac should understand that his warning works both ways. It would not surprise me if, in trying to arrange an "accident' Cormac or one of his spawn gets badly hurt... As to trying to stop the work, time to put up some discrete trail cameras to monitor the sites, and have them linked to Declan's computer....They come in all shapes and sizes and are easy enough to conceal. Cormac all but stated plainly that he and his spawn won't be idle. As to claim on the land, perhaps Cianán has a stronger claim....
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Chapter 8 Boy Meets Fall Fantasy
drsawzall commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 8 Boy Meets Fall Fantasy
Well...the corollary that a stiffie has no conscience is proven once again... -
Well...no surprises here, it was to be expected that Sam would do something stupid and he did not disappoint...
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Well this was unexpected scene, Joy took gleeful pleasure in delivering the message…and I agree about Remy…and if I remember correctly, aren’t there restrictions based on incidents in his past, that precludes Dante being freed? I find the wager at the end to be very interesting…
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An evening with Mother
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An evening with Mother
Great Uncle Edwin reminds me of my great uncle Herbert. A pious church going man, who taught at a ‘Christian’ college. He could be and was at the best of times insufferable. And with his roving eye, it was a wonder how he managed to fool many. It was while on a church mission to Manila, that all the Filipino houseboys were changed out at his mother-in-laws insistence….- 13 comments
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Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
drsawzall commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
All I got is Natasha is For herself... -
Such an innocuous word....Clarity...one that insidiously corrupts the souls...as to whom does clarity belong?
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Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
drsawzall commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
Thank you for this, and leaving the possibility of furthering the story. Just as importantly, publishing this as a completed story. So many great authors start to post before the story is completed, and then get lost...leaving us with an unfinished work. -
April CSR Discussion Day: Parker & Brody: An Alliance by Cap
drsawzall commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Normally, this would have been a story I would have walked away from, until I gave the first chapter a chance, and got hooked, as you will see by my comments. There is a richness and depth to all who populate this story that leaves you wanting more. And for me, the scene in "The Nail" was one of the best parts of this story, and where I fell in love with Mack and Mills. I can't wait for the next installment! -
The Competition Performs
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Competition Performs
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The Competition Performs
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Competition Performs
Hopefully not in the bathroom… He wasn’t expecting an answer, but got one anyway. “I’ll help you.” -
This sort of reminds me of the TV show, Lost. If any polar bears show up, I’m gonna take a hike…🤔
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Well, how they get out of this predicament will be interesting….
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Niran, if I had to go out in left field and guess, is in need of a large amount of money…most likely as he’s managed to mess up his own funding, owes a gambling debt, or bad investments….or any combination above!!
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Kinda sums it up… Then why are we having a vote?" "Because you are attempting to distribute responsibility for a difficult decision. This is a common psychological mechanism. Humans engage in it frequently. It is called 'covering your ass.
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April Signature Author Feature: Boss Nanny by Mrsgnomie
drsawzall commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Wouldn’t touch that comment…even with a @weinerdog….. -
I have to believe that there are further twists to come…And so glad Sneath gets his just desserts…
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Two troubled souls with the consequences of choice resting on their shoulders, yet both are lost, knowingly and unknowingly.
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Jake's Story, Part Two of Three
drsawzall commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Jake's Story, Part Two of Three
A cathartic meeting and a sweet release, and hopefully a sign of better times to come...I don't think Griff's visit will be acrimonious, but a meeting of the minds and clearing the air in a healthy manner! -
And we know from previous comments it ain’t tucked behind your bra either…
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Jake's Story, Part One of Three
drsawzall commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Jake's Story, Part One of Three
A new world that Jake can make himself out of a realm of possibilities… -
Towards sudden evil fate
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Towards sudden evil fate
Drinking and guns, a terrible combination…. -
A very powerful, positive thought... “I was actually going to ask you something.” He turned fully toward me, attention settling without pressure. “Would you… want to come stay over again tonight?” I asked, choosing the words the way someone chooses stones to cross a river, carefully and aware of the current beneath them.
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And the hits just keep on coming!!! I am looking forward to the Secret Author, and we get the deets on Thursday...like my parents' old coffee pot, ideas are starting to percolate... looking forward to reading the entries!!!
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This was a powerful emotional chapter that hit, the understated need we all feel….to simply matter… “Yes,” Cianán said. “Not of the fading itself. I have watched it happen enough times to understand it. It is not like dying, not the way your people die. It is more like a fire burning down very slowly to embers. There is warmth at the end. There is no pain.” He paused. “What I was afraid of was fading without having mattered to anyone. Leaving the world without anyone knowing I had been in it.” He turned to look at Aiden directly. “Airmed knew. But Airmed was gone. After her I began to think that was how it would end for me. Quietly. Without witness.”
