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I can't disagree, and it is critical that Henry get factual information...Tom or Dante, possibly, Sawyer, not in a million years..
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I think it was a mistake to leave Miller alone while Hank went to get Jessie...But he got just exactly what he deserved. Was he broken, or simply humiliated? Will Miller want to seek revenge and put Hank in his place? If that's the case, I expect Miller's diet may include a copper jacketed, lead hollow point.
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The end of the chapter, not disregarding the hot sex between Sean and Gabriel, has me worried for Scott....
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It picks up and gets better I assure you!!
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And so it begins: Gabriel and Sean finding chemistry, Lonnie, the ever-patient watchdog, and, not least, Fredrick officially having a possible 2-for-1 assignment... And...what's up with the room service employee???
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Give it a chance, it does get better I assure you!
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Thanks, I hope you stick with this, and I appreciate the comment immensely!!!
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I haven't had a chance to go back, but Camille's leaving Rowan with his father also came with conditions he set down...I believe concerning the frequency with which she could contact her son... And this is on Rowan, he could have, at any time, let her know what his father was doing to him... Nuno, would you be so kind as to remind me what those were? While I agree this chapter was cathartic, neither of the three of them holds the high ground; what dynamic comes out of this will be interesting to see...
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Is this a proverbial calm before the storm, a tempest in a teapot... Or acceptance, no matter how difficult... The limit arrived. The composure broke. The tears arrived without sound. The tears were not about the sex. The tears were not about the betrayal. The tears were about the hope.
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Is the Deer planning to sacrifice himself? Shouldn't the chapter be better titled Underhanded? Who's giving Arlo a "hand"!!!
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The Confused Traffic Light
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Confused Traffic Light
Thank goodness it wasn't a stop sign....or a pooper scooper.... -
You only have yourself to blame...🤔
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In reading the comments, I wonder if the spirit of the slain Scotsman speaks another battle that Kaylan, Ronan, and Thomas, along with those who stood beside them. The one where all must come to terms with the horror and struggle they endured. If the King, knowing of Thornmere’s heroic stand, failed in his support at this time, would be a blackened stain on his reign. It would shine like a beacon, to those who waver in support to all who hear.
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I fear Clint is like the Energizer Bunny crossed with a pile driver…
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Pericles & Gloria: arrests are made
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Pericles & Gloria: arrests are made
Had a crazy thought, if the artifact looks like a turd, would it not make sense to excavate the old manure pits? -
Perilous days ahead, will there be enough time to get all in readiness? Will the King offer support? After all, this is his battle as well….
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Poor Daniel, does he truly know what he’s in for?..will he survive Clint?
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Thanks for this, a few more stories to add to the reading list!!
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I have to say that rarely a story will come along and get me to react the way I do, as seen by my comments. I blame it all on the author for crafting such a tale, and it is a testament to a story well written...
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Yes, I did. I was able to take charge of my life, and while that relationship did not last the test of time, it taught me so much!
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I can see it now, Fenn and Ain squaring off against each other….this is just so freaking stupid…Fenn can’t be that idiotic…. Have we reached the bottom yet?
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I have to agree, Yarima got valuable information she never should have…. Someone(s) need to stand up from both sides and stop this foolish nonsense….too many people have died, and for what?
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Frosted Hearts: The Bracelet
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bracelet
It’s the freaking butler….sheesh…. -
A fate almost worse than death… We needed you! Even Rusne fell back with us, while you just took off running!” “Fuck…” Arlo stared at his missing hand in dismay. “That was my jacking off hand
