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Everything posted by drsawzall
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While not a gamer, better uses for my time, bless those who do, I think I got the gist of this.....
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And the following article appeared in the NY Times today...talk about life imitating art...All about the market, legal/and non-legal in isopod collecting and trade.... Pillbugs Are Getting Top Dollar Online. Poachers Have Noticed. - The New York Times
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Resulting in an aurora borealis of isopiod sparkles when the protocols be damned and the chaos is embraced...Hopefully, Garrett isn't looking through the window; it could be contagious, much to Kyle's surprise... I think Orel is your most engaging character to date and his interaction with Kyle was truly priceless...
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The Holiday: Sightseeing
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Holiday: Sightseeing
And some growing pains in the near future... Gavin patted his son’s shoulder. “Once we are back home, Jason and I are going to explore our options. Which means getting places valued and seeing what is and isn’t possible.” Jason grinned. “What he means is there’ll be maximum disruption, having to keep the place tidy.” “And no wandering around naked, or near naked.” Gavin raised an eyebrow at his son. Matthew looked alarmed. “Won’t the valuers make an appointment?” -
The Quest is Revealed.
drsawzall commented on William King's story chapter in The Quest is Revealed.
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Chapter 70: Back on Earth
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 70: Back on Earth
Only fools rush in without a solid plan...Shawn is dealing with multiple layers of duplicity here...it's like trying to pick one snake out of a basket full of them...That and I can't believe I am recommending patience here.... And, therein lies the danger to Shawmn and all his friends... "I'll keep poking around," Prof. Petrov added. "I agree that you're no use to anyone, including yourself, if you get revealed too soon. The current control system doesn't like things it can't understand." -
I loved this, every young gay boy's fantasy...there were a couple of Brians when you should have used Ted... "You're welcome Mrs. Travis. I'll be heading out now. Like Brian said, lots of cart wrangling. I'm going to go home and take a hot shower. Chase away the sore muscles."
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Another thought, they should take this public. Bad press is not what a studio would want, and it just might be the sword of public opinion that kills the bitch.... Ask yourself, how will the paying audiences react, and just who would they root for???? Needless to say, I am enjoying this story!!!
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It needs to be said again, after the fiasco preceding their flight to Milan, my thought was to start the divorce as it were, while they were on their way. I would have had an attorney tie her ass up so fast, it would make your head spin….She ceased to be anything at that moment…..legally she was not acting in her “client’s “ best interest and subsequently failed in her professional duties…
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These boys are forging an unbreakable bond that will serve them well. Tomas whispered: “Ronan… I thought I would fall before the end. But when I saw thee beside me, I found strength.” I’m reminded of an old fable, the one where the father has seven quarrelsome sons. He gathers them together and asks the youngest to break one of the sticks he is holding, and does so easily. He then takes seven sticks and asks for the oldest one to snap all seven together, and he can’t. Asking the youngest what did they just learn? He responds that together they are unbreakable.
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I think Oliver suffered a temporary lapse in judgment, and once the info in the "little red book" comes out, he will see the light of day....and it is past time to let it be known it exists...
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Loved the skunks, here's hoping the trespasser learned a lesson...Preston looks like a good friend to have as they move on with their lives...is it possible he might have a different supernatural ability??? As to the baseball cards...WOW...
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What Happens in School, Stays in School
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in What Happens in School, Stays in School
You mean the condition where Former quarterback Tom Brady announces he's coming out of retirement??? Just kidding... -
Exactamento...the fastest way of neutering, or is it spaying, Tarquin, is to get the facts out ASAP through a highly qualified barrister, funding isn't an issue. Think of the fun of watching the arsehole sweat and suffer over the course of many chapters.. #makethebastardpay....
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Or a prison colony...
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Something is off regarding the Bulwark...Not sure I trust her, considering Ain seems to have 'issues' with the herald...what is the source of animosity between the two? "Yeah," Ainreth confirmed through gritted teeth, glaring at the Herald, his formerly mostly relaxed pose now rigid. Fennrin expected him to say more than that, but he stayed silent, continuing to scowl. Fennrin truly wondered why seemed to dislike the Herald so much. The man had so far seemed very reasonable.
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Don't I know, they have been, my team that is, absorbing way too much of my time, and going to games in the rain, sleet, and snow has been a struggle, thank goodness yesterday's game was in Denver... Going through this story and trying to keep the multiple story lines informs me that stopping the assassination is going to be quite the fustercluck...not mention several personal lives....I suspect no one is going to come out of this unscathed or unchanged!!
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Chapter 69: Professor Petrov Makes Three
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 69: Professor Petrov Makes Three
The plot thickens, and yes...phasing through the outer shell of the spacecraft would't be pleasant...What game is Professor Petrov playing? -
An interesting beginning!!
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It is well past time others become aware of the notebook, such as Lydia, Oliver, Mrs Patel, Andrew, and Tommy...Notarized copies made and the original secured for safekeeping.... It is time to go on the offensive, send Tarquin daily snippets of the juicy stuff, just to remind him he's standing on a rapidly disolving pile of dung... "I am scared," Orel admitted, so softly Finn almost didn't hear it. "Me too." "But I am more scared of going back. Of you being gone." Orel clutched the notebook to his chest. "I didn't get a shelf and a rug and a stone just to give them back. And I didn't get you back just to lose you to a cage." He held the notebook out to Finn. "We fight. With the truth." Orel and Finn hold the upper hand; it's time to f'ing use it!!!! For god's sake, show some f'ing initiative!!!
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What Happens in School, Stays in School
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in What Happens in School, Stays in School
Sadly, some of these stunadas grow up despite social darwinism...- 17 comments
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Daphne, Graham & Charlie
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Daphne, Graham & Charlie
Cahrlie's aunt and uncle are in it up past their arseholes...and what a spiteful bitch she is serving a meal such as that... in direct opposition to my preference for not eating flour-based products. And amongst the vegetables were Jerusalem artichokes, designed to induce smelly wind, as well as being (I discovered) one of Charlie’s bugbears. That she was aware of these problems was clear when she commented that —as it was only a pie—she was sure I would be OK with it and that Charlie would not notice the artichokes amongst the other vegetables. So suck it up. -
What a sweet chapter!
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I am truly enjoying this story. It just keeps getting better!!
