Jump to content

drsawzall

Author
  • Posts

    16,909
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by drsawzall

  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    Danilo has the truth of the matter….and the knowledge and means to be effective… Will this be the moment? Could Benedetto “accidentally “ fall his donkey, or over a bridge? Benedetto would depart for Siena. His absence brief. His return anticipated.
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    All of this in the name of a loving, just god who is abused when others are misappropriating his message, on both sides. And both sides are equally guilty….
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    Well...there's another shoe to drop, what are the chances it is a visit either by Mickey's mother or underlings... It is frustrating as I bought the book and won't read ahead!!
  4. Another one of my favorite genres, and my humble thanks to all of you who read my story, it is the best payment an author can ask for.
  5. When the head below the belt has all the brains, and won’t listen to it….
  6. Just so sad and so tragic…That Claude was able to do his thing for so many years without attracting notice is shameful…
  7. drsawzall

    Prologue

    With bated breath, and on to the next chapter….
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    It would behoove our amateur sleuths to watch the comings and going’s of the glassworks for a few days and look for patterns… Until proven otherwise I suspect our minor nobles wife….
  9. Perhaps it is time to put Niran on the back foot with some creative legal maneuvering… He’s lost the tactical advantage and has been clumsy, making some careless mistakes…A discrete, deep dive into his financial situation is warranted. I suspect he’s feeling some pressure from yet to be identified entities.
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    What could possibly go wrong?? Okay," Dimitri said, stepping back. "Let's go claim a planet." The Gremlin raised its spoon. "FOR SCIENCE! AND SNACKS! AND NO MORE CRATES!
  11. Nice that our Count had much time to spend with Max, hopefully they will get together again soon…
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Benedetto needs to fall down a flight of stairs, and while he may not realize it, his position is also precarious… Patience will win this battle…
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Arm chair warriors are just that and useless to boot. And if the rain keeps coming they will need to build an ark! Hard to think of the road home when the time comes…
  14. Just loving this, it is simply delightful and an eclectic cast of characters...
  15. Having read this, I can't disagree with any of the reviews or comments!
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Sometimes life tosses a curve ball….yesterday two young men with white shirts, name badges, and narrow ties, on a mission rang my doorbell…. Thanked them kindly as I wasn’t buying anything, especially encyclopedias, and sent them on their way…
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Need a second opinion?
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    I think they already are, they just don’t know it yet…did we get painted banana yellow along with the signage?
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 17

    Therein lies the crux of the problem….We know that Cinan can return twice a year, will that be enough or will a way be found so that the boys will be together? We still have disgruntled neighbors to contend with, hopefully without broken bones or bloodshed…
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    If the road was difficult before, it’s about to become Hell incarnate… Hopefully they follow Wylan advice…Welcome aboard Ashot! Having bought the book, it is all I can do to not read ahead….
  21. drsawzall

    First Encounter

    I grew up in the wrong neighborhood damn it…It does finish well and could be expanded, perhaps a tryst with Sam….
  22. drsawzall

    Pressure Points

    Niran, as noted, messed up badly…we are not sure if he knows about the “consulting “ firms payments being found out by the police. Time to let the police squeeze the “director“…there’s more to be found… Calm and steady…Let cooler heads prevail while Niran F’ups again… The police called again. The interrogation of the three men had yielded something new—not a name, but a pattern. The cash payments had been funneled through a small consulting firm that existed mostly on paper. The firm had no employees beyond a listed director. The director’s name was a middle-aged accountant who had once handled filings for one of Niran’s subsidiary holdings.
  23. drsawzall

    Sending a SPARK

    What could possibly happen??? Actually, how long will it take before the hookup?
  24. Expansion seems to be favorable if the report comes back positive… is it possible for a very gay friendly Thai restaurant? Simon and Martin accepted Rick's behaviour and smiled while the waiter watched longingly from the door.
  25. Thank you for this and it leaves us begging for a sequel!
×
×
  • Create New...