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  1. drsawzall
    What a fantastic use of the prompts and a very enjoyable story. Well done!!!
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    Chapter 1

    drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A story of such simple lessons, well done and very enjoyable!!! He pointed to the waterfall. “The river loves the mountain. It sings to it, carves it, is born from it. But it cannot stay. Its love is expressed in the leaving. In the feeding of the land, in becoming the lifeblood of the great Tonle Sap. Is the river’s journey a betrayal of the mountain? Or is its love for the mountain made manifest in its purpose?”
  3. drsawzall
    This is one of your best yet. The pacing, the descriptive narration, and internal dialogue had me trying not to speed-read this. Understandably, we all know you have a lot on your plate, but an occasional peek in at the station house would be wonderful!!!
  4. drsawzall
    My goodness...this was simply an amazing read, you had me hooked from the beginning!!!
  5. drsawzall
    This was a great take on the prompt challenge, and yes, a few shorts down the road would be interesting to read, they don't have to be funny or comical either...
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    The Rim Job

    drsawzall posted a story in Fiction

    Lando Carbonara is a wanted man aiming to clear his debts and secure a safe haven on Ularah-18 by accessing a legendary vault filled with treasures from a long-lost king. He carries a data crystal and a map from Simeon, an old treasure hunter who recently passed away, entrusting Lando with a final mission that could change his fate. However, Lando faces imminent danger from Roco, a ruthless bounty hunter sent after him, and must navigate a web of syndicates and informants to survive and succeed.
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    Chapter 1

    drsawzall posted new chapter in The Rim Job

    Lando Carbonara was a wanted man, one who was looking for a payday that would clear the debts of his past and set him up for the rest of his life. The deposit on the lakeside cottage on Ularah-18 would finally be a place where he could hide in plain sight, safe from Roco’s bounty hunters. If the old man’s story was true, and the information on the data crystal could still be read, then the key enclosed in the old man’s papers and box of nick-knacks would open the rumored vault to unimaginable tr
  8. drsawzall
    Very interesting, who all perished in the explosion, and where is Owen? Time to take Owen for a walk to Reese's room!!!
  9. drsawzall
    I get the faintest sense Gabe just might be a tad obtuse.....
  10. drsawzall
    That was interesting to say the least!!
  11. drsawzall
    Missed this family for a bit and glad to see this chapter!!! Picked up a new slang word...pukka!!! Urban Dictionary: pukka And so do I!!!! “No! But the other day, Rory’s door was open, he had his nose more or less embedded in Slav’s bum.” “Slav’s capacious bum.” “Full of ripe smells and…” Jason broke down laughing. “OK, I get you. And no. I don’t go there. I like my guys clean and sparkly, thank you, like a certain person next to me.”
  12. drsawzall
    Wow..,.there's a lot of ground...ahem...space to cover here...the upgrade just in the nick of time, who was the 'helping hand' that instituted it, and did they have foreknowledge that it was needed?!!! What of the remainder of the crews and the instructors? Did anyone else survive? Was this 'incident' part of a plot by the Director and possibly Professor Stick-Up-His-Ass? It would seem there is a concerted effort to 'neutralize' Shawn... Where is the 'boy' writing the AI program, having dessert? Is this boy someone who will be coming into conflict with the Director and the 'established' order??? What's the difference in their timelines???
  13. drsawzall
    Color me hooked!!!
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    Poetry Deep Dive 8

    drsawzall commented on Myr's blog entry in Gay Authors News

    An incredible amount of talent here!
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    Chapter 55

    drsawzall commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 55

    Ah...the sweetness of young love!!!
  16. drsawzall
    I wonder if Asher and Axel will connect???
  17. drsawzall
    Thank you for sharing this with us, I look forward to what's next!!!
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    Chapter 3

    drsawzall commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Chapter 3

    I wonder if the guys realize or have any inkling that they are bromancing....
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    Chapter 2

    drsawzall commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Chapter 2

    And when does he have time for studying?? Talk about busy!!
  20. drsawzall
    Will Shawn's cover finally be 'blown'??? And what's going on with Professor Stick Up His Ass??? Is this a 'true' emergency?
  21. drsawzall
    I want my own Percy, handy tool included....yowzer!!! Santa, if you are listening.....
  22. drsawzall
    I am freaking curious to knowwhat Seb and Robert are looking for...all that effort to get to the mine, and for what???
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    Chapter 1

    drsawzall commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Finally, a responsible driver...first a motorcycle and then a car, I understand the motorcycle was left to him, where did the car come from???
  24. drsawzall
    And another thing, this story is not good for my diet!! Loved this chapter!!
  25. drsawzall
    Have you actual resturant experience? The realism is fantastic!!
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