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  1. drsawzall

    Crossroads

    Let those without sin cast the first stone… Stephen gripped the doorknob like it was the only thing keeping him upright. His voice was raw when he finally spoke. “I will not bend. I will not be weak.” “Then pray,” the pastor said. “Not for righteousness. But for humility.” Stephen left without another word. Steven I wonder must be a short man, not necessarily in height, but everything else… And I find myself yelling at my computer once again…something has to give. Not sure my computer can take another series of chapters like these…😉
  2. I have to suspect that somehow Karsa’s mother might make an appearance…. Sneath’s eyes sharpened to slits, as bright and sharp as dagger points as he slapped the strongbox shut. “Your testimony is flawed, John Longsword. You say you spent weeks within the Gloamwood when your deployment to it was mere days ago. And this ‘Karsa’. You say you were sheltered by this half-caste elf when any remotely competent protector of their people would have executed you on the spot. And now this? You stumble back to us bearing a treasure token of these hateful vermin? What am I to think?”
  3. Having read and commented on this story, I encourage anyone to read this marvelous story!!
  4. Never on April 1st....just sayin.....Now April 15th is an entirely different manner....
  5. From the mouths of”innocent” babes and unlocked bedroom doors…
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    "Adrift"

    Not gonna gush or gild the Lilly, this was your best chapter in this story…well done and thank you.
  7. My family tree is proudly Heinz 57 variety… Did a boiled corned beef along with a baked corned beef with a Dijon mustard, brown sugar glaze. Mmmm!
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks, it was an attempt to try something new and different!
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks Gandalf, your thoughts are deeply appreciated!
  10. Now Benjamin, there’s a surprise! Does mom know or will there be fireworks?
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    Part III: Joint Ops

    Your best chapter yet! Simply well done and right on point! I had to read the scene in The Nail twice! And you just knew Mack was the leader in the shenanigans! FROM: OPS SCHEDULING SUBJ: MANDATORY TRAINING 2000. Alpha Squadron Team Drill. POC SFC Mack The Army/Navy banter was priceless!
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    The Cure

    Do you think the message will be received?? Nearly a dozen people crowded this vestibule, and he had to squeeze his way through them all. Words tumbled through his mind, entreaties, platitudes…. He stopped before the altar. Took a deep breath. “Hey Pharasma… stay the fuck away from me.
  13. I concur…and why do I feel young Tyler is a chip off the old block…
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    Chapter 4

    Let’s find out the story before jumping to conclusions…
  15. Humm…what could be the reason? Tatiana nodded. “Khonsu sealed all portals to that dimension for everyone’s safety. The beasts that reside there, Arbilias, are usually wise. But something has agitated them.”
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    Chapter 10

    Our soon-to-be visitors haven't a clue about the hell that will land on them...
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    Chapter 26

  18. So good, Paul isn't being pressured as he thinks this new environment out, coming to terms with it will be one heck of an adjustment!!
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    Chapter 5

    I have a hunch that Cianán is an ethereal being, and the vial just may be a key, a key that may fully bring him into this world. At some point everyone has to realize just how out of place he is. Declan knows this. I think the Bresnhan's may sense he is different What are the Bresnahans' louts thinking, that they can act as they do with impunity? More please and thanks!!
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    Chapter 4

    Sometimes the mind works in mysterious ways. I kept looking at the picture and hearing a story needing to come out...
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    Chapter 26

    Why does the herald remind me of...
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    Chapter 25

    I agree, these folks deserve each other, it is like the Perils of Pauline... ..
  23. Ryan is a tinderbox looking for a match....
  24. Three people can keep a secret so long as two of them are dead...Gossip spreads faster than the speed of sound...
  25. drsawzall

    The Latin Choir

    All they need to do is use a sword destined for destruction by Arlo, to kill the Queen and steal her crown...sounds simple and easy...don't it!!!
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