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If only the both of them could put the past where it belongs… He replayed the fight, the ugly, beautiful honesty of it.
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If Matt follows through with observing Dyson’s men (man) in the local watering hole, info gained could be useful as in tips to Miller…The drawback is Matt may not being able to get that close now. The interaction with Ben has me wondering if this change in his behavior is an indication that his plans are very close to fruition… I have to wonder if Right Then Riley might somehow end up controlling the keys to the kingdom….
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And now…for the rest of the story….
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How long will it take before they have Lali look at the blighted crops...if he can heal the sick, why not the crops???
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You've seen the other reviews and the recommendations. Simply one of the best stories to grace these pages this year!!! Why in the heck are you not reading Chapter 1 already???
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I knew the @weinerdog was hiding something....That and he's nearly first to comment on any story...he's got some...skills...nudge, nudge, wink, wink.... My comment from the last chapter, along with the "status" of Caleb/Josh, indicated there's all sorts of mischief upcoming! Quite frankly, there ain't no need for Cererbus to "pop" out of an iPhone when it has so many tools at it's disposal...Hummm???? I hope you take the time to flesh out what happens in Book 2 and release it as a completed story. There will be much less pressure to meet deadlines...when it comes out, we, along with many others, will be here!!! You have gifted us with a truly amazing story, and for that, this reader thanks you!
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Friday, June 27, 2025 (IV)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, June 27, 2025 (IV)
Well...those issues seem to be very important in developing character issues... -
Chapter 6: After the chord
drsawzall commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 6: After the chord
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It wasn't a hard no...There's hope for more...just kidding. Thank you for this... Hopefully, we could peek in on the gang a few years down the road in a series of short stories...
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Chapter 6: After the chord
drsawzall commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 6: After the chord
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Some things simply can’t be unheard…..
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I am liking the slow burn!
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One of your best yet!!
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Once again Geron crafts a masterpiece of adventure, one that is hard to put down!! This story is full of wonder and the possibilities that are before us… All I can truly say is, read this!!!
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Thank you for sharing this with us! A fable for our times with some powerful lessons for us all!
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Thanks for this wonderful chapter!! It was so poignant, tender, and heartfelt!
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Louis is one lucky son-of-a-bitch…..
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Uncle Rick is an ass….the exact opposite of Walter… Lids should buy the lumberyard… A weekend of sex at a dilapidated cabin, hopefully the roof don’t leak and the squirrels 🐿️ aren’t nesting in any of what passes as furniture… What could possibly go wrong/right?? Hopefully the fates find Kyle a boyfriend soon!!
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Lali to the rescue?
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Just another boring day at the homestead….thank goodness Billy is keeping a schedule! As to cliffhangers…there should be a posse for authors who abuse ‘em…
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From Shakespeare's Julius Caesar ‘Cry Havoc’ Speech, Spoken by Marc Antony, Act 3, Scene 1
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Friday, June 27, 2025 (IV)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, June 27, 2025 (IV)
Well, that's comforting I'm reminded that sometimes, tigers eat their young... What is it with battlemage school, fathers and survival of the fittest...or worst...or who knows what... -
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Please...at least an epilogue!!! In 3 parts of 24K segments!!!
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The unit comported themselves very well!!
