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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Not your father's army.....wowser!!!!
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Do I dare to accept the challenge??? I'm thinking, how do I work penguins, zombies, dustbunnies, cases of Pepsi, along with otters, and druids??? As to food on the three major holidays, this year for Thanksgiving, we will have bacon-wrapped turkey breasts done lattice style. For Christmas, a prime rib roast, and for Easter, we will have ham garnished with a maple syrup glaze along with pineapple and cherries! Now to send Val a PM...may the saints preserve me, and my football team at 10 and 2 keep on winning...oh yes...the ten dollar scratch card I put safely away turn up soon!!!!!
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Oh my goodness...what to make of this school day...and Joel decided to step out of his shadow, in all the wrong ways. I mean, good on him finding some testicular fortitude... For someone whose stated desire is/was to finish school, hopefully ride a scholarship to college, and get to a point where he could be himself, instead, he's making decisions to sabotage that future. That handy last night not only cleaned out his clogged pipes, but the rush of highly oxygenated blood wreaked havoc with some reticent brain cells... How many of those images will wend their way over the net to Joel and Roy's old school??? Now another shoe is to drop in the Principal's office, what will be the results??? Isn't it time for Cody to have his birthday party... I gotta admit that for Joel and Roy to sing the Tiger fight song was a hoot....kinda reminded me of...
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The City of Eternal Spring
drsawzall commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The City of Eternal Spring
Enjoye this chapter and the background information, looking forward to the next and what could possibly go wrong/right!!! Having changed schools during junior high and High school, I know the following feeling all to well.... Miguel already had so many friends (who he didn’t seem too keen on sharing), how could he possibly have time for me? I’d have to wait and see … and daydream until then … and masturbate … a lot.- 53 comments
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One can only hope....
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A great introduction to a complex part of the world, fueled by an insatiable desire or hunger for the illicit products that come from the vast regions of the country. I find it remarkable that no matter how many times the head of the snake is cut off, it never dies... To me, the only way to finally end the scourge is for a sea-change in the attitudes of the users. To somehow convince the general population at large to look elsewhere for their recreational pursuits. Never going to happen tho, and when in a conversation with a close friend of mine, our chief of police, there was a bust at the high school where a dealer was selling $5.00 baggies. But much like the prohibition of the 1920s, there is so much disposable money flowing to buy the silence of those who should know better. There are several businesses in my town and the surrounding areas that were the result of profits invested wisely.
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Time will tell...
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Humm.....could they be used for other purposes besides being a poster boy!! A white demon, and his handler who single handedly brutalised an orc warchief so badly, entire tribes flee when faced with the thought of the Garkoli. And that was before you joined the army.
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Arthur needs to face his family and tell them what he told Marvin for starters... Sadly, Marvin has a long way to go...I wish him well, but I can only see there being a friendship between him and Creek... And...who's gonna volunteer to pull the stick out of Arthur's ass???
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Not gonna touch either, especially the second....🤔
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Did either of them truly taste the food as smitten as they were with each other? It sounded simply wonderful. But as @Flip-Flop noted, I am also a meet and spuds guy...Give me a rib-eye any day and as for a beverage, wine...ugg A local brewery called Wormtown has a craft beer, one of several varieties, called Be Juicy. The following review isn't mine but it hits all the right notes. Note the subtle sarcasm...and this was a wonderfully descriptive chapter...thanks!!! Hazy yellow copper like so many in this class. White bubble head with ample carbonation Smell...light hint of hop and grass with a pungency. Some peach and grapefruit. A touch of melon and Taste...juice bitter up front (in the title) and a nice balance of the malt in the middle of the swill. Enough sweet to a transition to a drying in the back end lending to a lingering bitterness Feel...A nice slickness that invites quick dismissal. Has an excellent retention with lacing slowly vanishing.
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Detective Owen Evans seems to be an honest, overworked detective...for me, the jury is still out... We have 2 new red herrings here, Paul's brother James, and Tom Jackson. Could our detective be another??? How much trouble is Jake in? The photo in the safe deposit box matches the one found in Jake's room. Where, how, and when did Jake come across the photo... Coming in from way out in left field, could Jake be Tom Jackson? If so, could he be trying to set up Neil/Fenton Black, our international man of mystery and intrigue... What is the original connection between Jake and Neil/Fenton Black??? How, when, and where did they meet? Neil/Fenton Black seems to have gone through a few 'boyfriends' of a similar type. Are any of them still alive??? How would you find them??
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It's not gonna be easy to get that smell out....I know I said in my comment in the last chapter about arranging an "accident" for the good doctor, so I could get my hands on the car, I would never treat it that way, talk about bad manners...how gauche.... Looking forward to what Bane has to say... Will Todd stand by his man??? Now, having placed the severed head in the cooler, did our killer drop a dime of his own???
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Personally, I am enjoying this very much! And Theodore got his just comeuppance! And for those who may want to know more... The Last Days of Byzantium - Search
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Loved this chapter!!
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Uncle Vernon & Charlie
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Uncle Vernon & Charlie
An eclectic cast of denizens inhabiting the various studios, it will be interesting to see who the missing gallery owners may be... And a new word for me today...Luthier luthier - Search -
So...what does the above signify???
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Humm....it is a game now of beat the odds... “Private Hill, I arrived in this company less than three months ago. In that time, we have lost thirteen medics. Four of whom were Clerics. The average expected lifespan of a 68w on the front lines of this war is two weeks. For known Clerics? Five days. The only class with a shorter lifespan is Wizards. Spellcasters, in general, are targeted with extreme prejudice.
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Interesting to see this background. What the heck is the following, and would Danica truly do something to ensure Dante was never freed? "Mark my words, John, and wait and see. Inara '76 we'll hear from him."
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Thanks for the comment and the PM, I am glad you enjoyed this story!!
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More like a doorknob, everyone gets a turn....
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Let's not get overconfident... one day and one play at a time....
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The sins of the father travel generations, and I wouldn't trust Elyssa with a postage stamp...
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The Blade of Forgiveness
drsawzall commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in The Blade of Forgiveness
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I have to believe Arthur is toying with Marvin, and I believe Creek and Marvin have landed solidly in "the friend zone"
