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wow KC that was definitely intense. I agree with Kim, it was like being in a movie theater. I neglected my dinner while i read It seems fitting that Tanner broke all Amanda's bones, that girl was just a tad bit crazy. wow such a massacre i do wonder though that it was too clean. i mean they're all ded no one can be punished for what they did now of course Mark isn't gone and the girls but still. Loved it though. you tied everything together and i'm interested to see the epilogue

Very nice indeed. As soon as i heard Peter's name I started to wonder. You definitely didn't disappoint. Good job with the dialogue. This is gettin good Brian =)

Very nicely done. Going to continue =) i like benny already.

HEy J! you have a knack for first person ! wanted to say that first I'm already liking this story so far and can't wait to see more. Corbin seems really cool and confident and assertive and a lot of words that are just plain awesome you're descriptions made me swoon over Peter, i love accents Corbin's friends sound great as well. Nice little shout out to Kyle and Cooper there. I'm also glad that Peter didn't fall for Corbin's shall we say seduction lol. i'm going to enjoy seeing how this story rolls there are a lot of great elements. Including the whole greek system. reading this reminded me of that show Greek. Looking forward to more J...maybe weekly great start!

I knew something would happen to GIbby! we're coming down to the wire here KC can't wait to see how you're going to end this one

I finished! sorry i didn't comment chapter to chapter, I was on my phone and secondly i was very engrossed in the story so i figured i'd wait until the end to comment. The story you and Anyta have crafted here was really good. I thought the character development was good, and the cast of characters was great. you had the silly characters like Billy and Seth, and the jerks like Harris and his croonies, and I loved the relationship between Marcus and Jack. Ed was a great character too, and I liked the side story of Marcus and Nessa very nicely done. I'm glad things worked out for Jack in the end. As i was reading i had a feeling that Ed was the "buyer" for the truck and that marcus had something to do with it hehe. by the way i loved the intimate scenes between the two of them. they were very well done and packed just the right amount of heat and desire. I loved the popcorn scene and the intensity of Jack breaking down talking about his dad. that scene was just beautiful to me and what came after it seemed all the more lovely because of it. it was like with telling him that, Jack broke down his last emotional wall. just perfect. thanks for a great story!

awww kimmikins i always enjoy your epilogues this was nice, just a glimpse into david and christian's world so we could see what they've been up to since they remarried. Christian is quite the little homemaker it's nice to see that everything has settled and they added to their family! awww a sweet little girl I love babies, and men with their babies is just You paint such lovely pictures. I could see every scene as clear as day. It's been fun taking this journey with you. I'll miss Tag and Jimmy, Christian, David and the little ones as well. I'll always remember them though. time for the next project

Just so you are aware, your chapter posted monday at 4:42 pm lol at least thats when i got the notification Wayne must have secret powers and got to see it first haha. Anyway I want to know what Scott wants too. I mean he hasn't seen gibby in months and he wants to talk to him privately hmmm...what is mr kc up to. with just two chapters left i suppose we'll find out soon! glad Gibby told the police. I hope they'll follow through with the investigation and Amanda will get what she deserves. One can dream right ? Oh Tanner, you keep making Gibby do stuff in public someone is bound to think he's nuts. My mind did start to wonder when Gibby made his comment about Tanner being the death of him, and Tanner's response... okay KC you've kept me this far can't wait to see what's in store for the end here

Happy birthday

Yikes quite the misunderstanding there. I don't get Frank thoigh. He accused his very gay friend of messing with the GIRL he likes... Um yeah. I get why Josh is upset but I think I feel worse for Max

Nice pic of the three of you. glad you got to meet them MJ

Oooh Josh knows one of max's secrets now. This should be interesting. Things seem to be coming together for all the characters. can't wait to see what else is in store

Uh oh looks like Amanda is going to be gunning for Gibby next. Too bad Gibby already took the evidence to the police. I hope he takes Gibby seriously and actually looks into this. Tanner and Gibby planned it out perfectly it seemed. Gibby's mishap with the bus is so familiar *raises hand* i have had this experience many times lol . Still do when i encounter a route i have never taken. In anycase I liked this chapter a lot. Enjoyed Tanner keeping Gibby calm and giving him the strength to do what they had practiced. Can't wait to see what happens next KC

Uh oh i smell trouble. I'm glad Max and Josh have Frank and Kylie in their corner. ugh didn't like how the coach's wife treated Kylie . love that Frank wanted to tell her off for it lol. James scares me...i don't trust him and i'm glad Max and curtis are suspicious too. Max confronting James was good. They need to be careful. and the insight on Frank was great as well, i hope Josh is able to talk to his dad about interviewing Frank's dad. can't wait to read further and see what lurks in the darkness for the boys

*sigh* I love weddings. More importantly i think I love how you write weddings. Your attention to detail is just amazing to me. I could visualize everything, and i still need to go find that song because it's the perfect song for david and christian for sure. I'm really going to miss this story when it's done. it's been such a wonderful journey. Can't wait to see what you do next chica

nice chapter. I like how everything seems to be coming together here. That James guy is definitely twisted eep! can't wait to see what you have in store for this group

wow again a lot going on I think i'm going to like Kylie lol i already do. She seems to fit in with these three guys just fine I liked Frank's turn around. I think you handed that pretty well and i like that he stood up to clap for Tucker and later helped him with his boyfriend. Its good to see him back in max and Josh's corner where he belongs. i'm sure there will be bumps along the way can't wait to see what else you have in store here

Hey Nightowl a lot to digest in that chapter, but it was very good. I'm glad things worked out for Max and Josh. I hope they do have that deep conversation, since you know their relationship is forever changed now that they've crossed that threshold...though at the same time i suppose it hasn't changed per se but evolved which is just as good. I'm glad Josh's dad was there to offer some good advice. it's nice to see that both Max and Josh have supportive parents. Now i hope they will be able to have Frank too in time.

Thanks Guys i hope it will be a good day!

This chapter is just amazing from beginning to end chica. I loved how it began with the mom sitting in the cab. I knew from the minute she wondered about the house that she was a piece of work. You sure do paint some colorful characters that is for sure. She didn't disappoint either. I think what i liked most about christian and his mom was the fact that neither were willing to back down on their convictions which sometimes is not a bad thing at all. they knew where they stood, and nothing was going to change their minds. and I think deep down Chris knew that even if he wanted to see her stay for the wedding, he knew she wouldn't. he said as much to DAvid right? that her feelings weren't going to change. such an emotional ride these two took and Christian sticking up for his family. bravo to him. Also enjoyed David and Jimmy's talk about Christian too. I love that we got to see how David was feeling about this, and how he is still unsettled by Christian's memory loss. As Jimmy reflected, David is suffering here too. i am glad you brought that part out too. Jimmy's right though; CHristian is profound. i could go on but you've heard me gush about this chapter a lot already lol i love it. and even Marcia at the end giving the money to the grandkids she won't meet that was good. great chapter i can't believe this is almost over

AH Ha! they have a clue! this is good, splinters and wood and bats oh my...lets just hope the police department is smarter than any we find on soaps shall we lol seriously though i liked this chapter. I think we figured out last chapter just how over protective Johnathan is of Gibby and that's a good thing. He doesn't want anything to happen to his son and i can't say that i blame him. Gibby needs to be careful though...he may have somewhat of the upper hand but Amanda is not someone you want to mess around with. though I am amused at how Amanda makes herself look guilty i mean someone asks about cheating in class and your answer is to confront that person and question his motives? Really Amanda lol that's like saying clear as day I'm guilty lalala. What a bitch. Tanner's right though, Gibby shouldn't antagonize her too much or he could end up at the wrong end of that bat or worse. the countdown continues Kc. and don't let anyone get you down! keep on writing

I agree with Andy about Frank. It's nice to see the other side of the coin so to speak. He'll come around if it's meant for him to. Poor Josh he's definitely befuddled isn't he. I hope Max is able to clear this up quickly. That makeout session was intense

Happy birthday Tom. hope you have/had a great day

Poor frank I know this can't be easy for him. I'm sure he'll come sround. Jodh came out to his mom...good for him. I have a feeling she already knew. Now he needs to tell Max and vice versa. This is setting up to be fun. And awww Max and Josh thinking of each other. Felt bad for Fay too. Oh and I laughed at Frank eating the pork chops. Josh definitely made them spicy

Nice anticipation and build up here. Max's fear and Josh's nerves were very evident. Like the ending too. Now onward to more.