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Wow i could feel the final destination vibe as i read this Very nicely done Cyn. The tragedy of losing your partner is raw and deep but to lose him and a child that definitely has to cut even deeper. I think Wayne said it far more elegantly than i By the way i love the name Perrin. Such a sweet, sad story nice job with the prompt

It was really nice getting to see Chase, Kaleb and their family Chase is still my favorite, and i love that his relationship with Kaleb is still going strong The kids are great; Chase being bewildered about everyone having a key reminds me of the cosby show and Cliff lol i love it You can't deny he loves each and every one of them though even with his griping. And Kaleb still doesn't get the point that Chase loves him nice story kimkim. I liked how lighthearted and simplistic the story is. you do family warmth so well i always enjoy it Chase's reactions and Kaleb's reprimands had me cracking up the whole time. Lilly's newlywed strife made me chuckle too and I love how Kaleb handled the situation. He gave her very good advice. Our kaleb has grown up quite nicely he's very profound sometimes. Caden and Mint are a pleasure to read as always too. I really enjoyed the whole story chica, made me smile

Awww poor Mark on many fronts. Glad he has Max and his aunt plus grandparents to lean on now. I'm interested in frank's dad's friend too. Is there more there than meets the eye? ,hehe. Anyway nice chapter

And now things get complicated. Nice chapter Jon. Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm enjoying the look into greek life and college in the frats and sororities. Peter and Corbs are not making this easy are they? and Lee is in the mix now. can't wait to see what you do next

Oooh intriguing second chapter Jon. Peter is so frustrating. I can feel Corbin's mixed emotions as he deals with this guy still I like him and Corbs too for that matter. I'm enjoying the Greek infusion as well

Haha I lived that cartoon as a kid. Almost wish they'd really make a movie

wow KC that was definitely intense. I agree with Kim, it was like being in a movie theater. I neglected my dinner while i read It seems fitting that Tanner broke all Amanda's bones, that girl was just a tad bit crazy. wow such a massacre i do wonder though that it was too clean. i mean they're all ded no one can be punished for what they did now of course Mark isn't gone and the girls but still. Loved it though. you tied everything together and i'm interested to see the epilogue

Very nice indeed. As soon as i heard Peter's name I started to wonder. You definitely didn't disappoint. Good job with the dialogue. This is gettin good Brian =)

Very nicely done. Going to continue =) i like benny already.

HEy J! you have a knack for first person ! wanted to say that first I'm already liking this story so far and can't wait to see more. Corbin seems really cool and confident and assertive and a lot of words that are just plain awesome you're descriptions made me swoon over Peter, i love accents Corbin's friends sound great as well. Nice little shout out to Kyle and Cooper there. I'm also glad that Peter didn't fall for Corbin's shall we say seduction lol. i'm going to enjoy seeing how this story rolls there are a lot of great elements. Including the whole greek system. reading this reminded me of that show Greek. Looking forward to more J...maybe weekly great start!

I knew something would happen to GIbby! we're coming down to the wire here KC can't wait to see how you're going to end this one

awww kimmikins i always enjoy your epilogues this was nice, just a glimpse into david and christian's world so we could see what they've been up to since they remarried. Christian is quite the little homemaker it's nice to see that everything has settled and they added to their family! awww a sweet little girl I love babies, and men with their babies is just You paint such lovely pictures. I could see every scene as clear as day. It's been fun taking this journey with you. I'll miss Tag and Jimmy, Christian, David and the little ones as well. I'll always remember them though. time for the next project

Just so you are aware, your chapter posted monday at 4:42 pm lol at least thats when i got the notification Wayne must have secret powers and got to see it first haha. Anyway I want to know what Scott wants too. I mean he hasn't seen gibby in months and he wants to talk to him privately hmmm...what is mr kc up to. with just two chapters left i suppose we'll find out soon! glad Gibby told the police. I hope they'll follow through with the investigation and Amanda will get what she deserves. One can dream right ? Oh Tanner, you keep making Gibby do stuff in public someone is bound to think he's nuts. My mind did start to wonder when Gibby made his comment about Tanner being the death of him, and Tanner's response... okay KC you've kept me this far can't wait to see what's in store for the end here

Happy birthday

Yikes quite the misunderstanding there. I don't get Frank thoigh. He accused his very gay friend of messing with the GIRL he likes... Um yeah. I get why Josh is upset but I think I feel worse for Max

Nice pic of the three of you. glad you got to meet them MJ

Oooh Josh knows one of max's secrets now. This should be interesting. Things seem to be coming together for all the characters. can't wait to see what else is in store

Uh oh looks like Amanda is going to be gunning for Gibby next. Too bad Gibby already took the evidence to the police. I hope he takes Gibby seriously and actually looks into this. Tanner and Gibby planned it out perfectly it seemed. Gibby's mishap with the bus is so familiar *raises hand* i have had this experience many times lol . Still do when i encounter a route i have never taken. In anycase I liked this chapter a lot. Enjoyed Tanner keeping Gibby calm and giving him the strength to do what they had practiced. Can't wait to see what happens next KC

Uh oh i smell trouble. I'm glad Max and Josh have Frank and Kylie in their corner. ugh didn't like how the coach's wife treated Kylie . love that Frank wanted to tell her off for it lol. James scares me...i don't trust him and i'm glad Max and curtis are suspicious too. Max confronting James was good. They need to be careful. and the insight on Frank was great as well, i hope Josh is able to talk to his dad about interviewing Frank's dad. can't wait to read further and see what lurks in the darkness for the boys

*sigh* I love weddings. More importantly i think I love how you write weddings. Your attention to detail is just amazing to me. I could visualize everything, and i still need to go find that song because it's the perfect song for david and christian for sure. I'm really going to miss this story when it's done. it's been such a wonderful journey. Can't wait to see what you do next chica

nice chapter. I like how everything seems to be coming together here. That James guy is definitely twisted eep! can't wait to see what you have in store for this group

wow again a lot going on I think i'm going to like Kylie lol i already do. She seems to fit in with these three guys just fine I liked Frank's turn around. I think you handed that pretty well and i like that he stood up to clap for Tucker and later helped him with his boyfriend. Its good to see him back in max and Josh's corner where he belongs. i'm sure there will be bumps along the way can't wait to see what else you have in store here

Hey Nightowl a lot to digest in that chapter, but it was very good. I'm glad things worked out for Max and Josh. I hope they do have that deep conversation, since you know their relationship is forever changed now that they've crossed that threshold...though at the same time i suppose it hasn't changed per se but evolved which is just as good. I'm glad Josh's dad was there to offer some good advice. it's nice to see that both Max and Josh have supportive parents. Now i hope they will be able to have Frank too in time.

Thanks Guys i hope it will be a good day!

This chapter is just amazing from beginning to end chica. I loved how it began with the mom sitting in the cab. I knew from the minute she wondered about the house that she was a piece of work. You sure do paint some colorful characters that is for sure. She didn't disappoint either. I think what i liked most about christian and his mom was the fact that neither were willing to back down on their convictions which sometimes is not a bad thing at all. they knew where they stood, and nothing was going to change their minds. and I think deep down Chris knew that even if he wanted to see her stay for the wedding, he knew she wouldn't. he said as much to DAvid right? that her feelings weren't going to change. such an emotional ride these two took and Christian sticking up for his family. bravo to him. Also enjoyed David and Jimmy's talk about Christian too. I love that we got to see how David was feeling about this, and how he is still unsettled by Christian's memory loss. As Jimmy reflected, David is suffering here too. i am glad you brought that part out too. Jimmy's right though; CHristian is profound. i could go on but you've heard me gush about this chapter a lot already lol i love it. and even Marcia at the end giving the money to the grandkids she won't meet that was good. great chapter i can't believe this is almost over