Jammi

Libby I couldn't have said any of that better. I was sitting here agreeing with every word. This is really good advice. I always say there has to be a point to what is happening in a story. What's going on, why is it happening and where are we supposed to be when we get to the other side. And what has your character learned, gained, lost to get there. great stuff!

Thanks Andy! that's very helpful

Okay one complaint lol too short I like it though slowly pulling me in and I'm ready to follow Castiel on this journey.

Nice beginning. I love your grasp of first person narrative it's very easy to get drawn into the story and I want to know what happens next

You're still alive! lol good to know you came out of the basement long enough to post *wink* seriously you know how much I love this and you definitely have to continue to tell us about Jacob and Q and the rest of the brotherhood This chapter was far too short I think I got spoiled by your longer ones I can't wait to read the next chapter =D

That's great news!

Happy Birthday Kimmikins!!! You're the best big sis and an awesome friend. Best wishes and all for the year treat yourself to something special today you deserve it

Happy Birthday John John =D Hope this day is full of love and happiness and much fun <3

my condolences to Roan's boyfriend, family and friends. I will remember him fondly, the few times I've chatted with him he was always so cool and upbeat you never would have guessed he was dealing with something so terrible. He will be missed. such a great guy

The Carebear turns twenty-one!!!! Happy Birthday Mikie and happy GAnniversary too <3 you little brother have a great day

Hi Hayden. welcome to the site. hope you enjoy your stay here

author chats sound awesome you should bring them back. having open forum with authors and readers is a very good thing i think

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUFFIN!!!!!! I hope you have a fantabulous day, and that you are feeling better so you can enjoy it:) Best Wishes my friend

I don't knoe who i feel more sorry for; Heath or Alec. great chapter as always kimmikins. Nina is definitely a trip. She is trying to keep "her" man...guess we can't be mad at her for that eh? Bo certainly knows how to ruin a moment doesn't he ? and then on top of that Simon haha. can't wait to see how these two know each other. and why does simon want to hurt Alec so badly. guess we'll have to wait and see

thanks robert for posting this, i wish you nothing but good thoughts as you continue through the chemo and i'll keep you in my thoughts *hugs*

Happy birthday Tranq =) I hope you're enjoying your day

Heath's inner struggle best part of the story lol. Okay you know i love this. Heath taking alec to the diner, cafe, do eithe rof those even work to describe this place restaurant maybe lol which ever the food sounds soo good my mouth was watering those ribs sounded delish, and chicken fried steak mmmmm enough about the food though. I gigled when Alec was over dressed lol he likes to look nice can't hate the man for that right I also laughed when he didn't want to get on the motorcycle lol that would so be me...i like vehicles with four wheels thanks though at the same time a man on a bike is sexy hmmmm. Okay seriously kimmikins this was a good chapter. Can'rt wait to see more of what's to come. Uh oh nina is back in the picture that can't be good lol that girl is trouble with a capital t...but i will hush Heath and Alec certainly got hot and heavy didn't they. LuLu is certainly impressed .

The best thing about a Beta is that they aren't afraid to tell you what's wrong with the story. I think that's really important. you want someone who is going to be honest with you, and not steer you in the wrong direction. A beta's job is to guild and nurture in my opinion. it's like they take what you have written and enrich it, sharpen it up make it pop; that kind of thing. A beta helps you see something you may not have seen because of course you're very close to your own work. it is indeed your baby. We know the story we are trying to tell, and a good beta helps us to make sure that story makes sense. I love my betas; they are the best

Oh lordy Nina *shakes head* guess she wants' Heath's baby eh? lol this should be interesting. So Heath is starting to fall for his mark already eh. instant attraction indeed btw i love the name Heath a lot of deception going on in this story i love how your stories fit the title lol. can't wait to see what happens next kimmikins

Happy birthday TJ! I hope it was great

Hehe this story rocks. Fab as always kimkim! Can't wait to see how the story develops. Loved it first time around and already loving the redo okay break over!

So i was very happy tro see an update this morning and I smiled all the way through. I really do love this story. Sam is still my favorite and Lucca is just a sweetie. I noticed that he made the first move there in the car, woohoo Lucca I can totally understand why that was a big deal. Their conversations seem to flow so nicely, and I think Sam is starting to understand the ins and outs of Lucca and his moods. The story about how he started volunteering is so sad. I'm glad Sam didn't push. I'm also wondering what's up with Germ. he has a real chip on his shoulder, and he's upset with Lucca(jealous of?) and mad at his cousin oh dear. can't wait to see what happens next. thanks for the great update

Goodness Corbin, four days at school and you're already having quite the time. should be interesting to see how things turn out from here. Peter is not making things simple and he's throwing around mixed signals. hmmmm and the kitten lol that part was funny. oh Corbin mayhaps you shouldn't drink so much can't wait to see where this is going J

Happy one year anniversary MJ can't believe it's only been a year, i swear i thought you were here longer in four more months it will be two years for me. enjoy your movie and listen to vic

I <3 this tv show. loved Kyle Chandler and the rest of the cast and never missed an episode. I do remember this one such important messages