Jammi

Yay for max. And yay for Josh too. Both of them had tough choices to makd there. I have a feeling josh's mom has a inkling about her son. Alot of good stuff happened this chap

This is good. I feel like I'm getting to know max and Josh with every chapter. I hope mr. fleet isn't too much of a nuisance

cute story Danny! i liked it i thought it was funny liam making greg chase him haha.

I like how you started here. You introduced the main players and managed to delve briefly into their feelings. Not to mention we learned some key info about Max and Josh. I'm curious to see how this plays out. Also loved that thus far its like the typical first day of school

great interview

That title is perfect Cause if this chapter says anything it says that these two are hopelessly devoted to each other I loved it from beginning to end kim. The cute morning scene, the banter back in forth about the danish and Ethan's bedwetting. i thought it was cute when Chris wouldn't let David get up without a kiss. The scene in the kitchen was very organic and real. It's like you gave us a glimpse into their everyday life. Chris gets the kids ready, David gets breakfast ready, David gets Christian's breakfast for him so cute and just real at the same time. David says all the right things when trying to comfort Christian which is great as well. He always has this way of saying what Christian needs to hear at the right time. Loved the scene in the store too. Them trying on the tuxes, Christian worried about David who hadn't shown up yet. Tag! he's always great. loved his advice to Chris lol and glad Christian took sad advice hehe. And we got the bathroom woes again from Ethan. that little rascal I think my favorite part was the end when Chris was going to confess his biggest secret only to find out there was nothing to confess! that was a nice surprise and just drives home the point and title of the chapter David is hopelessly devoted to Christian, and he knew that no matter what Chris was devoted to him as well. great chapter chica can't wait to see the wedding

Wow poor Gibby. I gasped when i realized where you were going with that. His mom was very sick indeed eek! Glad he was able to share that with Tanner though, now Tanner knows a little more about his past. Can't wait to see how Amanda and Ethan are dealt with. the chapter countdown continues KC. looking forward to next monday

Happy birthday Renee! Welcome to the 30 club hope you have a fantabulous day dear

Happy Birthday Joe july babies rock

first off glad you're back KC. one week is enough to miss out on sheperd's crook Now on to the chapter. IT was sad yet very good and I enjoyed it . Poor Gibby and Tanner. Gibby was hurt understandably and I'm certain that Tanner never intended for that paper to be seen Obviously his opinion of Gibby has changed I hope he and Gibby can get past the hurt so they can work together to bring down Amanda. I liked the scenes at the house with Tanner's sister, and i am enjoying Tanner and Gibby despite the fact that Tanner is a ghost. Can't wait to see what happens next!

i love that last paragraph. such a profound message. Nice followup to Captivated, and it has an important message. Every choice has a consequence you have to live with. Glad there was a light at the end for Justin and he has Tyler. His parents were an awful sort glad he was taken from them.

I think the title fit this perfectly because I found myself captivated and drawn to continue reading. I hope Tyler finds Justin in time. there is a simplicity to this that is nice and your grasp of first person narrative is very admirable. very nicely done my friend. going to go read the other part now

Well it definitely sounds like you have had a crazy month. Ben sounds amazing though. Glad you had such a great time

Well, seeing as one of the brothers in black dagger brotherhood has a ghostly mate, i can't very well be upset about Tanner and Gibby. There was something very sweet about about this chapter and of course very sad. The fact that Tanner remembers, for example..wow what anguish he must be feeling to know that his best friend and Amanda, who he also saw as a friend to an extent, were the ones who did this to him. I'm glad gibby was able to comfort him and i can't wait to see what more you do here KC. i do adore tanner so i am glad he is still very much in the story even in ghost form. Gibby makes him feel alive *sigh* okay i will be waiting for next monday, you still have my attention. The bitch must pay! btw i love that not all the teachers are intimidated by her "i'm going to tell my dad about this" i can just imagine her sticking up her nose trying to be snooty. you go ms stein putting her in her place!

have i told you how much i love being able to go through this process with you? you craft such wonderful stories kimkim, thanks for letting me be a part of this....and with that said onward to the greatness of this chapter Chris and David's coming together was perfect in every way. I could feel the love between them, the want, the need the passion it was all there and very well crafted. I think my favorite line was when David told Christian his heart couldn't dance until he met him. Such a sweet sentiment, and when Christian admitted that he did love him you have this simplistic way of painting pictures...and i know i say that all the time but it's true. Can't wait to see what happens next Chica. as always love Tag too. wonder what's got on his mind

Awesome chapter chica. so much good stuff going on here. Christian with the kids, Christian going to work, and having a flash of memory, calling david because he needed him and David dropping everything immediately to be there for him. just great stuff. It's good to see Chris is starting to realize just what this man means to him and such. I chuckled though when he was snipping at him and then changed his tune because he wants him I love watching your work on this story, every moment is an adventure and you don't disappoint. looking forward to the next chapter

OH KC I'm going to trust you here can't wait to see what you're up to and what happens next. I am still sad tanner is gone, but i can't deny that i liked the moments he shared with Gibby today. I keep thinking there's more to this than romance...and so Tanner possibly has a purpose, that doesn't surprise me. He has to solve a mystery me thinks. and he was able to touch gibby's hair and kiss him hmmmm looks like i know what i'm looking for next monday

Welcome to all the new members I Hope you enjoy your stay here

Hey KC I realized as i read this that i have read another story where the romantic interest was a ghost...it was the black dagger brotherhood series...but anyway that's besides the point. i don't even know if Tanner is the love interest so i will digress and just tell you what i thought of the chapter. I will admit i am curious to see how you play this out. it is indeed a clever interesting way to go about things and i believe you have the ability to pull it off. you have very talented fingers my friend I love that Gibby was opening up to Tanner, and that he had the courage to tell him about the betrayal of the friend and the boyfriend. I'm curious as to why Tanner disappeared right then, but i bet you will be able to explain that next chapter. I am thinking Tanner appeared to Gibby for many reasons, one perhaps to soften the blow of Gibby learning about his death. For two there's something kindred about the two of them, i always thought they were connected somehow. So Tanner remembers seeing Gibby hmmmmm interesting piece of info. he doesn't remember Amanda hit him i suppose. I mean he didn't see her so that makes sense, he saw Ethan after the fact but still. So wow he kinda crushed on Ethan, i wondered about that so much going on Kc and still a good story to tell...i'm anxious to see where you take this until next monday!

two awesome stories and two great reviews. if you haven't read them i definitely agree you should

I just found and read this story I didn't even think about the fact that he was indeed sixteen when he wrote it, but that fact only reinforces my belief that he has a lot of talent. this story was very well written, and its an easy ready. you are immediately thrust into the world the author creates, and immediately the conflict is set up for you. Matt's inner struggle is evident and so clear cut that you can understand his conclusion at the end of the tale. Great seeing this story as the spotlight story for the weekend a certain author needs encouragement to bring us something new

i was curious so i found your story so i could read glad i did, i really like it, and i can't wait to see what you come up with next. i found myself wanting to read on to find out what matt's decision was going to be, and the inner monologue was fluid and nice. you have such a gift Mikie i'm going to be on you to write more now just fair warning

big andy

hehe well i'm the last person to give you a hard time about killing characters so i won't do that . man this chapter was sad but i have high hopes for whats coming next. especially with what you just told me...i can't wait to see what this means and i hope that amanda and ethan pay for what they did i want to beat their brains out with a bat hmmph. ethan thought she hit the bike, i mean really i don't think he wanted to hurt tanner, that was the vibe i was getting that he more or less wanted to scare him. great stuff KC. and its awesome that your mom read and loved the story even if she wanted you to change the ending. looking forward to next monday and more gibby visions

I really like the way this is shaping up. Arranged marriage no matter the circumstances are never easy and you convey that here. Tep has his insecurities about this union that was clear from the door. no matter how attracted he is to Taz he's worried that they would be married in name only, especially since Taz is doing this for his family. I agree with Andy i hope the future for them won't be as bleak as it seams. i'm sure despite his reasons for doing this, Taz has his doubts and hopes and fears too. perfectly played cyn i really like this and can't wait to see chapter five in completion i'm going to nag you for this one now lol its so good