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Cailen

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  1. Chapter 7: The Letter 9/03 11:00am Hogwarts/ Dumbledore’s Office “I told you the moment I arrived here that Harry Potter is not to be touched or bothered in any way, he is elven bonded and it is within my right to keep you from him. From what I have been told you have done nothing but use the boy from the moment he entered this school.” Zasuan said “That’s not true” Minerva protested and it looked like Remus was about to protest as well.”
  2. Chapter 6: Abide with Me 8/31 12:00am Hogwarts Lord Zasuan looked upon the fields of Hogwarts surprised, he was sure they the battle would be still going or it would be over, he was truly surprised to learn from the first guard that he saw that Lord Voldemort had escaped and that Hermione and Ron had been killed, He worried for Harry and hastened his march to Draco’s Tent Without waiting for his Pegasus to stop to dismount he jumped off and rushed ins
  3. Chapter 5: The Dawn Approaches III 8/30 5:50am Hogwarts The castle lowered into its normal position and the survivor’s started to sift through the bodies starting to identify who they could. Draco and Harry established a base camp on the grounds as the castle was still in the air when Voldemort retreated and it needed to be done. Draco and Ru were discussing tactical plans when an elf came into the tent “Sir’s one of the leaders from the Humans wishe
  4. Chapter 4: The Dawn Approaches II 8/29 10:06pm Elven Camp “I’M GOING FTER HIM!” Draco screamed “Someone hold him down” Orion said Three elves rushed to detain the raging prince to no avail; it seemed as if some force was preventing them from touching him Twfen finally broke through the crowd and slapped Draco clear across the face “Better?” He asked “Sorry, the bond is screaming dange
  5. Chapter 3: The Dawn Approaches 8/29 8:30pm Hogwarts Dear Blaise, I know of your true loyalties and of your reasons why, it was my job to watch for these things while you were at Hogwarts. I am writing because I know that you are there and that you must be preparing for an attack, what you do not know is that I am on your side. Deep inside Hogwarts there is a chamber that was once used as a safe house in time of danger. I know of
  6. Chapter 2: Acceleration 8/29 10:00am Chamber below Adendele “Again…” “Again…” “Again…” Harry had been in the chamber for almost five hours. Nicholas had taught him how to control elements within a room and use them as weapons. It might not be as flashy as conjuring items but it was sure less strenuous. Right now he was practicing how to make torches on the walls become like flame throwers. “Again…” Harry focused on the torch on the wall. The flame erupted into a giant ball and str
  7. CHRONICLE: 2 The Shadows grow into darkness The world plunges into the gloom Alone the hero advances Unaware of his untimely doom Come forth into light a new bonding Alone the hero, no more The tides of fate are still turning Adventures are still left in store The time is soon to be over As it is for all heroes’ fate The dark lord’s time will be over It must, before it’s too late Chapter 1: Lessons 8/21 5:28pm Adendele Castle/ Throne Room Hermione and Ron arrived i
  8. Chapter 10: Three Days After ‘It’s cold’… ‘Why am I so cold?’ ‘It’s dark… I can’t see anything’ Suddenly a light appeared.. ‘Too bright… can’t see…” his eyes started to adjust He was lying on a stone floor on some hay. Lying next to him was the body of Draco Malfoy… he was bleeding and had many cuts and bruises all over his body. He was completely naked and he had blood coming from his rectum. “Harry I’m s
  9. Chapter 9: The Missing Through the night sky they flew with incredible speed soaring though the clouds racing as if the whole world was against them, fleeing from an unknown foe. Harry clung to Draco’s back as they raced to the fire in the distance piercing the blackness of the sky. That light was Adendele City, the center of the elven race. Draco himself clung to the back of Saibeth and watched in horror as they were getting closer to see the fine details of the battle.
  10. Chapter 8: The Power of an Elven Bond Ron opened his eyes to see the white ceiling and for a second he thought he was back at Hogwarts. He felt a warm body next to him and realized Hermione was in bed with him. He turned to his side and snuggled next to her. “Before you get too comfortable I have some questions for you.” Startled Ron quickly turned over and saw himself face to face with an angry looking elf. “Like how did you get into our real
  11. Chapter 7: The Only Way Draco, Orion, and Solstice stood at the main entryway of the castle waiting for the arrival of the king and queen. They were about to set off to Slythersend to determine if they were responsible for the recent attack on their city. Draco was dressed in a silver heave battle armor which was thick and had protection, he also carried a fine elven sword and dagger. The armor was relatively light considering the bulk. He also was adorned with a small circlet with
  12. Chapter 6: STORM! 8/12 3:35pm 12 Grimmwauld Place/ Kitchen Harry had just seen Snape out the floo and was about to make himself a snack when the flames flared back to life and the forms of Hermione and Ron fell onto the floor in a heap. With a sigh and a slight smile Harry went over and gave Hermione a hand getting up. She immediately launched herself at him in a bone crunching hug. “Harry!” She exclaimed “we’ve missed you so much, you’ve gotten taller” she said
  13. Draco opened his eyes to find himself back in his chambers. His whole body ached but he was able to sit up and look around. “I’m glad you’re finally awake” Orion, Solstice, and Twfen were all sitting on either side of him. Orion was gently holding his arm. Solstice was sleeping of Twfen’s shoulder, Twfen was reading a book and set it down gently and smiled at Draco “We were beginning to get as little worried.” Twfen said nudging Solstice a little so he woul
  14. @ W_L since I'd be coming from Lowell MA i'd say we might just be roomies. I'll have to check with my work before i can confirm anything. Cailen
  15. I didn't see anyone post about this, but I thought that lovers of Gay Authors should know about Maurice Sendak famed author of "Where the Wild Things Are" 's death at 83. He was a brilliant author and a true artist. He has been an inspiration to me and I hope you follow the link and learn a little about this gentle man who changed the world. I will miss you Mauice, thank you. Cailen http://www.break.com/index/maurice-sendaks-thoughts-on-death.html
  16. In a Kingdom by the sea In a land where dreams roam free Past the shore and through the yore Travel we intended to explore The forest past the kingdom fore Beyond where eyes can see In a musty cavern glen Too dark to see foe from friend Gather light we plan to fight To lend from wrong and do what’s right And bend ill will with all our might Into the abyss the evil send A Beauty found in chains In the darkness still remains Broken out your voice and shout For the angel pains
  17. I actually just had a discussion about this so I'll add my two bits. Characters are called characters because there is something about them that is exaggerated from real life. For example: More emotional, angrier, stronger, richer, poorer, smarter, dumber. As a reader we are drawn to characters we like and away from characters we dislike. the stronger the exaggeration the harder we are drawn as a reader. I say exaggeration but i mean it in a gross generalization. I myself try to make my characters feel as 'real' as possible. One really great way I found was to interview them as if you were just meeting them. Are they articulate around strangers, do they stammer, are they shy? Ask them questions even simple ones, what is their favorite color? what do the like to eat? are they allergic to anything? the more you know about each of your characters the better you are at relating them to your audience. Keep the interviews for later reference, it helps when you are further along in your story and you need to get 'back' into the feel of one of them. One thing we all have come across and most try to avoid is getting to the third paragraph of a story and read something to the effect of "I'm 5,8 155lbs of muscle, i have a tight flat stomach and an eight inch tool." Which brings me to the point, plan your character further than their appearance. when reading that I instantly know that the author has not developed them past that first thought. Interview them, what do they want out of the story? what do they gain? what do they lose? When you can answer all these things then you are ready to start interacting them against each other and let the development roll naturally.
  18. I work in the restaurant community, my biggest pet peeve is two fold. First: self centered people; it is so incredibly obnoxious when you are so self centered that you can just be ignorant and rude to everyone around you. Talking on your phone while ordering, cutting in line, complaining about having to wait; all of these things in general. Second: Drinking from a cup without a straw; bottles are okay, but i think it's gross to drink from a cup without a straw... i dunno why... i'm weird i guess...
  19. The number 1 song the week I was born was clearly determined by fate.... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMk_OYEQW7U lol
  20. Have a Happy Birfday Joe. Be thankful for the years past, and Hopefull for the many years ahead.
  21. After being thrown out by my parents, after reconciling, after my friends funeral when he killed himself when he came out, after i hear the scores of stores from each and every gay and lesbian... I hear hope. There is change coming to this world and we will rise to meet it or we will all fall. Love one another, share your wealth with the less fortunate, and treat everyone theway you wish to be treated, contribute and do no look to take. very moving message. thanks for sharing.
  22. to 3clips and others like myself up in new england, DC is 10 hours away, getting there would be quite the event for us. if we coorinated well enough we could get a car pool together and split the cost. That would help those like me who are pretty far out, we also have a lot of canucks, if we made it New York we might have a better chance of getting them. I'm not putting down either idea, i like the thought of 2 east coast cause of distance, but if we work together we could do a car pool and that'd be fun too...
  23. Thank you everyone for the birfday wishes so far... <3 you all
  24. Dear Mark, Happy Birfday, hope it's long, exciting, leaves you breathless and on edge for hours....
  25. Happy Birfday, here's your birfday present
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