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All your Aunts and Uncles love you!
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thanks Marky
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Thanks intune, I intended it to be a short, but hey... you never know
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Have you ever has just awoken from a dream and for an instant you could still hear the voices as if you were still there; and you were still a part of it? For the past couple of days it seemed like I had the hardest time waking up, I could hear voices, and see shadows when I closed my eyes, but it was all jumbled together and I couldn’t make out what they were saying… just chaos. They’d grow louder and LOUDER and LOUDER!!! I gasped deeply, sitting up, clutching my chest as my eyes s
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A Short about a bad day for a kid named Cliff
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ditto
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I had told you long ago that you would grow past it, reading this was a painful reminder of your past, but also a glimpse as a promising future. I know as i have always known that you will grow past your pain because there is a magical quality about you, it is your unwavering strength. I believe in you, I know that you'll be alright. All my love. C
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The Wildman Of Fylingdales Moor
Cailen commented on Mark92's story chapter in The Wildman Of Fylingdales Moor
Cailen Poem Rating OVERALL: 7/10 Content: 8/10- whimsical and cheery, reflects a childlike and fun aspect you don't get to see in many poems Flow: 7/10- Pretty straight forward but some lines cause reflection which breaks the mood. Poignancy: 7/10- personally i felt the ending did not reflect the mood of the piece and made me feel a little unsure if you were the wildman or not myself. It also felt like it was cut short. -
Chapter 15: What Am I Inside?
Cailen commented on Cailen's story chapter in Chapter 15: What Am I Inside?
I thought you might like it, after people try to tell you what they think you are, it is good to go back and remind yourself what you are inside. -
Oh tell me! What am I inside? But a broken heart, and a yearning that has told me from the start “What am I inside?” But pieces of my memories and my dreams What am I inside? In this broken dream all the pain grows, Like a torrent flowing, on into my heart it goes What am I inside? But flesh and bone, Grief doesn’t seem to end, in the end I’ll know Tell Me! What am I inside? But a melody, and a harmony, and it drives into my soul and asks me this “What am I
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There once was a karate jock With a soccer boy went for a walk Till an old friend betrayed And their love was dismayed That's Second Shot's Plot that I mock!
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There once was a man with a sock He wore it whenever he walked But not on his feet Oh isn't that neat But instead around his fat cock
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You’ve locked that part inside of you, and you just can’t let it show Don’t you know? Feelings aren’t that organized You’ve put out life in front of you, as a laid out path to go But this I know; the feelings that you try and hide You think that you’re not good enough, that there’s nothing left of you But I know, that you are bigger still, your love so strong and kind You think that love is something built, but it’s also something that you do And this I know; your heart
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This reminds me of work "Expect that everything has gone wrong, and that there is not a darn thing you can do about it" so in this case both!
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I read a nifty story about this. An arranged marriage between a wealthy oil tycoon's son, to the son of a head of a major bank. I think the story was indian in nature. so the idea is out there, if your child is gay to have a gay arraigned marriage. now if someone can find the story 50pts!
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First stop end all disease, second stop end world hunger, third stop world peace and final stop make everyone gay. (population control)
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Chris Hemsworth- i like a man with hair and muscles.... yummy
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Parents forcing sex change on children as young as 1
Cailen replied to pitchan's topic in The Lounge
I think there is going to be a shocking number of transsexuals and suicide rates over there in a few years time. to do that is shocking and disturbing and really reflect a narrow minded bigotry that will eventually come around to bite them in the ass. (hopefully) -
They didn't 'catch' him doing anything... they only know he slept over. Now if they put some condescending creep inside the apartment and he was like "so you're here to cheat on your wife..." then that would be awesome and ironic...
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Happy Birfday!
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I'm versatile but generally I bottom, I'm extremely good at it. When I top i am verbal and aggressive.
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like most of my poems the setup works as lyrics to a song, oh course without the melody it runs kinda funky. I wanted there to be no resolution, it was intentional, like this poem the emotions behind it are complex. your correction was accurate and i adjusted it accordingly.
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I am in the dark alone, tears stream down my face I wonder how and why, I reached this forgotten place I felt you pulling at my heart, but you began to slip away And before you go forever, I have one thing left to say You think you live inside a gilded cage, from what you’ve been through But this cage I built around me, is just as strong and true I feel the walls i built crashing down on me; I need to be set free I don’t want fear and my cage, to be the end of me…. So
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practical when you don't have a lot of space to work with, but i'd get soooo claustrophobic...
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Score 1 for the good guys!
