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It can be seen here, that Jeremy has not changed. Even though the meds have mellowed his mood swings, he has not changed.
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While I can understand why Mac's Mom and Dad waited so long to talk to the boys about the incident and what a skinwalker was, I also hate that Devin and Mac had to wait so long. It had to be infuriating! So far, the parents seem to be OK with the whole idea. So far.
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Oh, this is going to be interesting! For the same reasons, I found her turnabout a bit strange and out of character.
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I think that is something we all wonder! Really? That's a story you're writing or just thinking about? We curious folk have to know!!!
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It was not hard to tell that the hormones would win out! All the parents have been seen except Gray's dad. I wonder when that will happen...
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With the revelation that Animal was sacked because of a complaint from Gray's employer, I guess my focus on Tom is divided between them. I'm just not ready to completely forget about Tom. While I agree, sometimes hormones get in the way of "slow!"
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That was the way I took it. However, my apologies for misconstruing what you meant.
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I agree that Tom was likely not the perp. From his reaction though, he might know who did it. I disagree. What you are implying is that all gay people want to suck dick or be fucked in the ass. Straights are taught a lot of things about gay folk, but I've never heard they were taught that. Tom is just a bully who wants to get his jollies off. He's dimwitted enough not to realize that he attempted to rape someone.
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Oh, I think Bill knew. He was just trying to be innocent! 😂 "Sure Mom. Go ahead and tell your friends that I'm a skinwalker... How long do you think it will take for them to put you into the nut house? Hmm?" I agree with several others, though. I believe that Mom and Dad are in a state of shock. They just saw something that goes against everything modern man has come to believe.
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Well... I had to leave some things for the second book or nobody would read it! 🧐 I'm glad that you enjoyed the musings of a deranged oldster (I have to be since I edit for Kyle Aarons (i.e. Kandric))!
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Lucas is up to something and it isn't gonna be good for Neil.
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@Connectwriter - Thank you so much for this story. It has been a joy to read... Um, the ending was perfect!
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If that was the only contact you had with homosexuality, then the thought is hardly "irrational." From our perspective it is. But from the perspective of the straight world, this is how the concept of gays being child molesters begins. Even the stereotypical idea that being gay means you are flamboyantly fem, stems from these types of contacts.
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This is how such hatred starts. Because of the abuse, Dad most likely developed the attitude that all gay men are predators. Hence the hatred and attitude towards Mom's brother.
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Dang... And here I thought they were teenagers!!!😂
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It's A Miracle To Find A New Life
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in It's A Miracle To Find A New Life
I think everyone was reading so fast they skipped over the third to the last paragraph! Her power is still there! -
Mac's Mom is a nag, pure and simple. They (the nags) may hit a brick wall (Devin and Mac's wedding, for instance), once in a while, but they are never defeated. I like the designation our Northern Brothers use; First Nations. But they may not. What bothered me about the boys bringing up the topic of Skin Walkers with Tom Ourway is that he seemed nonplussed that two white dudes would talk about that at all! I would've thought he would just have poo-pooed the whole idea. Instead, he gives credence to the idea that they exist—not something they would likely do. "Skin Walkers? You white people will believe anything!"
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@Summerabbacat your comments always seem to crack me up! The animal doesn't get it. If Mike had told him to leave Gray alone, the jerkwad doesn't seem to understand what might be at stake.
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I tend to think that Karens are an English-speaking phenomenon. So, it looks like many people at work are on Grayson's side. This is good. As always though, there is always at least one knuckle-dragger.
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We, as a people, have been horrible toward every other people we have encountered. We learned this from what the Romans did to us! The legacy of Rome is to treat "others" as inferior and to mold them to be as much like Romans as they could. Yet still inferior, as they were not Roman. It is that concept that the Europeans used when conquering the Americas. Before anyone says anything, this was just one example of what mankind in every civilization has done to "other" cultures than their own. We fear the "other," so we have to make them in our image or destroy them if they resist. At any rate, we now have two chapters that end with the boys seeing something that they recognize... Curse you, Bill!
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Chapter 8 - July 22, 1993
Al Norris commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 8 - July 22, 1993
Funny that this topic came up! I have the first 5 Foxfire books and the Anarchist book... Since about 1978 or so. They were very useful (The Foxfire books) in my youth. Most of the stuff in the other book was taught when I was deployed to the Batt. Recon (Onslow Beach) at Camp Lejeune. -
Chapter 7 - July 21, 1993
Al Norris commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 7 - July 21, 1993
I have a small worry. Was the diary left out in plain view? My worry is that we don't know how old Garret is and what he makes of things should he read the diary. I like how this story is developing. -
Engineer Benson - Chapter 2 - July 12, 1993
Al Norris commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 2 - July 12, 1993
Everyone seems to be caught up in the initial smell of the town. That's a blatant red-herring, in my opinion. Remember, that another town had no smell but people were getting sick anyway! My WAG is that a pathogen got loose and the smell was the result of doing/using some other chemical (which smelled bad) to try and contain the pathogen. When it was obvious that it wasn't working, or worked to little or no effect, the use of the substance was discontinued. -
Chapter 1 - July 9-11, 1993
Al Norris commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - July 9-11, 1993
That's the same reason I quit watching. It became very uninteresting... Quickly. I can think of many scenarios that just trying to survive the Zombies can give you, without having to delve into power-trips by the barbarians. -
Wow! This is an interesting departure from what I normally have read from you, Wayne. It got me hooked. I'm not a gamer, so I haven't a clue what game you are referencing.
