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No sex ed? That could save a ton of guilt! Having sex with whomever, just for fun 'cause you don't know it's sex... Oh yeah!
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Jake's story simply doesn't track. But why go to Liam? Dylan is so f**k-up in the head!
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My impression was that he was a walk-on character. He got paid the minimum screen actors guild rate because he had spoken lines. 🤓
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Oh... but the fun of licking it all off!!! 😁
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Even then!
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As the customer, I would be more afraid of the gift she would leave me! 😲 However, like most books and movies in the medieval sword & sorcery genre, pregnancy (unless it's germane to the plot) and STDs don't exist.😁
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Only Teenagers can work up this kind of drama! At least they're both back on track... Except they are gonna get caught on the kitchen floor. I just know it! The question is by whom? 🤔
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Sev is sneaky here. I don't think that Christoph caught that last part. Sev even tells Christoph that Lukas is his "nephew." Later, Christoph confronts Lukas about his "little" omission to which Lukas replies: Then, Katrina confronts Christoph about how he feels about Lukas. Lukas is already enamored with Christoph. Now all we need is for Christoph to admit the same for Lukas. Let the Games Begin!
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I am thrilled to see that Greg is taking the time to organize his Barony. As far as I recall, this didn't happen in the original version... At least, not to this extent. The amount of detail shown here displays Greg's willingness to modernize the Barony, keeping the traditions necessary for the benefit of those who work for him, yet modernizing and streamlining things for a more efficient use of people and capital.
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I'm glad that someone addressed this. Even for size queens, there is a point where too large is dangerous for the receiver, regardless of sex or cavity.
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Yeah, Tim should have told Guy about Jonathan. Isn't hindsight wonderful? We live and learn... Hopefully. @Summerabbacat, You can post songs by Eurythmics or Annie Lennox anytime you want!
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Oh, it is, for sure! I was just trying to work it out... And maybe someone else could sorta fill it in. Ya know?😁 Hmm... Damned writers dying off before they finished writing! Don't. You. Dare. Just Don't. Don't.
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I'm sitting here trying to figure out the structure of this "Organization." We have the "Dons." They are the heads of their "Family." We have the "Enforcers." They belong to their Dons and do their bidding. Then we have someone like Shanice. She instills fear into the Dons. Jake would be an enforcer for her and I assume in training to take her place. So who is she?
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Is the word "Hormones" synonymous with the word "Drama?" That's an argument Tim should use on Guy!
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Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
You're probably right but for the life of me... I can't wrap my head around it. It's likely something really simple that my brain can't see!- 55 comments
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Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
This is precisely why she would say that this was all the (sexual) abuse and not "remember" more. -
Hmm... This does not bode well for anyone (everyone?) involved.
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I would think, at least one more period of stasis. What is now worrying me is where Athena will reside. On the ship (which with age can deteriorate) or will the manufacturing processes be technical enough to reside on the planet? Yes. Joel, being the commander that he is, must know the technical level of the Earth and the other colonies. Can't prepare without that knowledge.
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While we don't know how old Christoph is, I think I can see something developing between him and Lukas. It may just be friendship, but who knows? It could be something more. That might present a whole new dilemma for a young couple from different countries.
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Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
Back in Chapter 8 (the depositions), it was implied that the right questions were not asked. That also implies that Jill just might remember the sexual abuse and is not suppressing the memories: If this is true, then Jill does not need a hypnotist - There is a lot of controversy over false (implanted) memories and even the admittance in court of recovered memories. The human mind is exceedingly weird!- 55 comments
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This is going to be interesting to see how the People of Ark II evolve. It is also going to be interesting if those of Old Earth find them, how they find them, and how those new people react to the new humans! ... Assuming the story goes that far.
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I reacted to your comment with the sad emoji. His life followed mine. He married and had children, like so many of us from that era. I suppose there is a story in that...
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Huh? You call those cliffies? Hmm... Sheltered life, methinks! 🤓 I thought I was being nice when I posted my recipe. Sheesh! 😁
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I see that my fake persona has succeeded! ... or is it fake? 🤔 Me? Nah, I'm a pussycat! Just ask those who know me...
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So much to untangle here. This chapter has brought tears to my eyes. Certain emotions that I've hidden for such a long time. In 1968, I joined the USMC. A High School friend found out and joined in what they called the "Buddy Plan." That was a concept where friends could join and they stayed together... They didn't say that staying together only meant through boot camp. We kept in contact after that until he got shipped off to Vietnam. I followed a few months later. The last I heard was that he was killed in An Hoi Valley. 😭 45 years later, he had tracked me down. It was a very tearful reunion. 🤣
