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comicfan

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  1. Thanks KC. I'm going to have my old hard drive copied and then I'll let you see the rest. Just be worried. I have dark elves, light elves, a giant spider and more to still tease you with.
  2. JC, Now what can I say that hasn't been commented on already? I like your use of the original. Yes, I have read it. You took an idea reworked it and made it completely your own. For the beautiful approach, tender feelings, and careful word choice I commend you. I really did enjoy this. Wayne
  3. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Well you left the door while creating a new universe. Seems people all along the way are going to keep asking for more. Seems whenever there is a story where people are changed mutants/faded/vampiric there seems to be the creation of camps. Interesting set up just hope you come back to it in an expanded story. Would be so worth it.
  4. Lugh, you should know better than to ask me. You haven't written a dud yet. Besides, knowing you, if you had doubts you would sent to Cia who would lovingly mark it up and you would keep going with it. That is why I only let a beta read it. No comments yet just a yes or no is what I asked for. lol
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    Chapter 1

    So naturally I liked the story but now I have one question .... what the hell was the story his parents heard? Inquiring minds want to know!
  6. Okay, so I think every writer I know has one. It is that story you keep going back to you. Eventually you find someone who you will share part of it with but you just know it isn't done and you keep going back over it, and over it, and oh yeah, over it. Meet my story, Fates of the World. I've only been writing it, for .... the last seven years. lol. It is one of those I write really hard on then stop go over it, rewrite it, toss out sections, begin again, finish it, toss out the ending, go back, do it over, lose part of it on a crashed computer, rewrite again, add forever. Well for the first time since I began the damn thing I let another human being see the first couple of chapters. I mean there was a whole world to set up and after all this time, well I wanted to make sure I hadn't been writing a bomb. Guess it passed muster because I was sort of asked for more. I guess I should pick it up again. Oh dear.
  7. Well I thank you for reading, Ella. It is one of those where situations where you hope it will go right but life is never smooth. I'm Andrea got to you. She sort of is based off a former student of mine. She might have been young, but she called them as she seen them and she was usually right on target.
  8. comicfan

    The Wedding

    Nice to see Adam hasn't totally been broken. Seems Jenny has given up. I do wonder what you have up your sleeve with James and his other toys.
  9. Aww. I am glad you enjoyed the ending Frosty. It was a long time in getting here but for now, The Wagner family is just going to have to get along without me. Many other stories are already on my plate and being worked on.
  10. Well, besides what you might have heard, I am not completely cruel to my characters. I thought having Scott and Charlie have to endure an accident on Christmas just feet from his home would be mean spirited. This way the story ends on a kiss for luck.
  11. I am happy to hear you are enjoying many of my stories. I welcome the comments and am grateful to know you are enjoying my tales.
  12. I am glad you enjoyed it Freddy. No plans for more Charlie right now though.
  13. I am so glad you enjoyed the story, Charlie.
  14. Thanks Dad. Yup, Charlie found himself a keeper. They get to start off with kiss for the new year.
  15. You might very well say Mika is going to open up whole new worlds to them. I know, not fair. One chapter left in this book but it becomes clear what is in store for Seeon and it should be a lot of fun.
  16. I am glad you are enjoying Seeon. I try to vary the stories I write so that you, like myself, don't get bored reading the same things. I'm always glad when someone likes a story I am writing.
  17. Thank you KC. I hope everyone agrees with you. Hard to imagine with all the stories I have done this was the one I started first and took the longest to finish. Taught me a lot of things, but hopefully no one will think too badly of Charlie.
  18. comicfan

    Mr. Anonymous

    Ah very sweet and nicely handled. The hand writing had been on the wall for who Max was. I'm just glad to know that he can take "Binx" and realize it makes no difference. Here is a chance for him to be who he really is. Can't wait to see how you tackle the rest of this KC.
  19. Chapter 31 – And a Happy New Year Charlie’s right hand found the door handle and grasped it till his fingers turned white. He closed his eyes and said a prayer as Scott began inching his way toward his apartment building. He could feel sweat on his forehead and taste saltiness as he waited. He felt his stomach sink and it took a minute for him to realize it was the truck dipping down. “Open your eyes, Charlie. I need to know which way to go.” Scott’s voice was
  20. Okay get ready cause this is going to be a quick but wild entry. First off I got a few gifts for holiday. Two of them were from people here on the site. It would be remiss of me to not to thank them, and I have. How can you go wrong with cook books or collections of comic books if you know me? They have good taste is all I can say. The gifts from my family, well lets just say that they were lacking. Who would expect that the oddest gifts, the ones you don't know what to do with, you know you certainly won't use, and know you can't exchange, would come from your own family? Odd. Then there were the two gifts I gave those who follow me. The latest chapter of Seeon is up and on time. The final chapter of Accidents Happen is in the hands of Jian and Intune. When they get done that chapter goes up and the story is done. I know it feels like a Christmas miracle. Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed your holiday and your gifts were things you like and can enjoy. Merry Christmas to all and to all a good night.
  21. Yes DK, there will be more of Seeon to come in a second complete story. Huge hint as to what it is all about in the last chapter of this first book. Glad you have enjoyed the story so far.
  22. The story is going to move on to focus on Seeon and Mika. Seeon's family will be dealing with the war and Seeon has better things coming up in his future. Glad you have been enjoying the ride.
  23. Aww. I hope you enjoyed your Christmas and didn't have to go crazy waiting for it. I'm glad you are enjoying Seeon. The first book will end with the next chapter. I am already working hard on the second book of it.
  24. Chapter 8 – A Honeymoon Night For Seeon Mika shook his head and pushed the door closed. He put Seeon down, turned, and began to unbutton his jacket. Seeon stood unsure what to do. He nervously shuffled from foot to foot, trying hard not to let Mika know how nervous he really was. “Okay, you have to be uncomfortable. Why don’t you change, take out that bud, and then get into something comfortable so we can talk?” Seeon stood ther
  25. Happy Birthday Anyta. Hope your day was a blessed one.
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