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Tony's Outted - Prompt 586
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Tony's Outted - Prompt 586
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“Where are you planning to get the money for that vacation?” Tony looked over Mark’s broad shoulder at the website on screen. “I can look. You know I’ve been putting money away.” Mark turned and glared at his brother. “And it isn’t a vacation, it’s called a honeymoon!” “Yeah, yeah.” Tony smiled and sat on his older brother’s bed. “Just don’t you and Bran forget to bring me back something!” “You do realize its our honeymoon. We aren’t going for souvenirs, you know?” Tony nodde
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reminds me of an episode of the Twilight zone. creepy
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Look what the cat dragged in
comicfan commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Look what the cat dragged in
Reminds me of the Puritans. Glad he is getting out with the cat. No scarlet letter for him. -
Dolores, your story sucked me in. I want to know where these pirates are, what happened to the diplomat, and if this does mean war. Great job.
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This was an emotional ride. I don't know what was sadder - paper being a rarity, opening the door for a few moments could literally cost you your life, or the fact the daisy vanished. Nicely done.
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oooh. Nice twist to this. Really enjoyed but wonder where the story goes from here. Sad to hear this wasn't their first time out and it is probably because they are gay. Hope to see more.
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Well, there was a twist I wasn't expecting. Great story, deceptive, and fun to read.
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Newsletter game - Where am I?
comicfan commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Newsletter game - Where am I?
I dont know if the fact Niv was probably going to miss his own wedding or the fact it was a scene surprised me more. -
My dear Val, I finally get to say this to you - I want more!!!! It is interesting to find a star, being accused of fatherhood, who takes one look and immediately knows who the father is. Makes me wonder if it a brother or uncle, or maybe a stunt double. Hope for an answer.
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So the poor Champion has been in a few fights and won. Seems his sponsor is responsible for everything. The sponsor dresses him, arms him, and prepares him for a month. Add it that he reminds me of the 80''s song, I like them big and stupid, and it makes you hope that the champ will turn out to be so much more. Interesting world you are building. Hope for more.
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Seems there are certain phrases that resonated. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Always love a tale that starts with bloodshed and deception.
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Don't worry Pup. Going for a rewrite that will be an anthology length.
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Nope, nothing at all to do with Jonas.
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lol. Everyone wants him for laundry. Glad you enjoyed it Adi.
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Glad the ending came as a surprise, but you still enjoyed it.
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Thanks Jeff. Was one of my earlier pieces, but enjoyed it.
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Imagine having the power to change someone and make them totally fit into the world already. To communicate with earlier versions of yourself and it isn't all they can do as a cat. Now that cat is human. Beware. Lol
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Glad you enjoyed it Drew. Valkyrie always wants more.
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Seriously considering going back to flesh this out. Glad you enjoyed, Gary.
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Please, it's just clothing, no ropes or whips. Lol. Besides he is just that boring.
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Always good to be a little ballsy.
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I never like doing the expected. Besides if the fairy can grow to six foot tall, he might as well be acid tongued.
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Yeah. I never do normal.
