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Kitt, I couldn't have put it any better. Thank you.
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We'll I didn't want people guessing which story was mine before the reveal.
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Melissa is the innocent who will be hurt. Just couldn't see a way to fix it. Thanks for commenting.
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Honestly, they need to talk but I don't see them as a couple. Melissa is the one who will end up losing.
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Melissa is the only innocent in this. The other three are all guilty of something.
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I don't know if Cam can get back on the right path. Betrayal cuts deeply. Terry''s mistake's come from youth and not going for someone single.
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Yeah, Terry just knew too much about Cam. It's a case of going for what he wanted and it blew everything apart. They are all guilty and victims at the same time. Thanks for commenting.
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This is one of those stories where there are no winners, only losers. Cam screwed up, Terry was too young and went where he shouldn't have, Desean has his four year old daughter, and Melissa is missing the man she knows as her other dad. You just hope they find a way to make things work for Melissa. Thanks for the comment.
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Congratulations to the winners. Special thanks @Valkyrie for the save.
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Prompt 123 - Oh Mom, It's Spring
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Prompt 123 - Oh Mom, It's Spring
My mom had a green thumb and flowers from spring til fall, but roses were her favorites. The yard was always alive with some type of bloom. -
prompts Writing Prompts #620 & #621
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Yes. Challenges appear every now and again. Past challenges include a mystery, describing something without naming it, and others. A challenge is usually a chance to focus on an aspect of your craft you might ignore or try something you've never done before. Enjoy. -
I've learned never to say never. Might come back to this.
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Improve & Encourage #4: Hard Choices
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Thank you so much JayT. This is one of those tales that sort of had a basis in reality. I remember it being liked when I first presented it. -
Improve & Encourage #6: Little Man
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Mann has a flair for capturing your attention and does it in Little Man. If you haven't read it yet, go do it now.- 8 comments
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Halloween Short Story Contest *Voting Open*
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Always feel like I'm behind. I did read and comment on all of them. -
Halloween Short Story Contest *Voting Open*
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
all done. They are very varied. -
Here I am thinking Green Man or new Dryads and it ends up being a drug dealer? Disappointing to find it so mundane. Good story, although Jonah will probably have a field day with this.
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Seems like a mess with no winners and lots of losers. I really feel sorry for Melissa,
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Such a sad story. You can't help but feel for them and hope we don't slip back to that kind of bigotry.
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This just seems to be a tale of three poor souls. Bauer, who had love, but secrets in his past. Spencer, a sweet man waiting for his first kiss. And poor Dalton caught between them. Ghost stories are always somewhat sad. Nicely told.
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Richard is a straight out creep. He is destroying people left and right. Jody needs help. He scared the hell out of me when he held the gun. Hearing about his suicide attempt was funny. However, if he is going to have a future he needs some counselling. Tommy needs to either be put up for sainthood or else in for help too. Staying with someone for five years while they sleep around is the act of a crazy man. Story was interesting and worry about the future of all four.
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Aww. Poor Denny had a nightmare and didn't get to go trick or treating. Felt bad he dreamed of being possessed and never got any candy. Not happy with his teacher either.
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Hmm. Brownies are have always been helpful spirits. Crows are carriers of knowledge and death. To see them working mischief was wrong. Then two angels show up too? Poor Dom was not having a good Halloween.
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Poor Christopher. He grew up in fear of Halloween, only to solve the mystery behind the disappearance of all those children. You feel sorry for the eight families that lost their children, but hope having answers and finding their bodies brought some kind of peace. Grateful that the sheriff believed Christopher and that he wasn't made a suspect. Spooky tale.
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Diego knows what he wants and goes for it, whether it was Taylor or Cairo, although I think he makes a much better part of a couple with Cairo. Milo, Parker, and Naomi help to set up a healthy relationship. I find Taylor to be really disgusting going to the Gibson site and making fun of Adam's death. Not sure I like Nicole making a bad joke worse. Glad to see Diego and Cairo talking. Hope their relationship blossoms.
