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Chapter 3 - A Wedding Prepared For
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 3 - A Wedding Prepared For
Seeon is about to embark on an adventure he never thought about or could have imagined. What the priest or his sister-in-law think won't matter once he is married. -
Chapter 2 - A Ma' Nee is Made
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 2 - A Ma' Nee is Made
Seeon has been very isolated. He will do as he is commanded for many reasons. Time will tell. -
Chapter 1 - A World of Change
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A World of Change
Seeon is still an innocent and very much a pawn for his family. Still waters run deep, and is very true in Seeon's case. -
Sometimes, you are the product of your upbringing. However, some people don't stop growing and changing. Seeon is slowly seizing control of his life and growing. I think that is what we all wish for ourselves and those we love.
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Why didn't they ....? Because that isn't in the character's makeup. They need to learn, grow, and have the experience of the story. Not everything always works out. Same thing happens in real life, but a story as the author (or God of the world we are creating ) we need to make interesting. What fun is it if there are no problems, no growth, and no excitement?
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Well at least Cia will be happy. We have a grinch stealing presents. Only kidding Ivric.
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I'll take number 5.
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Sorry Cole. There was more to tell but to keep it as readable as possible, and because of how close to the damn deadline this story finally came to me, it's not as fully nuanced as I'd like. Thanks for commenting.
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I set it so the two would talk but neither is without guilt. I never really seen them back together, but talking because of Melissa.
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Plenty of blame for all. Melissa is the loser here. Time restraints kept some parts of the story out, but the only innocent is 4 year old Melissa. Desean and Camillo fell apart after 5 years together. I'll just say no one else is innocent.
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Yeah. Melissa sees Cam as dad. This whole thing was just a mess.
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Kitt, I couldn't have put it any better. Thank you.
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We'll I didn't want people guessing which story was mine before the reveal.
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Melissa is the innocent who will be hurt. Just couldn't see a way to fix it. Thanks for commenting.
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Honestly, they need to talk but I don't see them as a couple. Melissa is the one who will end up losing.
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Melissa is the only innocent in this. The other three are all guilty of something.
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I don't know if Cam can get back on the right path. Betrayal cuts deeply. Terry''s mistake's come from youth and not going for someone single.
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Yeah, Terry just knew too much about Cam. It's a case of going for what he wanted and it blew everything apart. They are all guilty and victims at the same time. Thanks for commenting.
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This is one of those stories where there are no winners, only losers. Cam screwed up, Terry was too young and went where he shouldn't have, Desean has his four year old daughter, and Melissa is missing the man she knows as her other dad. You just hope they find a way to make things work for Melissa. Thanks for the comment.
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Congratulations to the winners. Special thanks @Valkyrie for the save.
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Prompt 123 - Oh Mom, It's Spring
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Prompt 123 - Oh Mom, It's Spring
My mom had a green thumb and flowers from spring til fall, but roses were her favorites. The yard was always alive with some type of bloom. -
prompts Writing Prompts #620 & #621
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Yes. Challenges appear every now and again. Past challenges include a mystery, describing something without naming it, and others. A challenge is usually a chance to focus on an aspect of your craft you might ignore or try something you've never done before. Enjoy. -
I've learned never to say never. Might come back to this.
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Improve & Encourage #4: Hard Choices
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Thank you so much JayT. This is one of those tales that sort of had a basis in reality. I remember it being liked when I first presented it. -
Improve & Encourage #6: Little Man
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Mann has a flair for capturing your attention and does it in Little Man. If you haven't read it yet, go do it now.- 8 comments
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