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Happy Birthday Kiltie. You know I can't be normal so ....
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Prompt 425 I never thought it could be like this.
comicfan commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 425 I never thought it could be like this.
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As I always say, I never know where another author will take the idea I have in my head. Very well done. I like how we see Art's reaction to the guys and how it is made clear they aren't wanted, not because they have done something wrong, but because of who they are. Sometimes it takes something horrible for people to realize they are wrong, sometimes not even then. Love a story that makes you think. Great tale Val.
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My life has been a bit crazy lately. I really have been working far too hard and am in need of a vacation. To prove it, I think I might be losing my mind. It all began when I woke up this morning. Max was actually sitting at my side, happy to see me. Usually, I trip over Max as I make my way to the bathroom. He won’t get up ‘til he hears me pouring his dog food into his dish. Then he moseys out, eats, and wants out into the back yard so he can do his business before I have to run for work. That
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A Bit Too Much - Prompt 274
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in A Bit Too Much - Prompt 274
Yeah he is going to be paying for that one for a long, long time. Major screw up -
Oh lord. When I create these things I never know where another author is going to take them. I laughed throughout the whole thing. I would have died though if all my bits and assets were on display. The poor man definitely needs some new superhero underwear. Too funny, Greg.
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Thank you Brian. I wanted to expand Jonas from what the original story was, so you could hopefully connect with him. He is just your ordinary guy sort of shoved into a world he didn't even know existed and it has turned his world upside down. While chapter 20 was to be the end, I did get a number of questions from readers emailed to me that I felt I never properly addressed so working on an epilogue to deal with that. Hopefully it will fulfill your needs.
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When I created Opie I see him as someone tall, like Denis Leary, but with bright orange hair, like Carrot Top. He is working with a glamour that alters his appearance but can't completely hide it. There is one more chapter, but there is also an epilogue which I am using to address some of the questions people have emailed me. Thanks for the review Cannd.
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Well it took a long time, but Jonas finally is reaching his end. Glad you have enjoyed him Dad. Only wish there hadn't been so many real life interruptions during the writing of it.
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The next chapter is all about Lu. Thanks for staying with me Puppilull.
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The focus has always been on Jonas. His life hasn't been a smooth one, but I have enough to surprise people right up to the end. Glad you have enjoyed the story Dr. Paladin and that you have commented as you went alone. I also love that song.
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Tim, to say that I got this story out seems to be something of a miracle. I've had more issues with Jonas than anything I have ever written. I am just grateful the story will be completed at last and people won't have to worry what I had planned to do with it. I just hope everyone has enjoyed this.
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I sat staring at this incredible blue man for a moment. His hair was long and curly. I couldn’t believe the hairy chest and the muscle definition this guy had. He wasn’t wearing a shirt and I could see his six pack. I don’t even remember reaching across the desk to try and touch his chest, but suddenly Fire smacked my hand. “Jonas!” Fire literally blazed before me. “I believe you are supposed to make a phone call,” the stranger commented. His deep baritone sent shock waves through me. He pick
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Enjoy your birthday, Layla.
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Glad the prompt helped you create this. So sweet. Loved it.
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That was one way to get out of a rotten date. At least it was his cousin so he could relax and just have fun.
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So a bright and shiny sparkly jacket so he can emcee. I bet he wishes he was doing anything else. Could be worse though. He could be one of the bachelors. Next year he will have an excuse, even if he has to break his arm to get it.
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Jonas doesn't really get to see who ordered the products or the dates. He is mainly the organizer and checks to make sure everything is as it is supposed to be. you get the as much as Jonas feels like describing. He might be gay but those doing the ordering of a date aren't always. All you know is that his orders are for the very rich.
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Oh Opie will have his time with Mr. Marks. As for the application, well Jonas filled it out honestly, but he never thought anything would come of it. Wait and see.
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Jen's family is basically Jonas's family. He has a natural support there and they all love and accept him. Opie finds something special in Jonas. He sort of refers to him as his squire.
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The characters can be anyone and anything. I was a voracious reader as a child and those stories stayed with me. I use parts of them in nearly all I write. It makes life more interesting that way.
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Jonas is so focused on his own issues he hasn't been noticing the things around him. Opie and Fire are sort of forcing him to focus on the wider world.
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Fire is a tough cookie. She decides who she wants and how she will handle them. Jonas seems to be a major departure from her usual choices.
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Questions aplenty here. You will just have to read to see what happens. The final two chapters are being edited even as I write this. Hope the ending meets your approval.
