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comicfan

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  1. Um Dad didn't give any letters. Guess I'll just use MITCH May I take Calvin home? HELLO
  2. Wow. Mine. Lol.
  3. Well that is the fun of the prompts. Thanks for commenting.
  4. We'll we aren't sure if Alice and Maurer were acting as cupid, but the ladies sure were his guardian angels. I'm never one for doing the obvious, but I might pick this story up in the next prompt. Thanks for the comment Puppilull
  5. Today was a break in the rain here, but more is due tomorrow. As for the talk, well Tony did sort of walk out of his friendship and Dillon didn't get much say in the matter. He might want to say a few things and who knows where that might take him. Thanks for reading and commenting.
  6. Uno. Played it all the time. What is something you are proud of?
  7. Thanks Val. Working on getting things done.
  8. The nice thing about a prompt is it can go wherever you like. Thanks for reading and commenting.
  9. Tony had gotten up before the sun had even risen. It was the first day of his vacation and he didn’t want to waste it. He tossed a change of clothes into his old knapsack and figured he would hike across the city, maybe climb some of the hills overlooking the water. He wasn’t sure exactly what he wanted to do yet. He slipped on his hiking boots, slipped his keys and wallet into his knapsack, and marched out of the house. The early morning fog clung to him like a damp second skin. He w
  10. Hello all. I've been something of a mess lately. Personally had some health issues, loss of my computer, and other issues lead to me basically taking some time away from GA. However, someone graciously gifted me a tablet, so the ideas I've been writing out in a notebook can now be typed up and shared. Have a story I'm currently working on called Dragon's Hoard. Once I am closer to completion I will look for an editor. Thank you for still being interested in my wild tales. Wayne
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    Chapter 1

    William, you took one of my darkest stories to read. I see this more as someone who has never had a friend or much of a life, telling his story. Where most people might start with their earliest memory, first day of school, learning to ride a bike, first love, accomplishments, friends, or whatever, Ron doesn't have these experiences. He can only go from abuse to abuse. The times in between would be huge gaps of nothingness. He is afraid and is totally alone. It is what makes him such an easy target. He wants a friend, love, and companionship, but has no idea how to about it. It is only now that he sees he can have these that the change might happen. Thanks for commenting.
  12. I have one or two new ones to add.
  13. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  14. comicfan

    Epilogue

    Val, this was a great story. Having been there I know what recovery is like. Penguin was so cute. Beautifully done.
  15. Okay, so I'm late coming to this. I remember meeting these beautiful men in various prompts, but not reading this. I'm sorry I didn't read it originally. It is now 3am and for just over three and half hours I read the whole tale. Needless to say I'll be looking for more.
  16. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Thank you, Kitt.
  17. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Thank you, Pupp. I don't think most of us know the impression we make on others. The acts of kindness or casual cruelty can do much to those around us, either to help or harm them. Bill is just a kind soul trying his best, and it is coming back to him. Thank you for the review.
  18. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Cole. In many respects, older people are just ignored. Sometimes, just taking the time to say hello opens a door into a wealth of knowledge. Kindness is the gift that keeps on giving. Thank you for the review.
  19. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    In some respects, Bill is based on me. I can sleep like the dead, as long as you don't touch me the house could come down and I'd never wake. His friendship with friends and neighbors is something to aspire to. Thank you for the kind review.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review, Caz. I just wanted to show that sometimes the best family is the one we make for ourselves. For Bill it was his neighbors and now the family of his partner. Ties of both family, community, gay, and straight. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  21. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it.
  22. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    I'm glad you liked it, Lisa. I wasn't sure how people were going to take it.
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