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  1. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    You do so enjoy making things interesting, Cia. I have to admit I was immediately drawn into your story. I loved learning all about the world and the aliens allowed into it. I guess I am curious as to where you plan to take it. As for your POV question, well I think a look at the Miah through Moshe's eyes might be fun. Besides then he can explain some of the stuff like why they hunt to find a mate and are they even male to begin with. Till next time.
  2. Well that was a completely fresh take on the theme. I really liked that Bill. Nature really does have a terrible wrath, doesn't he. Nice story. Glad to see the little guy get even with his bullies.
  3. comicfan

    The Story

    I like the whole support and slow reveal of David. I just wonder if his father did the knife wound why did David's friends think Robert was going to attack him. It wasn't like the wound was from an older lover. It was the only real quibble I had with a very nice story.
  4. comicfan

    Cumulonimbus

    Yeah. I am glad to see the other side of this story. I was so pissed with the way it ended last time I wanted to smack Sam for going back to Mark. Now we know that he didn't. I really liked this so much. Great job!
  5. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Ren makes for an interesting character. It is nice to see that any child after the heir and the spare aren't just there to fill space. I like the Ranger and how he is trained to work. Your creation of this world is nice. I felt right at home here. Feng is different. I'm surprised at how he seems to accept what has happened, his injury, and how he and Ren will be spending part of their winter together. Hope to see you expand this.
  6. Paul, Begin at the top and work to the bottom.
  7. Well I just have to finish my story, beta another, and then I relax and read these. Can't wait!
  8. “Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.” That saying is nothing but accurate when you consider the two women who had demanded the appearance of so many of us. When Mother Nature and Gaia gathered the weather gods and goddesses from every pantheon the world has ever known, well let’s just say this isn’t going to be a social gathering in the local mead house. Gaia walked to the table and watched as the rest of the crowd slowly filled the space. No one could deny who or what she represented. Fro
  9. Gaia and Mother Nature are ill and command the gods and goddess to create Ragnarok, the Twilight of the Gods and the end of the world. What can the Gods do to stop this from happening?
  10. Congrats Graeme. Just means you have a standard people recognize. Now get writing so in a few months you can have that other title as well.
  11. March is a rough month. That sounds odd I know, but I will explain. Growing up the month of March was something my family knew would be busy and fun. March held two big events for my family - my mother's birthday and my parent's anniversary. These things were something that my family knew would start and finish major events. Today is March 10th and my mother would have been 74 today. My father and I have sort of avoided talking about it because neither of us wants to break down again. It is amazing how you become use to someone just being there day in and out, until they aren't. Time passes, it eases a bit, but certain days or events will drive it home again. I think a part of the problem is I am alone so I can't confide and turn to my own partner to share things with. I am the rock others turn to. Their anniversary is in a few days. In between I know we will take a trip out to the national cemetery to lay flowers on her grave. Their time to celebrate always ended with St. Patrick's Day. It is usually why I am quick to send all my friends cards for that. Unfortunately this year I have had a hard time just keeping up period when it comes to events. I have been focused on my writing and trying to keep myself from saying or doing things wrong. Seems I have upset some people, but didn't realize it. So just taking some time to myself and sorry if I am being a bit standoffish. Just dealing with things the best I can. Even as I write this I have someone asking that I help them with something they are going through, and I find I can't tell them no. Eventually, I will have to find someone I can lean on, or else I am going to fall apart one day and doubt the pieces will be put back together.
  12. comicfan

    Chapter 10

    Glad you are enjoying it, KC. Yeah I finally got back to him. lol
  13. comicfan

    Chapter 2

    Well just another short story knotme. Before it is over you will see how Alice, James, and Mrs. Benson all fit together and the world that they have been inhabiting. Hope you enjoy it.
  14. comicfan

    Chapter 2

    2 It was a long night. Mrs. Benson had been rushed into the emergency room and I gave what information I could on her. I knew who her regular doctor was, but had no idea where, or if, she even had a medical card. I mean, I worked for her, but I wasn’t exactly familiar with where she kept all her personal information. It was around nine that night that a doctor finally came out and told me she had been moved into a room in ICU. I nodded and called Alice. “Good evening, Benson residence. This is
  15. There is a drama? Gee, how did I miss it? Should I stop publishing for a while? I mean, Jonas only got a new chapter for the first time in a year and a half. I'm sure the readers won't mind if I put it off, right?
  16. Well most of the time I like my happy endings. Not always going to happen with the prompts though. Thanks for reading.
  17. Welcome and Congrats Stellar. (Yeah purple was pretty but just think, now you are brown. )
  18. comicfan

    Chapter 3

    If you find a green line at a Krogers I'd be surprised. The only ones I've ever heard of are a grocery store out in Indiana near my brother. Glad you are enjoying this story though.
  19. comicfan

    Chapter 10

    Jenny isn't so bad. She just tries too hard, but she really does care about Jo. He is her best friend and she just wants to see him happy. Glad you are enjoying this Knotme.
  20. comicfan

    Chapter 10

    Jonas is just trying desperately to survive. Life doesn't always go smoothly for him, but he is trying his best. Isn't that normal in life?
  21. Well Sid, the story continues.
  22. comicfan

    Chapter 10

    Thanks for reading, Sam. I plan to get a chapter out every Wednesday till it is done. Here is hoping.
  23. comicfan

    Chapter 5

    Thanks Sam. In over a year not a person said a word to me. I fixed that. Thank you again.
  24. comicfan

    Chapter 10

    Well some of that comes up in the next chapter, but like anything else people will just have to wait till I get it up here to read.
  25. comicfan

    Prompt 303

    I love elves. You have a very sweet little tale there Ron. I know from the many stories I've read that time in Faerie isn't the same as time in the human world. So what was a day for him was over a year here. I wonder what his decision will be. Does he have a wife and children, or a partner he loves, or did some part of him still long for the strange boy with the pointed ears. Nicely done, Ron.
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