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Happy Birthday Dave!! Hope you have a wonderful day with perfect weather!!
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I've seen some flashbacks that were done very well and some that really stopped the flow of the story. It depends on how it's applied. You can hand 2 different people paintbrushes and let them get creative, you might end up with a masterpieces and something that looks like money-shit-finger-art. It's a great tool if done well. Personally, I don't do many flashbacks, but when I do, they are usually in the form of a dream scene. That's my preferred method of a flashback.
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Wow, talk about a nightmare! It was such a build up with the hate and violence that he endured, I only wished there was just a little more. The end was so sudden. He's suffering in this perilous situation then suddenly... jarringly he's home? This would be a great piece to flesh-out even a if only for a little more, keeping it still a short story, but adding just enough to smooth the transition and make it well rounded. Great job at scaring the bejesus out of me!
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Philip looked up from the pile of papers on his desk when his secretary knocked on his office door. “Excuse me, Mr. Morgan, but Mr. Burkhart is here to see you.” The woman pushed the door open wider, giving her boss a clear view of Asher standing behind her. Even in her expensive business attire of a gray, pencil skirt and pin-striped blouse, Asher still couldn’t fight the jealous pang that twisted his stomach into knots from standing so close to this beautiful woman that his boyfriend clearl
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GA did have a red 'Dislike' Button that had -1 rep point that they stopped using a few years ago. The problem with that is, it was "Anonymous". If GA had Negative Rep Points that reflected like the Positive Rep points and showed the member and the date/time, I would have no objections. I would like to know when someone dislikes something I've written or said in forums, but if it's Anonymous I would object. It was severally abused that's why it was removed.
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Yeah....that's what I was doing...being suave and mixing the two Hehe...guess spell check didn't catch that one, but your suggestion is cool too
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It's not easy being King Oops, I did it again License to Write A Pen By Any Other Name Is my ego showing? Sir Ass-A-Lot Excuse Me...More Please! I make this look easy Sugar High Elvis has left the building I'm Easy Gundam Style I would like to thank the Academy
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Jeez that would require thinking...which I'm not good at (guess I could give it a try...call fire department if you smell smoke! LOL )
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I've had bad habits of doing some major cliffhangers in the past and I'm really trying to refrain. It's overused in lots of other mainstream media. I'm also going to do some fade-to-black sex scenes since I don't want this to turn into one of those stories that has to be sex everywhere (but there will be some...just not main focus) Thanks so much for stopping by and letting me know what you think! Kc
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Ian is an annoying friend and most of us have one of those buzzing around, LOL. No, it wasn't an official 'date' just them meeting up for dinner. Since Michael has practically living at Asher's apartment, and since they had busy days they met up for dinner Thanks for reading, NLY KC
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You better like the new chapter names, I did it for you!! I have a friend like Ian, he can be such a pain in the ass!! I'm glad that Michael and Asher were able to move past the trouble Ian is trying to cause. Thanks so much for all of your support during this story! KC
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Haha, I like 'Slimy Ian' I might have to use that! I didn't want their argument to fester over several chapters and I'm really trying not to leave readers dangling on a cliff. I like that they worked it out. ((But how cool would it have been for Michael to have punched Ian in the eye? ) Wishful thinking? Thanks for reading! KC
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How about something between "Cheat so good" and "I'm Definitely Not Kitty" 8,250 is long way to be stuck with the same one!
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I am not responsible for holes burned into computer screens.... LOL Thanks so much for reading and liking! KC
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LOL You are so funny, I agree that it was HOT. I'm glad you liked it, there's still more to come, I'm thinking we are about 2/3rd way through the story. Thanks so much for reading ((Should I let my Catholic In-Laws know you are converting!!)) KC
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How did I miss this?? LOL, well I've talked to you between then and now so you know where I'm coming from Thanks again!! KC
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Wayne,You always amaze me with what you come up with...and I know you could not walk away from the Mythology behind Pandora's Box! You put a fresh twist on it but still brought in familiar characters to give it pizzazz! It is something everyone can relate too. Now, whenever I'm having a particularly rough day, I might look for my own lunch box to help me through.
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Impressive! I was wondering where you were going with this. Once it started to fall into place, I was amazed. Very emotional. A great little story!!
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This is such a touching yet bittersweet story. I felt so sorry for the boy, the unspeakable horrors he endured from his home at the hands of his father. Parents are supposed to love their children. I infuriates me when they don't. I love the ending with them introducing themselves to each other A great story!!
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I've never read any story in this style before. It was very interesting. I like that Yuki and Kaede were best friends who found themselves attracted to each other. it was sweet. I'm glad Yuki has a boyfriend wiling to walk into certain disaster and fight the terrible sisters to save him. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Oooh Dolores, I don't know how I missed this!! Thanks so much for reading and letting me know that you liked it. Kc
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Thanks Ieshwar! This story was soooo much fun to write. The characters were great. I didn't want to step too close to the 'reality tv' scripted crap that's on tv today and wanted it to be something fresh and new and full of delicious debauchery! Hope it delivered Thanks for letting me know that you like it KC
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I'm there with you, Aditus, I could not live in Pandora's Box! It's new and exciting for Ryan but also very different from what he's known so far. I've already started on my 'Recipe for Disaster', which is going to be another one of my real life moments ((grant that it's not one of my finer moments either. It could have been sooooo bad...well, it was bad, but could have been worse )) Thanks so much for reading! KC
