Aditus
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He is such a nice person, all the ugly didn't destroy that. There must be something somewhere pretty soon.
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That was awkward! There was help, but somehow it was the wrong kind of help. Is that even possible? Could he have talked to Ozzie?
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When I read this chapter, I thought maybe this is the place where he will stop. Then I thought, no. Knowing Parker, well I don't really know you, only your story, that won't be all. He lulls us in to think Stefan is safe, and then bam!
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Everyone is bad. Why is everyone bad? I would run too. As fast and far as I can. Sometimes I think this story is a metaphor for all the ugly in mankind.
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I caught myself reading as fast as I could, and not because your writing is bad. There's still more...OMG.
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Very nice, Tim. *pats Tim on shoulder* I'm sure there will be more eventually. Think of all the things you could rant about here...
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Again this was difficult to read. Nobody can do everything 100% right. There will always be something. Stefan sounds so defeated, but then, when you think he's so deprived of attention, he would jump at some interest, he does the smart thing, thank God. I just have the feeling this isn't the end of it.
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It's difficult to read this. Not only the brutality, but the hopelessness. I'll come back as one of those black bugs...it almost made me cry. Or his observation that the good looking guys have ugly souls... I will definitely read on, but I'll always need a day in between chapters.
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Wonderful story, Renee! It was just the right dose of love and drama. I really enjoyed this.
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Lol, so you have at least one other personality? Fact is, the joining of Diarmad doesn't work, if they do not love each other. Can you make yourself falling in love, so you can save someone from certain death? Thank you, Peter!
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I'm so glad you mention the quietness of the scene and that you liked it. Sometimes I fear I bore my readers to death with Noel's struggle and the many questions. You're right, he is chosen for his strength. Thank you, Peter!
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But he gets his PERFECT MATE! Or not...evil cackle here... Maybe someone else we don't know yet will snatch him up? lol Thank you, Puppi. There is much more to come, still I'm happy you all feel so much for Noel.
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Thank you, Geemeedee! See my comment to LitLover's review.
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I'm so happy to read all those questions. It shows you can put yourself in Noel's position. For me as author that's a great feeling. Noel is special, otherwise he wouldn't be who he is. It will be difficult for him, no doubt, though. Seeing their loved ones die is the tragic of the Seraei and vampires per se, that's why I love to write vampire stories. To explore this tragic. Thank you, Lit for sharing your thoughts.
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Happy Birthday!
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The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Four – A Sleepless Night Something was wrong. The warmth beside me was gone. I tried to see in the dark, held my breath so I would hear him better. Nothing. Where was he? We had gone to bed together, which had been rather awkward, to say the least. I had helped him to the bathroom and back, then I’d gone in and when I returned, he was reading a book. I had said I was tired and, after a while, I pretended to sleep. Diarmad couldn’t have got up alone. He hadn’t eve
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This was very depressing. Stefan's self-esteem is so low, it's only sad. I will definitely read more. And hope for the best.
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Imagine me sitting on the bus, holding my phone and murmuring your poem with a clogged up nose. I got very interesting reactions. One was 'that's sad', the other 'lesson learned'. Funny was, I thought the same. A not so little poem, Puppi. I like it very much.
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I'm happy to see you're checking out another of my stories. Sadly I am a slow writer, tweaking and fiddling with each chapter until I like it. It would have been better if I'd waited until the story was finished before posting it, but I just couldn't wait any longer, lol. So, I'm writing as fast as I can. Thank you, Coastguard.
