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    Overexertion

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Overexertion

    Lol, yep, no biggie indeed. And Noel already dreams of drinking blood... I guess, he is allowed to freak. Just a little. Thank you, Puppi!
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    This is actually a good starting point for Noel: 'you need to learn how to coexist'. He also needs to live with the consequences of coexisting, as you said: 'Accepting that they know things about the King which cause him to act instinctively' A very good breakdown of the situation. Thank you, Def, for this great comment!
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    Lol well, you wake up, need to get out and don't want to do that naked. Err...thanks!
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    The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Six As soon as the McGills and their entourage had been escorted out by Landyn and Ronan, Diarmad turned from the door, barely able to hold on to the edge of his desk. “Noël,” he panted, suddenly deathly pale. I quickly took him by his arm, and led him back to his chair, where he collapsed. He was shivering violently by then, beads of sweat running down his face. “Please, Noël…,” he lifted his trembling hand, trying to reach me, but didn’t have the strength. He n
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    Interrogation

    Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Interrogation

    As nice as this intermezzo with Eustace is, I have a feeling it will be over soon. The Anderson story is getting thin, every question feels like it could be a trap.
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    Yep. I know what you mean. Wrapped up in fitting words.
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    I am curious. Did you ever say this aloud? To the right person? Or is this you ranting (impressively) inside?
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    Cool! Thanks, Tim!
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    Thank you for your kind words, Albert. I shifted those lines around quite a few times. I might try again.
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    Mission accomplished then, huh? Thank you, Parker!
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    I like it!
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    Kiss I can feel you watching the storm threatening to break free. Planets are colliding, giving birth to ideas. And they will try to cage them. Separate them again. And you stroll through the fields, laughing at their clumsy attempts.
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    Chapter 2

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I try to update once a month. It's a brand new story and even I don't know where it'll go. 'Will Beck be something new too?' My lips are sealed... Thank you, Puppi for supporting my stories with your great comments.
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    Chapter 2

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Chapter 2

    'What I enjoy most in all of your stories is how organic the characters and setting feel. This is no different. I could almost walk into Elijah's Way tomorrow.' That's exactly what I'm trying to do, Def! I'm so happy you said that! Thank you! Everyone seems to like Kinney. He just happened and I hope I can do him justice in the next chapters. I agree with you: Morgan needs a dog!
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    You are a very good observer, Peter. That's all I'm going to say besides thank you for this wonderful comment.
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    lol Yeah, this me trying my best not to bore my readers. I'm upping the ante here... Some more details yet to come before we get to the power struggle. Thank you for your continuous support, Puppi!
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    Thank you, Lit! Beware of the glue! lol Maybe it wouldn't be so bad if he'd lose it. Make everyone aware there is more to him than Tristan and Luis. But would he be a good mate for the King then?
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    Thank you, Cannd! I guess Noël is overwhelmed and needs to sort everything out first. He seems to be angry because everyone is happy to see someone else but not him. I can promise he'll get over it. I sometimes fear I'm putting too much stuff into this story. I'm happy you like my additions.
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    Sleepless Night

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Sleepless Night

    Thank you, Def. Your comment shows that Noel's ordeal comes across perfectly. What could I probably want more than a reader identifying herself with the MC and suffering through his problems? I'm so very glad you trust him, and me , to solve this satisfactorily. To invent the Seraei was more difficult than I thought. I expect to screw up with every chapter, contradict myself and some-such. Reading your taken by them and my other guys is extra motivating!
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    The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Five I was leaning against the bathroom door at 5.30 in the morning, sorting through my feelings. Angry. Yes. Make this bold, underlined and in Italics. Confused. What I always thought was me wasn’t me but some other people – dead people. Luis and Tristan. Inside me? I was only the glue? I don’t think so! I’m no glue. All this was giving me a headache. My sleep-addled brain needed caffeine. Badly. This wasn’t a problem I could solve quickly while hiding in the bat
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    I'm with the others and think Eustace knows there's something wrong. He help anyway. Eric can't relax, but at least he can live a little easier. As can I - for a while I guess.
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    Learning to Mend

    Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Learning to Mend

    It's hard to see how Stefan/Eric is always second guessing himself and never trusts in his own abilities, although he is a good worker. I hope he gets a break and some money before he has to move on. Good chapter.
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    The Letter

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Letter

    Thank you, Lisa! Sometimes I think of something he should think to make you laugh, lol. Did this make sense? Hahaha.
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    Work

    Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Work

    Come on, this is it. Right? Not another disappointment, please.
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    A Short Ride

    Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in A Short Ride

    Ha! Sometimes I just want to shake him! And I can only wonder about how blind people can be, whose job it should be to spot someone in need. Ugh.
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