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  1. Aditus

    The Letter

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Letter

    Lol, yes lots of information. That's why the chapter ended here. Thank you for your comment, Mike! I'm glad you want more.
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    The Letter

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Letter

    ...a bit unusual. Good! Thank you, avidreader!
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    The Letter

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Letter

    There will be some more explaining in the next chapters. But you're right, not easy to be Noel. Thank you, Puppi. I'm glad you'll keep reading.
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    The Letter

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Letter

    Well, the letter was a bit much and Noel needed a break to think. Thank you, dughlas for your comment. I'm glad you still like it.
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    The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Two It was a strange sensation, being hot and cold at the same time. Something warm and solid was in front of me, yet the back of my head felt cold. A shiver ran down my spine and I instinctively tried to get closer to the warmth. Until my brain booted, and I realized I was cuddling with someone lying beside me. I rolled quickly away. Pain spiked through my head, making me lie still. I panted through the hurt, until it became bearable, then slowly opened my eyes t
  6. Aditus
    My thoughts exactly. I like the surprise idea: everyone's on occasion, otherwise spotlight prompt stories.
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    Reunion

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Reunion

    Thank you for checking out the story, and leaving a review, AC! You borrow every phrase you want, being not a native speaker/writer, I find this very flattering. Oh yes, tall, guys in leather... I'll grab a cup of coffee now, and then post the next chapter.
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    Thank you, AC!!! Ha, you would find the blips. LOL One blip less now. Still fighting with apart, because I really like everything else in this line apart from apart. Anyway, I could have never done this without your explanations and the fine example poems. This was a great challenge and I had fun...well not the whole time, there might have been some cursing too.
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    :blush: Thank you, Peter! I'm not exactly the religious type, although I admire Michelangelo's work, which made me choose the sibyls. Before I wrote the poem, I did a little research and found them fascinating. *bows*
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    I loved my questions too. Jonah still is my favorite character, the comments and discussions he provoked are unforgettable. Thank you to the unknown questioner and to Dark.
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    This is fantastic, Dolores! I'd love to hear Michelangelo's comment.
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    Oh wow! Thank you, Gary! Can't wait to read yours.
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    Thank you, Dolores!
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    Thank you, Cole! That's the beauty in poetry, everyone sees different things. I'm glad it worked for you .
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    No pressure, but I'm curious to read yours. Thank you, Puppi!
  16. Aditus
    This is why I just can't kill my MCs.
  17. Aditus
    Five Sibyls Homer unmasked, the lying bard. And Troy destroyed, it was too late. Alex the Great’s heroics starred. And who will be this saviour mate? She didn’t say, we have to wait. Now, want to risk it, want some more? Go on, and step up to the plate Remember they predicted war. Before you ask, think long and hard, Enunciate, rephrase, restate. To question her, be on your guard. Her answers prophesize your fate You wouldn’t need something you hate, Unwanted truth you do abh
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    Spiders

    Aditus replied to Zombie's topic in The Lounge

    Nope. Not with those eyes. Just no!
  19. Aditus
    What now? Hello? Nelson and Eric? Lol. *goes and writes a mean cliffie* make that two as I have two stories going right now. Hrump. Okay, Rob really has amazing parents. Just wow.
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    So, everyone already mentioned how wonderful Rob is. *smug* Nelson might be shocked, or even disappointed at first, but he will think back at how he felt. Right? Right?!
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    The parents are sometimes a little über-perfect, but that could just be me. Rob on the other side...he is the perfect, slightly annoying, considerate brother and he is good at it. WOW. Um...yeah, team Rob and all.
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    'annoyingly protective and provocatively teasing' That's Rob, lol. Loved it. And what's with the cliffy again? I know I can just click 'next chapter' because I'm still so much behind...but the dogs want out for a walk and I need coffee.
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    Nice. And sweet. And Hot. And everything all over again. Still believable. Doing research on the internet can be fun also.
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    Let's just say they're very open minded. But why not. Right?
  25. Aditus
    You know, with those two I actually believe all the sweet hotness. Very good chapter, Tim. And not only because it was hot...
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