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The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Eleven Hurts. The slightest shift of my shoulders sends spikes of pain through my body, followed by waves of nausea. I need to calm down…breathe... But I can’t. There is… I push my tongue against a rubber ball blocking my mouth. I’m gagged! My heart beats faster. Cold sweat is running down my body. Cold. I can’t think, everything is so sluggish. My head hurts. Pictures flash through my mind… Everything slams back into my senses. Diarmad… he bit me… he fucking bit
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'a loophole for lifesaving measure' Perfect! You should definitely represent them, if it becomes necessary. Next chapter tomorrow. Sorry for the cliffie. Thank you for your review!
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It's very difficult to answer reviews and not reveal everything. So, yep, someone screwed up. They should have listened to Noël. They had a reason not to do this, though. ...to connect them. Hmmm, good thinking. But there is more. Thank you for you review, Def! Glad you liked the chapter and thought the breakfast scene was realistic. I won't tell you how long it took me to write it.
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Er...it actually is the continuation of the prologue. Are you referring to this sentence: ' Nothing has changed since last year, or ten years before, or...'? This means all the years before, when Noël visited Christmas mass with his grandmother. Diarmad completed his part of the mating ritual. Exactly. Why did he do this? Nope, no dying for lack of love when I'm the author... Thanks again for an astute review, Peter. I admit the prologue might be a bit confusing.
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Lit! Questions...will be answered next chapter. 'embracing their connection' made me smile. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and questions, Lit. It helps so much in getting a better writer.
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That's probably because 'All Categories' doesn't include poetry for whatever reason.
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So I can take my time to post the next chapter.
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Aaand The Holly and the Ivy by aditus
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Poetry Prompt 16 The Toy Makers Carol
Aditus commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 16 The Toy Makers Carol
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08:15 AM Redux black•out (ˈblækˌaʊt) n. 3. a. the extinguishing of all stage lights, as in closing a vaudeville skit or separating the scenes of a play. b. Also called black′out skit`. a skit ending in a blackout. 4. a. temporary loss of consciousness or vision. b. a period of total memory loss, as one induced by an accident or prolonged alcoholic drinking. 5. a brief, passing lapse of memory. Random House Kernerman Webster's College Dictionary, © 2010 K Dictionaries Ltd. Cop
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Lights On! Black out – Lights on! Seeing what is veiled By the dark. Black out – Spot on! Aiming at what’s dimmed By the dark. Black out – Wake up! Hearing what is hushed By the dark. Black out – Stand up! Unmasking what’s cloaked By the light.
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Romeo had an accident, and he is struggling on the brink of death. Julian never leaves his side.
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The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Ten Diarmad folded me into his arms. “I have been thinking… Seeing that being close to you has improved my condition unexpectedly, we could postpone the joining ritual, giving you more time to decide if you want this. Us.” “What do you want?” “What I want is irrelevant. I am Seraei. Your world was lifted off its hinges. I cannot imagine how it must be for you to learn of us, to come to terms with what is expected of you, but I can give you more time.” I couldn’
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G A's Newest Promising Author: Headstall
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
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Happy birthday, Andy!
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Happy Birthday, Gary! Have an amazing day!
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LISA! Ignore all the dbs old and new and have some fun today! Sorry, it looked soo good. Couldn't resist.
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Lol, poor Ronan. He probably wishes he could look through doors now. Yes, someone is very power hungry. They have to hurry if they want to overthrow Diarmad and they know it. Thank you, Def.
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Thank you for your comment, LadyDe! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Next chapter we're speeding up some, though.
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'That precognition is very handy.' Indeed. He might need it in the near future... Oh yes...getting closer still. Thank you for your outrage on Noel's behalf, Puppi.
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Yes, someone is very power hungry. Believe it or not, I dreamed of the doctor, he's so creepy. Thank you, Lit! Yes, next Monday...dum dum dum
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Thank you, Cole! You found an absolutely new angle to comment on the story! I love it. *hug*
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The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Nine Landyn made me show up in the kitchen at too-early o’clock six days a week. At least he had either a freshly made smoothie or protein shake waiting for me. Sometimes they were even green – kale or something – but still tasted surprisingly good and I only pretended to choke on them. He fell for it every time and launched into long-winded explanations about which ingredients he’d used and how healthy they were. Too funny. Then we went to the gym. Of course, Dia
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Listen to the 12th Piano Sonata... I never thought of that, you're right. Amazing. There will be a lot of change still, but you're right, Noël is getting there. And Ronan better be careful next time. Thank you, Peter. I always love to read about your thoughts.
